Naruto: Konoha Chiu, Tsunade Calls Me Brother!

It looks good. I wonder if Tobirama will always target the protagonist?

Come on, author! Not enough.

Yes, there are no less than 20 books about Naruto. When it comes to Naruto in Tomato, the best one is My Brother Seems to be Madara. This book was written in the Warring States Period. It is very good and well-founded. There were many books during the Konoha period, but there are only a few high-quality ones. In my opinion, your book is already very good (I just started reading it). A small suggestion. The protagonist's kaleidoscope, I think it can be written as divine power, because this ability is too buggy. In my opinion, it is the strongest kaleidoscope because its functionality is too complete. You can read the official review Evaluation of "The Book of Formation" (right eye): Beyond cause and effect and the horizon, the eyes in the divine realm! Evaluation of "The Book of Masters" (left eye): Different dimensions in the field of vision, extremely confusing space pupil technique! The emptiness in the heart and the nothingness of reality are composed of divine power! (The hollow in the heart constitutes an indefensible defensive power, and the nothingness of reality constitutes an indefensible offensive power.) And this is Kamui, a great ability that is invincible among Naruto. Even in my opinion, opening a kaleidoscope is very simple. You only need to let yourself or others release a continuous illusion on yourself to simulate Obito's life. As for the disadvantages, the protagonist's fairy body may have surpassed Hashirama. There is no need to worry about going blind. Even if you are blind, you can use the kaleidoscope of the mirror to form eternity. It is also very simple. From genetic DNA The brother above can turn the protagonist into a mirror (Senju Tobirama, this old six is definitely capable). In this way, the divine power of Susanoo can be opened. And you must know that this target is the Six Paths, so there is no need to worry about the chakra. After all, the chakra of the protagonist at the age of 12 is equivalent to the eight tails. Of course, this is just my personal suggestion. Keep up the good work and write more chapters. @Bert

I really like the overall plot of this book. Although the ability to write about the protagonist later made me a little embarrassed, but other than that, everything is fine. This book is probably about to be finished (=^▽^=) Looking forward to the author's next book o(*^▽^*)o

It's too short, please update it! [Pinch][pinch][pinch]

Come on, keep working hard

Finally, Tsunade and Pigfoot are getting together

It's okay, not too over the top, and quite healthy.

If possible, I would like to inherit Hashirama's wooden shield.

Will the relationship between Tsunade and the protagonist stage a Naruto version of En no Sora?

I finished reading it before I knew it. The protagonist's combat power was not well described, the battle scenes were not well written, and there were too few updates.

The author arranged more scenes for Tsunade, after all, this is a single female protagonist

The writing is very good. The horn on the forehead has turned into a weapon, and the samsara eye has been opened, but I don't know what it is. It stands to reason that the pupil technique that masters nine attributes and time and space is the six-path sage form of the nine magatama.

The book is quite interesting and the content is very rich. Come on, author, come on!

When will the protagonist be able to truly take on the role [Sending Hearts]

The writing is very smooth and there are no poisonous points. I just don't know if the author's updates are stable [eating melon]

Although there is not much description of the protagonist's strength acquisition and research process, in terms of plot, it is definitely much better than other fans who write pretentious slaps in the face and classic routine plots.

It looks okay, but I personally think it would be better if the protagonist's performance in the first battlefield could be more proactive. As the commander-in-chief, the protagonist's performance on the battlefield, except for the later stage, in the early and mid-term, is to watch his subordinates die. The key is that the protagonist can reduce casualties by taking a little initiative. In the previous foreshadowing, the protagonist is about to touch the ceiling of Konoha's combat power, and is also feared by the Second Hokage. However, the combat power shown is not as strong as the foreshadowing.

Good. Personally, it doesn't feel particularly passionate, but overall it looks smooth. There are many small changes made by the author himself. You don't have to watch the Naruto anime to understand it and you can quickly accept the new setting (because I haven't watched it yet)

Will Tobirama be written down by the author?

I hope Beiliuhu will become the protagonist's apprentice and have more of a presence. No, something will happen to the children born from the marriage of the author's brother and sister.

2024.1.19 Another book that I have kept for a long time. I personally think it is quite interesting. People will eventually be trapped in their lives because of the things they cannot obtain when they are young, and they will eventually solve their life's confusions because of one moment, one scene, and one thing. In the end, Zhuang Zhou dreamed of a butterfly, and he could not distinguish between illusions. Even if he is a spectator, it will be difficult to calm down... Thanks to the author.

I'm very fascinated by it now, it's really good to watch [laughs]

It's so slow. The author can't update it 10 times a day [smile][smile][smile]

It's possible that Thousand Hands Tobirama is not dead. This book is interesting.

After all, it's just a dream

After reading it, I have three conclusions: . . . Note: Huangliang Yimeng.

If there is no poison in the back, the good work will have been finalized. Come on!

It's really good, very pretty. It's just that the ending is a bit abrupt.

The writing is very good, the author is great, come on! [Blowing kiss]