A Mortal Warrior: Immortals, Come and Meet Your End

It's too slow. If the protagonist wants to revitalize the martial arts, he needs a technique that everyone can practice. He needs to spread the spiritual energy when it is revived. He needs to absorb the spiritual energy to strengthen his body or increase his blood.

Upgrade quickly, since your martial arts energy and blood are comparable to the spiritual power of cultivating immortals. It's already fifty chapters and I still haven't cultivated enough Qi and blood. It means it's not the Qi training period yet. You can tolerate this.

I came in after seeing the plot of martial arts. I originally thought that I could absorb spiritual energy and cultivate immortality by practicing martial arts. But after seeing the plot, I found that it was really good. I really only cultivated myself. Of course, it may be that I couldn't find other books. Don't complain [laughter]. But there is another problem. This is too advanced in the use of qi and blood, and as for the issue of food intake, I hope that the human body can undergo new qualitative changes in the future, complete the internal circulation of qi and blood, and achieve the effect of fasting. Otherwise, I am really afraid that I will starve to death while fighting with the cultivators [laughing and crying]

Well written, the subject matter is great. Keep up the hard work.

It's okay to read this book from the perspective of an old bookworm. It's just that it's a little slow with the new ones. Learn from the donkeys of the production team.

Update quickly, it's been a long time since I created a new technique. It's best to practice the technique with quick results. Everyone can grow up quickly and get started. After practicing for decades, only a few can persist. The cost and time of effort and gain are too long.

It took me some time to finish the exam, and it was well written. I can see that there is an outline and foreshadowing in the thinking. However, I personally don't like some parts of the article, namely the description of the aristocratic family. I can understand that you need a villain to promote the plot, but for me, I have read too many novels. I am really tired of the plot of the aristocratic family in your article. Now that I see the kind of high-level officials who serve the country justly, it makes my eyes light up. Now in your article, the senior management has written that the climax is the destruction of the Ye family, but I can't feel happy about it [laughing and crying] The only fair point is that Mr. Chu is constrained by various aristocratic families. I can't feel happy about the climax plot you designed. I just said that, just treat it as a joke. If there is an outline, write it according to the outline. There are many people who like this novel you wrote. Don't change anything just because of my review [makes a face]. After all, everyone has everyone's appetite. You can't satisfy everyone. This book is just not suitable for me. Finally, I wish your literary love will get better and better, Rui Sibai

I didn't expect that besides the passionate feeling I had when I first started writing the novel, it could still appear now. Nice

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, and the plot is reasonable. Everyone gave me five-star praise and asked the author to update it ten times.

It's a little flawed at the beginning, but it's still fun to watch later. The most important thing is the attitude of the protagonist. Not aggrieved