Junior Brother, Why Are You Looking at Me Like This?

It's really good-looking. Anyway, the male protagonist is not a yandere, so it feels a bit juvenile. Ah, the female protagonist is not too yandere either. I really like the characters of the male and female protagonist. The protagonist is not a yandere, but you write the supporting character as a yandere, right? The heroine is also quite powerful, not like someone who can be bullied, and there are a lot of CPs in the book, which are worth reading, even in the serialization [crying] [crying with laughter] [puckering]

Very pretty, I like it. I really like the character design of the male and female protagonists. Oops, I just like to watch sweet love. I hope the author can make the two of them fall in love sweetly for a longer time [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

In terms of character design, I really like the senior sister and junior brother. The characters of several protagonists are quite full, but I don't particularly like the line between Xuan Mu and Tang Xinxin. For me, this line has some flaws, but not too much. Personally, I feel that Xuan Mu, as the behind-the-scenes boss, has too little writing. It would be much better to connect his past and connect with Tang's emotions. And in terms of plot, the story line is relatively complete, although I think a lot of it was cut off in the second half because of poor data. I can understand it. I personally suggest that the line between Zhongzhi and Yue Ling (called Yue Ling, right? I have a bad memory, I forgot) is quite interesting. It should be quite interesting to intersperse their emotional experiences. Cai, adding five or six chapters together will make the images of these two people more vivid, and Zhongzhi is basically a background board in the article. Yue Ling personally feels that this character will be very colorful and popular if she is fleshed out, but because there is too little writing, what she does and her emotional expression make me feel a bit disconnected. Oh, yes, another point is that I think a few transitions are a bit too abrupt. It feels like there is still plot that can be added, but because the author did not write an outline or had no inspiration, the transitions are a bit abrupt, but overall it is good. Personal opinions do not represent absolute opinions. Just take a look at what is useful and don't take it personally. I look forward to better works.

2023.10.10.1：34 Finished reading! Throw flowers! This is the first time I have seen this form of time travel. It is very novel and I also like the setting of the heroine and the hero, but the system is terrible. Although the Lord God confessed everything to Wen Ning later, I really cannot forgive the deletion of people's memories! Then, I don't understand their relationship line a bit. I spent the early part of the book writing about what the female protagonist does and what the male protagonist only occasionally participates in. Why can't the two of them kiss just because of an accident and the male protagonist likes the female protagonist? There is also the emotional line between Run Xin and Tian Ji. I really want to see it. Why not write it? There are also Chi Jing and Yao Xia, I think they will have a follow-up. Then there are Xu Mi and Shi Wan who I am also very frustrated with! And Xuan Mu and Tang Xinxin, should they write another extra story? I haven't written it yet. He's resurrected. I actually like Xuanmu better than the male protagonist. He said threatening words, but he didn't actually hurt her at all. Apart from biting her mouth open, everything else was fine! Probably because no one has taught him what love is since he was a child, that's why he treats the people he likes like that, but the way he talks and doesn't mean what he means is really cute.

To be honest, the article is generally good. But why is the extra episode so short? There are some pitfalls that seem to have been filled in but not filled in yet. The article was written a bit too fast. I think it can be slower. ——March 3, 2024

There are no cliches, and the protagonists all have happy endings. But I want to know why the villain did all the bad things from beginning to end [thinking], and why there was a good ending in the end. On the contrary, if Senior Sister Shi, who was very kind and had a good personality, died, I thought you, the author, would also give Senior Sister Shi a way to resurrect her (but without [anger][anger]). In the end, it was the protagonists and the supporting characters who achieved He, and the NPCs were not given a way to survive at all (ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhft off a good ending for us senior sister Shi and I still blame the CP of senior sister Shi and senior brother Xu [crying] [crying] [crying]') But the author's writing is generally very good, and the next part can be improved [exploration]

It's good to read, I just like this feeling. I read it in one day. This is the second book I found in Tomato that I like [crying][crying][crying] It looks good and feels great [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

The young master of the Demonic Clan was never revealed at first. I guessed the character and even doubted the male protagonist. But then I got such a big twist and he was the only character I didn't guess.

It's okay, the two protagonists are okay, but the second male character Xuan Mu is from the demon clan, killed their senior sister Shi and so on, and is still alive and well in the end, and still with Tang Xinxin, this is something I can't understand.

I like this article very much. There are no tricks. The person the heroine likes is the villain, the son of the Demon Lord, but a junior fellow student. Also, in the end, the Demon Lord fell in love with another junior sister. Although this junior sister sealed him, they still got together in the end. It's beautiful.

Encounter in another world When I try to make things easier There is already someone who is willing to protect me silently I am very happy in this life Because there is you and you

It's really interesting but very short. I like the heroine's character very much, and Xuantang is really good. But the ending of the two of them is not very good. Can the author publish a book [laughs]

A woman who travels back in time meets the junior male protagonist, who is the original passer-by. She first guessed the second male lead, and then guessed the hidden boss, but neither of them were the same. That's junior brother.

Well, the plot is quite interesting. It feels like everyone's ending is okay. The female protagonist is very clever and a bit cute, while the male protagonist is jealous, sometimes a bit like a little puppy, sometimes a bit like a big bad wolf. It feels like they just flirted with each other after they got together. I think it's pretty good-looking, and their relationship is relatively stable. Very pretty.

It's quite interesting, but the pace is a bit fast. The male and female protagonist's characters are also very likable. I just want to see Tang Xinxin and Xuan Mu get together, but I feel sorry for the senior sister. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female character is really good. Overall, this book is pretty good. If you don't like reading long stories, I recommend this book.

Don't let the rating put you off, this article is actually super good! The novel, which is just over 200,000 words long, has a complete structure and creative routines. The author's writing is fluent, and the story progresses at a brisk pace without delay. The emotional line of the male and female protagonists develops naturally and becomes sweeter as it goes on. The ending is perfect, and the extra chapter makes Xiao Jiujiu in the readers' hearts. Looking forward to more works from the author🤩 I particularly like the character of the heroine in this book. She is neither flamboyant nor ostentatious. She actively improves herself as the plot develops. She is brave and resourceful, and she is not coy or pretentious when it comes to relationships. The male protagonist is also very lovable. He has good looks and strong military skills. After falling in love with the female protagonist, he looks for opportunities to express his feelings. He is not arrogant or paranoid. After reading the ending of the vicious male supporting actor's misfortune, I actually felt a little happy~~

The content is pretty good

It looks great and gives the author a call! Come on come on!

It's not bad, it can kill some time, overall it's quite sweet, but the language skills are not enough, and many descriptions are too plain!

The family members are really very good-looking and worth recommending. Everyone has their own character. At first, I thought it was the old cliche of the male protagonist bearing a blood feud, being a demon king or a demon king, but this is not the case. He doesn't have so many grudges and sorrows, and he doesn't have too many blood feuds. Although the story is very short, each character has his own story. Whether it's Xuan Mu and Tang Xinxin or Wen Ning and Si Du, they all have their own lives and are really worth watching.

In fact, overall, the writing of this book is quite good, but I personally feel that the villain still has a chance to be resurrected, but the people he harmed have no explanation at all. I just feel that my heart is unbalanced. Then some people say that they hope that the villain will be resurrected. I think the villain is very close to that Xin CP, which is really touching. I also like to knock, but your love is based on other people's lives, and I can't stand it. Anyway, I admit that the writing is quite beautiful. The only thing that makes me criticize is the resurrection of the villain. In fact, there are some small problems, but this is the biggest problem [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Xuan Mu is the young master of the demon world and the big boss behind the scenes. 🍓🍑🍇🍋🍐🍜🍤🍯🌽🌮🍫🥛🍭🍬🍼🍷🎂🥟🥨🥠🥐🥮🥝 🥭🥑🥜🥑🥂💊🧂🚰🥤🥘🥚🥥🥝🍄🥭🥑🥜🥓🥔🥬🥕🥦🥗🥙

The logic and plot of the article are quite good and worth reading, but the redemption of the villain boss is a bit stiff. Although CP is good, please respect innocent people. Moreover, Tang's original character design is a bit different from the later love brain, which is not in line with the character [shy] [shy] But I still like this big article. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write a better article [blowing kiss] ending with flowers [sending heart] [sending heart]

Very beautiful, I like it very much [love] [love]

Why is the rating so low? It's so beautiful. It would be nice if there were more extras.

I definitely think the ending of Tang Xinxin and Xuanmu could be better [shy]

Very good looking, the heroine is very positive hehe

Nice looking. I like it.

I like Xuanmu and Tang Xinxin

This really suits me! ! Love it! ! The characters and characters are very good, but I hope it's not a long series [crying]. After reading a little bit, I found out that it's a series and I'm waiting for the update to be completed. I've already collected it and waited for it to be finished. I hope it's a short story. Hahaha [crying] I love both the characters and the plot! Come on!