Naruto Fun Guy: Are You Keeping This Fun Alive?

I saw Chapter 139, what should I say? The author is a woman and her writing style is very delicate. This is one of the rare things I've seen in Tomato that has a more delicate writing style, and the writing is so interesting. The story written in the first 100 chapters was relatively smooth, but then from 100 to 139 chapters, I felt that the writing was a bit too detailed. The subtle feelings between them may not be touching enough for me as a grown man, and I may not feel the joy of reading. I may just be a person who has fun. There is also a collection of good sentences. The gentle breeze swept through the pages of the book, scattering the sunlight that came through the window, and slowly blended into the willows.

The author's logic is clear and the plan is meticulous. The bond between each vest and Naruto character is fascinating and strong. The writing occasionally has a twist to tease Black Zetsu and it is interesting. I like the way of describing the emotional bond between the characters very much! ! It's very natural and calm, like a normal way for ordinary people to gain friendship. Although the fate of each vest is limited, their fate has ups and downs, and their emotions and characters are very passionate. I remember the character and characteristics of each vest, and although they died, they all died well! Every critical moment, I am very curious about the ending, and I will sigh at the author's writing style and the plot that captures people's psychology. It's a very, very good book! There is no such thing as Long Aotian and inexplicable group pets. As a fan novel, it is the most comfortable and natural for me to read! Very, very good! ! ! [Laughing][laughing][please update]

It's not bad, the plot is acceptable, and it's enjoyable to watch. It's much better than the average Naruto fanfic, but the writing style needs to be improved.

The writing, the details, the foreshadowing. The characterization in particular is fantastic. It is really a rare good book about Naruto in Tomato. I just hope that the data will get better and better by the time this book is finished. It's better to evaluate it seriously. Originally, I only evaluated it in order to get a five-star rating. First of all, don't think about the title when reading this book, because the author is growing and so are the characters. Let's first evaluate the protagonist Yilong Sang. A turning point that impressed me deeply was that Yilong's mentality changed from playing games to a real world with flesh and blood. From the beginning, he was just for points to the later, he really made choices for what he wanted. He really grew up a lot. Both Ichiha Uchiha and Yeryuu showed a sense of humanity towards Jiraiya. Being powerful did not make him completely lose his original intention. Although he was always as playful as a child, he would always take responsibility for what he did. This is a charismatic guy, both real and fake. Secondly, the characters in the novel are all flesh and blood. It is not limited to the character of the original work. I think everyone can see the huge changes caused by the actions of the protagonist. This is what I like very much, because the character should be so vivid, not like the big idiot Ye Long who only follows orders! What a ruthless plot machine! Everyone is growing up, only Hei Jue was created awa Secondly, the author's carefulness and novel ideas It will not make readers feel the same and show a ninja world as it should be. There are also a lot of detailed foreshadowings, mostly used to create characters, and to provide certain explanations for behaviors that are inconsistent with the original work. I won't say much about the writing style, because I am a bad reader and don't have much ink. I can only say that the writing techniques in many places are very good at arousing the readers' emotions. Speaking of which, I really think that this book should definitely get a higher score. It is absolutely okay to get a 9.0 Score, but I think a large part of the reason is because the title and cover, as well as the content at the beginning, dissuade some people. But to be honest, I don't think Leziren fits the protagonist. Because the portrayal of the protagonist, to me, is a smart, sharp, gentle, and funny guy. In other words, someone who can be regarded as a trustworthy partner. I dare to say that if it weren't for the danger and the capital to resurrect people, Yilong would never have let Warring States F4 die so hastily. If it weren't for his various invincible abilities, he would be the most solid and trustworthy support in the eyes of his students and peers. I can roughly imagine the final ending. Everyone was alive, some cried, some laughed, and some couldn't laugh or cry. Everyone is cherishing the peaceful time of living. (Self-fantasy) Switching scenes amidst everyone's laughter is a dialogue with the system Yilong looked at Konoha on the Hokage Rock, or the world that had been unified exclaimed that it was great. At this moment, a group of Otsutsuki's problems had been solved, and there was no problem with Black Zetsu. Therefore, it was basically a certainty that the Rakuten system would become a decoration. But don't forget it's a system. The system doesn't only have Naruto's props, so it shouldn't be too much to be able to go to other worlds, right~? So in the XXX world, I will be very hot as soon as I step on the horse!

At first I was attracted by the author's humorous ability to make trouble, but then I started to use CP with real feelings. Each vest has a different personality, but every pair of CP is a masterpiece! The most commendable thing is the description of Hei Jue. From the beginning, he was a tool man whose mentality was manipulated by wool harvesting, and turned into an intelligent creature with self, thoughts and emotions. The writing is very delicate. I like Tobirama the most! The master-disciple team goes to Oita! Tobirama-sensei is really full of security, whether it is spiritual guidance, tolerance, indulgence, or ninjutsu research and development, prediction, and knowing the truth, the feeling of being both a teacher and a friend is great. It's unbelievable that this is the author's first article, and the future is promising.

I have read at least 60 Naruto books, and I really like this one. First, there is no female protagonist (at least there is no one so far, and there is no ambiguity, and the character portrayal is really good [admiration]). Second, it is a bit refreshing, and it is really funny to see Kuro Zetsu being defeated. Third, Although there is a knife, I like this knife very much. The more I read it, the more I get attracted to it [Shy] The fourth one is pretending to eat a spotted heart. Black Zetsu's reaction is really funny, some are funny and some are refreshing. All in all, this article is really good, but can the author make sows more productive? [Grieved] This little article is not enough [crazy]

It's a very good article. I originally came in with the hope of reading a mindless and enjoyable article, but it completely subverted my understanding. None of the foreshadowing in the early stage was wasted. The characters in the later stages are getting more and more full, and the writing is very good and very smooth. I don't like to wait for slow updates, so I stayed up late to read it after it was finished. The whole state is like an old woman who has become an immortal: Wow! I'm done! It's really a treasure and a good article, NND, it's not enough to read. After reading it, I still feel unfinished. The stamina is too great, and the protagonist's waistcoat and knife are a bit uncomfortable, but he is also very happy. The main theme is that he is in pain and happy! Brothers, it would be a loss if you don't read it. This fanfic is so good! I hope the author can write more follow-up, it's a very good article! ! ! (Although the name is a bit outrageous, I am really happy!)

The writing is good, the plot is good, and it's to my liking.

I cried to death, Ye Long is really (wailing) I like Ye Long's character, that kind of emotionless weapon, but showing very few emotions in front of the person he cherishes. I don't know how to say it, but the design of Ye Long's vest is so successful. I think the design is very sensible, and I really like this kind of character who obeys orders without hesitation but maintains his obsession with certain things or people. Ye Long is simply one of the few and relatively good character vests in my heart. Especially some of the actions and words that echo the words in the previous plot, I can only say that the author is very good and remembers it very firmly. Anyway, when I write my self-recommendation in the note, I always forget the plot. Sometimes I forget the foreshadowing laid before and forget some characters. As a result, the plot and characters of my self-recommendation are always vague and the plot mainly focuses on a miserable one (I am so damned. JPG) So the author deserves to be praised, this must be praised, I like this (like) (Secretly, I also secretly set up a small window for myself to write on the notes. This is the cool persona!) Let me borrow a little bit from Ye Longjun's character here and quietly code a message in the memo (it's definitely not Ye Longjun himself). Again, this character is cool! ! [Love][Love][Anger]

I really love this kind of fun person. The last time I read a novel about time travelers and fun people doing things was the last time. It feels really good to have everything under control. Many plots are really completely unexpected and feel unexpected and reasonable. I also like the character of the protagonist, but mainly I think the plot is good.

As a person who enjoys playing, I am very impressed by the clever writing of the brainless Teddy. It is rare to have a plot flow, focus on the main line, and not engage in mentality, play games and vests, support the author to continue writing, five-star praise

Overall, it's very good. I personally think it's the best Naruto novel I've ever read. Different from the fast pace and cool writing routines of other novels, the delicate emotional descriptions in this later period feel ready for publication, especially for Sarutobi and Danzo. This kind of unbiased writing is really comfortable to read. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the small disadvantages. There is something very strange in the later stage. Tsunade's love is a bit sudden. In fact, there is no problem in explaining this. The biggest problem is how Tsunade has the mentality of "let Ye Long die". This sentence directly ruins the character. The love brain is not such a love brain.

A very good-looking fanfic of Naruto! In the early stage, the main character is a surgeon without caring about life or death (whether it is in the book or mine). In the later stage, although it is more routine, the content is funny [heartfelt] There is no heroine (I prefer the one without a heroine [blowing kiss]) There is a knife (it's quite big) There is no obvious poisonous spot, so you can eat it with confidence [when you are full]

It's rare to see a well-written Naruto novel. The love, friendship and family bonds depicted are very delicate, and they are not obtrusive at all with the plot. When I first read the title, I thought it was another mindless routine novel. I didn't expect it to be so good. The villains in the original novels are also well written. It feels like I have really seen another possibility for them. Same, it's really great, even the knife hurts. After reading it, I went for a walk around Old Ford and didn't see that Sanchuang was a bit wilted. I felt that I still had more to say. It's a very treasured fanfic. The author's writing is very good, the plot is well connected, and the characters' psychological logic is all right. I'm looking forward to seeing your new work.

It's very interesting and fun. I read it in one go. I basically recovered all the foreshadowing in the early stage. I saw a dead memory attacking me in the back. The bullet from the past hit me right between the eyebrows. The plot is so fun. It's great to unify the ninja world! Infrastructure fanatics! Crazy experiments are great! (Hey) Some of the character arrangements are really eye-catching. The infrastructure maniac of the Kakuzu ninja world really made me laugh to death. The naturally dull Sakumo's Yumu language really made people's eyes darken and they fell over with laughter. It's really hard to catch Xiaoyun. The conflict between Sarutobi Hiruzen and Danzo's personalities and the resolution of the plot are really great... They both made mistakes, but they are both correcting themselves and reflecting on each other. Under the influence of the trust of those around them, they are moving towards a better future and becoming a better version of themselves. It's great. I really like the author's handling of the characters. The protagonist who slowly develops feelings from a fun person, the three generations who are encouraged by their elders to correct them on the right path, the black Zetsu who gradually develops self-awareness and his own emotions in the companionship, and the generation of Kakashi and Naruto who have basically not encountered any excessive hardships since birth and can grow up freely. Although there are really many swords (although they are basically all in the sword ninja world), the ending is really good. I like the happy ending w everyone is fine, the future is unlimited, and happiness lasts forever.

Yilong originally entered this world with the mentality of a player, but as the process of changing his heart from heart to heart, he established bonds with many people. He developed feelings for these people, and became soft-hearted again and again. From the game world to a real person I became a part of it, and the happy ending at the end made my eyes water. Everyone had a happy ending o(╥╥)oo(╥╥)o. It is the most, most, and most beautiful of all the Naruto fics I have seen! ! ! Super cozy! ! It's just that sometimes there's a knife in the candy, and there's candy in the knife...

I like it very much. Hei Jue is so funny. He is so confused by the male protagonist's tricks.

The book is unique among Naruto fandoms, and there is nothing wrong with its quality. You can also see the growth of the protagonist and the author in the book. As a first book, it is already very good. As a fan, in fact, a lot of content has been changed. There are many personal designs and new developments by the author, and there are no loopholes in the changes. The protagonist may not be liked by some people due to personality issues in the early stage. Later, the author also adjusted the protagonist's personality to make it more comfortable to watch. It's late at night, I'm so sleepy, I'm writing whatever comes to my mind, so I'll take a rest first

Not the original work, but the writing is superb! ٩(๑ᵒ̴̶̷͈᷄ᗨᵒ̴̶̷͈᷅)وGreat! The more you get to the later stage, the more intertwined emotions you can feel. Although it is written for a happy person, it kept making me cry. The happy ending is really great! ୧⍢⃝୨ It would be really nice not to have Tosa Ming, but I feel a little regretful that I didn't write about it. •́‸ก But! It's great that everyone lives together happily and has a bright future! (｡◝ᴗ◜｡)

It's so exciting. The protagonist goes from being a fun person in the game to gradually integrating into the world. Everyone has a happy ending. To be honest... (Sniffs) (wipes tears) (shows perseverance) The author writes so well ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

The next day after reading it, I came over to write a review. The ugly words are spoken at the beginning, but they only represent my personal opinion: in fact, the routine feels a bit rigid later on, and it is completely predictable. As for the ending, I felt it was quite rushed. I thought it was going to be shattering (), but I didn't expect it to end like this, that way, and then it would end peacefully, although the happy ending at the end would be great too. But it is obvious that the subject matter of this book is very novel, at least you cannot find the same type in Tomato. Moreover, the author's writing style and logic are both online, and the characterization of the characters is also relatively vivid, so the sense of immersion is quite strong. If you read carefully, you can actually find that the author likes to use foreshadowing, including the change in the protagonist's mentality. The author will mention it intentionally or unintentionally, so that the later changes will not be too abrupt. Coupled with the "fun person" setting, the plot is actually constantly reversing, reversing, and reversing, so there is no need to worry about being too dull. All in all, it's not a bad experience. I'm afraid that if I walk through this village, I won't find this store. I highly recommend it. By the way, this author is actually the most active one I have ever seen (?)

It's super good-looking. I think this is the best fan fiction I've ever read. I'm a big fan of beauty, rape, and misery, and I also like role-playing. Moreover, the author has very well inherited the definition of "friend" from the old thief Kishibei, which made me feel very happy. I also drew a little bronze figure. I hope Mina likes it. Mina, you can read the author's other book🥺💍 which is also pretty good, but I feel like I'm being outscored...

I stayed up all night watching it addictively. The emotional description is particularly delicate, and the character design is also very cool. The protagonist is not a fun-loving person without emotion. On the contrary, he gradually develops feelings while getting along with each other. The ending is he. Recommended entry The rhythm of the plot is very accurate, and the ending is just right enough that you can watch it in one go (actually, I may be the only one who is so addicted) without feeling bored. Although it is he, the withdrawal reaction after watching it is still very severe (😭) Fried chicken is good to watch The Last Praise: An Emotional Portrait of the True God.

OMG this is so delicious. . The Big Mac really looks good. . Come and see. All emotions are so heartwarming 🥺. I feel like I want to read the original novel again after reading it. It's really, really beautiful. I highly recommend it. The character design of each vest is very delicious, and the interaction between the vest and the ninjas is also very delicious. The front of each vest is particularly cozy, while the back is sharper. There are a lot of death escape segments. The protagonist has transformed from a human form at the beginning of the game to a part of the Naruto world, and the protagonist's growth is also touching. I have to eat this! The writing is very good, and there are many scenes that indirectly present the characters' emotions and some contradictory plots, which are also very good. From the creation team all the way to Narasa's predecessor, Kakashi Obito, the protagonist has influenced a large part of the development of the original plot of the world, and also affected the personalities of some characters. But I think it's very reasonable. Looking at it from the current perspective, it's a bit out of place, but I accept it very well, because everything seems to have come naturally, which is so heart-wrenching🥲 It must be a coincidence that this skill is working🥺🥺. Otherwise, why do I like this book so much?

The writing is really good and gentle. Although the protagonist is not merciless even when he shoots a knife, in the end it is the happy ending of all the resurrections. It is my favorite ending plot. Everyone lives on without deception and hatred, and everyone can meet at the end. What I like the most is the relationship between the protagonist and Tobirama, it's so great. The author is also the first person I have seen who talks about Hei Zetsu in detail, and even enriches Hei Zetsu's image without making him look like a character. The game is really high, and the cp beats me to death. All in all, highly recommended

Super pretty! The author's writing style is also very good, and each character, even the vest, is very vividly described. In fact, I was completely turned off by the title at the beginning, but now I am almost watching the finale, and some of them are reluctant to watch it, hahaha. Poor Black Zetsu for 3 seconds

Business batch and fun people are the best combination. Congratulations to everyone for achieving the goal of saving the world. The advantage is that the ups and downs of the plot are not boring, and it is very enjoyable to watch various vests and hair knives torturing Black Zetsu, and the reading experience is very good. Dream Master also allowed everyone to resolve many contradictions in the original work and move towards a perfect ending without any high blood pressure or thunderstorms. A slight flaw may be that there is not much characterization for the protagonist. I still can't remember the original name of the protagonist who passed through the game and what he originally did. I can't understand his motivation for going back and whether he went back in the end. But the flaws do not hide the good points. It is highly recommended for those who enjoy watching Naruto movies with happy endings√

The male protagonist's perspective, the writing is very delicate, and the transformation of the plot from the Warring States Period is basically logical. The protagonist's mentality in the story has changed due to the aborigines, which is also one of the highlights of this article. The emotional changes of Black Zetsu are wonderful, and it also reflects the arc of the character. Good reviews. I look forward to the author's next book [Like]

Alas, after reading it, I felt a little melancholy and felt like I was in a literary drought again. How can I put it? The writing is very good and the ending is good. The protagonist is a new generation of dream masters. Even Black Zetsu has realized his dreams. Only Kaguya's injured world has been achieved (bushi The ones who touched me the most were Ye Long, Jiraiya and Black Zetsu (I don't know what to say about that one), cb Xiang Saigao (tremor) Okay, it's still a little regretful. I'm actually looking forward to the plot of this book where Jiraiya meets the original. I hope the author can write a side story like this. Please.

Yilong and Tobirama are so in love with each other, and who would have thought that Tobirama actually knew that Yilong did all this, but he didn't say anything and let Yilong trust his instincts and do it. It was really gentle. [Shy] See you in the next book.