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This book feels quite good. In terms of plot, in addition to daily life, it also adds cultivation of immortality. Although it mainly writes about daily life, it is not boring. I feel that the author's writing style is also quite good. It is a good astringent transformation novel. [Eat melon] (Hope it doesn't end badly) [Eat melon]

I haven't rated it yet, but I started with five stars and then the popularity increased. As a long-time fan, I just gave it a low rating to prevent the book from being blocked [laughing] My sister's writing was a bit abnormal and contrived, and it felt very hentai anyway [laughing]

I just watched it for a while and thought it looked very good! Then I don't know why the rating is so low? I looked at the people who rated it. They are all four- and five-stars! Why are the ratings so low? I think some people may see the ratings of this book and dissuade them.

Prison, it's pretty good-looking, and there are a lot of prisoners, guns, and sewing machines [laughs evilly]

It feels a little awkward, but it looks good It was a little awkward at first, but it gets better once you get used to it

A good-looking lily novel.

How to say it? I have read a lot of novels about Transformation Lily. Not only this software, but I also searched and read it on other software. The quality of this book written by the author is considered to be of the highest quality. I am by no means a Toha, so I ask the author to work hard and update it 500 times a day! ! I believe you can do it!

It's nice to look at, but the card text is really stuck.

I like this book very much (✪▽✪)

I'll give you 5 stars. Don't ask. Just ask because all the books in my bookshelf are given 5 stars.

I found a pair of lolita lovers. Very beautiful, big

Check it out, if the author publishes a new book in the future, please give me a personal reminder (please)

Things go a little too smoothly. Read more transformation stories.

The author deserves to be you, you really know how to write books,

I think it looks pretty

Come on, diligent author [laughing evilly]

Your five-star review has been delivered, please sign for it

Good luck! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] @ I am not a cabbage

Why not enough ratings?

It's pretty good. I just feel something is weird about it but I can't put my finger on it. Anyway, it's pretty good-looking. Come on (｡ӧ◡ӧ｡)

I'll write a few extra chapters at the end to make it better. It would be better to write a bt about the characters in the extra story

Well, newbie. Brush your points, otherwise it will be easy to judge. Author, please update! !

Gee, at first I thought it was a transformation-type campus love story, but I didn't expect it to be a bit fantasy in the later stages, which is not surprising.

If you forget to comment, just give it 5 stars and keep up the good work⊙∀⊙! Author

Very good. It's been a long time since I've seen a book like this. I thought he wouldn't write it like this at first, but then the plot turned around. It's so good.

This book is very good, I love reading this type of novels.

Although the writing is not very good, the content is rich and exciting, and I like it very much.

Quack, quack, quack.

It's just too short. I suggest you write it longer.

It looks good. I hope the author can write another 100 million copies.