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Sister, my brother has nothing to eat. Come on more. Really beautiful

A small suggestion: the big story line is too long. I hope it can be shortened in the future. Now is the fast-paced era. Seeing the series of numbers in the catalog will inevitably make me unable to persevere (for me) Also, the big letters are really sweet! I hope you can write better and better🥰

It's very interesting. I hope the protagonists will recognize their own hearts soon and be sweet together. Cheers (灬ꈍ εꈍ灬)

Generally speaking, the plot is relatively long. If the plot is shortened and shortened, the flavor will be better. The part about revenge on the family has 30 chapters, which is hard to finish in one sentence. The protagonist would look better if he had a more distinct personality, and the plot is too bland and has no twists and turns. I hope the author can improve it, come on😊

It looks good [sends my heart] but I really hate the yellow button [crying]

Super pretty. Although it was a quick trip, both parties had no memories, and it felt like they were destined to be you for the rest of their lives. Both of them struggled and suffered, and finally chose to hold each other's hands. No one is just a dog licker and gives blindly. The system has very little presence. The story is smooth and not cliche, and the two of them are not completely in love. Highly recommended!

This book is very beautiful from the beginning. No matter which world or place it is in, it suits my heart. There was something wrong in the middle. The writing collapsed in that world. The protagonist died immediately. I couldn't understand the rest. The author stopped updating for a while. After the author came back, I really couldn't understand every picture. Now I slowly started to understand it. Why didn't it happen now in the later stages... It wasn't like this in the early stage either. [What] The emotional line is not like it is now. [What] [What]

[Understood] [Understood] I am very optimistic about the future of this book. I believe that on this Tomato novel website, this book will definitely make a breakthrough! (My level can only go so far. I can't bear to write any more [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly])

The first world is a bit long and can be considered a slow time travel. There was too much ink about the supporting villains and it was a bit annoying, so I skipped it. The scenes between the protagonists are quite decent. After skipping the nonsense about the villain, I still have the desire to read on. The emotional scenes are also okay, but there is less meat and the villain is too much. I hope it can be a little simpler in the future. I like the character design, please give it a thumbs up, author.

I am satisfied, as expected, height cannot completely determine the height [laughing]

At 2:13 in the morning on August 2, 2023, I finished reading the first Little World. It was really great. I am really picky about reading novels, but this one did not make me feel uncomfortable at all. I read this many times before reading it (looking for novels when I was in a book shortage). Big cheers for the author! ! ! Make sure you have enough rest time and update more [flying kisses][flying kisses][flying kisses][flying kisses][flying kisses][flying kisses]

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It's pretty cool, keep up the good work! (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

Very nice, I hope the author can update a few chapters a day @

The author's writing is really super good---the plot and character design are particularly in line with my wishes!!! Keep up the good work, the author~~~ I love you, the author! @ [Flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It's really good-looking. I especially like the male protagonist. The character creation is perfect. I hope the author's world will be better in the future.

It's super good-looking, but the author is great, please update more, it's not enough, not enough at all [crying]

The plot is novel (⑉°з°)-♡ The characters are very vivid and the story is complete Very nice, big. I write according to my own ideas. In fact, there is very little candlelight. I just believe that you can write well and it's pretty good. If you don't like it, just leave. I like it very much. I really like big writing.

It's really well written, and even for someone like me who is very picky when reading books, it feels like it's very consistent with what I'm hiding in my heart. Aesthetics.

The article is good, but when I read it, I was speechless. [Aggrieved] [Aggrieved]

Very well written! Can't get enough! [Shy][Shy][Shy][Adored][Admired][Admired][Admired]

It's very interesting. The main reason is that this book is not restricted by gender. I think it's quite good for the senses.

The writing is very good. I think the plot line is very good. The logic is relatively complete and detailed, and the emotional line is also relatively delicate. Maybe I prefer this kind of plot line and emotional line that are more delicate. The interface of the Republic of China was really tearful [I almost cried], but the endings of the later worlds felt rushed, and it felt like they were gone after halfway through.

Uh, everything is okay, except for the emotional aspect. I can't say how I wrote it (I've only watched the first world and haven't finished it yet). It's very realistic → a bit "draggy". It's pretty good. If it wasn't placed on Tomato➕ the writing could be better expressed. It's pretty good.

It's okay, but each chapter is too long

Why don't you write Zhouzhou QAQ? Ah ah ah, I'm going to die. Only you can be better if you update, ah ah ah ah! I beg you a lot [face covering]

I still prefer the original first version. I think I watched it when I was in the first grade of junior high school. That version really blew my mind. It's okay now.

When I first read the Republic of China chapter, I had a bad premonition. After all, everyone said that the Republic of China was all about be. Unexpectedly, it really made me cry to death. It was really be. From the beginning of this article, the chapters are messed up. I hope the author will fix it as soon as possible. I look forward to the following plot.

Hehehe is very beautiful [shy], the author's writing is good, but there are a lot of typos in the article [makes a face], come on!

This book suits my taste, please give me a lot of support from the author [Send heartfelt thanks]