Traveling Across the Heavens Simultaneously

Personally, I suggest you finish writing a plot in one world and then move to another world, but don't make one copy too long. Have you figured out the main plot of your book? You are talking about the unlimited flow of Tongchuan, not the online game Three Kingdoms. Your online game Three Kingdoms is so long that you write about an irrelevant person. As long as you are a book with this theme, that's fine. The problem is that you are traveling through 99 worlds at the same time. Tmd writes about seven or eight or a dozen things that have nothing to do with the main plot. Who wants to read what you wrote about Nightfall? We want to see some of the sexy moves this protagonist performs at the same time. It's not about the Three Kingdoms war between your two protagonists. Originally, your prologue to Chapter 1 was quite amazing, but what you ended up doing here was a mess. Originally, you, Hokage, had been just sitting there. After all, your protagonist is the reincarnation of Pangu who was tortured and killed by a bunch of systems, but what on earth are you writing about in the online game Three Kingdoms? The same time-traveling game has been changed to a two-protagonist version of the Three Kingdoms Fighting for Hegemony. Have you figured out what everyone wants to see?

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It's a good book. For some people, it has absolute strength, but it just sticks around. It's very unpleasant to watch, but brothers, think about it, the way of heaven in the game Three Kingdoms has at least the seventh level! Think about the prehistoric way of heaven, annihilate the genocide and annihilate the genocide, trap and kill, this must not be exercised with caution

I really like reading this type of book. It's well written, but the number of words is too few. Good luck to the author [Like]

It's incredible that the protagonist in other worlds is so plum It doesn't look like the Zhu Tianwen who wrote it.

Not much to say, I just like to watch it

Three views are worth five stars, but it's a pity that there is no ten-star rating

As long as your shoes don't fall apart, it'll be fine. I wish you good luck soon,

Not bad, just lustful and lustful. Just call it a day, stop developing emotionally, and then engage in war or something like that. Get some war hammers.

So far so good

Write well, come on