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It seems pretty good now. The previous paragraph about raising Xia Qing and Zhi Yuan was a little bit poisonous and would dissuade some people, and the characters appearing now are basically female. Of course, these are secondary. The main reason is that the title of your book is not bright. If I hadn't been short of books, I would not have had the desire to enter this book when I saw this title, but all in all it is still good. Come on, author! Come on! Looking forward to future exciting content

Now it feels like the progress is too fast. Does Apocalypse even know the background of the protagonist? What's so special about a talking companion? The Great Sage didn't remind him, so the phaseless letter should not have been exposed. It should be that the companion spirit that was born to talk has something special and has its own divine status? Well, now that the pictureless slips have been exposed and only the protagonist doesn't know about it, I'm really convinced!

It's okay to read, but the part about mother and daughter could be done in a different way. It's too fast to raise them directly. Although they share hardships, they don't necessarily have much real affection. It can be said to be "temporary stay". Promote feelings through gratitude. Otherwise it feels very poisonous

Come on, it's okay for now

Both the battle plot and the emotional line are very good. This kind of slowly developing emotions is rare and rare. ，"[][][][][]

Come on, the author, I haven't found a book with a great fighting style for a long time. I fight when I have to fight, and the daily writing is very beautiful. When will I transform into a wolf-eared girl [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration], and the snow dumpling, cute, I can write more about the snow dumpling and the white wolf. Come on, author.

It's very nice to read. Overall, the article is well written and the overall pace is very gentle. The transition between paragraphs is also very harmonious, without any abrupt feeling. Keep up the good work, author! Overall performance was good. (Also, what are the author's plans for another book? Will he not update it?)

Five stars, isn't it worth it?

@ So how old is the protagonist now?

Just looking at the settings is very confusing, although the front may seem very strenuous and may also be boring. But once the protagonist heroic spirit comes out, it will be very attractive. Also, there are many girls😃

There are not many writers who are careful anymore.

A very good book, keep it up!

So far, it's ok. It's a comfortable book to read.

The story is wonderful, but what about the author?

I am currently reading books, and I have only seen entries into competitions. So far, the author's writing is quite good. Too few people have commented on it. I will give it a five-star support and I will analyze it after reading it.