Arknights' Patriot's Brother

Not bad, not bad, but I'm just curious as to how the author would write about the problem of the Wendigo's facial skin gradually falling off as it continues to grow, leaving only white bones in the end (this is considered a characteristic of the Wendigo race. Although Big Daddy did not reveal his face, Kai Meow also said that his face is "ferocious and terrifying"))

How should I put it? I feel that the plot is a bit bland, and there is a feeling that I don't feel right. The author has been talking about private settings and the like, but there is actually no need to emphasize it. If it is a second creation, some changes are normal. To be honest, the timeline may not be very clear to Eagle Point itself, but overall it feels good^ω^ I don't mind having a heroine with less emotional lines, but it's better to have a single one. There aren't many literary works about Ark, and most of them are harems. So in general, this book can add more, such as branch lines and daily life. For example, for example, the Blood Demon King at the beginning, even though it was said to be written there, He once had a grudge against Bodrocasti, but when he escaped in the end, there was not much description. It seems that you only wrote about the effect and the cause but not the process in between, as well as the people who the protagonist is loyal to. Although you said that he stayed up late at night to correct official documents, you still have less details, such as being more irritable, writing about his expression, and trying to enrich it. Enrich the emotions of each character. Although writing the second creation itself has the general outline of the original work and the personality of each character itself, you have to describe it, otherwise it really feels like a blank sheet of paper (›´ω`‹). But you persisted, you have endured more than 400,000 words, you have surpassed most authors, come on! (ง•̀_•́)ง

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It's good to watch, updated quickly, and it's hard to find a protagonist who is of the Wendigo race [I learned it]

So I want to know who the heroine is!

Not bad, the outlier Wendigo, the setting is quite novel

So who is the heroine? I haven't watched it for a long time and I don't want to read it again. Can anyone tell me?

This book is well written, I will give it 4 points first.

The author is very interesting, five-star praise. I have never played Arknights. I don't know the original plot but I feel that the writing is very good. Keep up the good work. The author is big [blowing kiss] [like]

Wow, it's about 200,000 words, but there are so few people reading it. Why don't you consider going to the square to promote the book?

Well written, keep it up

For the sake of giving me five stars, give me some face and give me more [cool]

Give Laodeng a thumbs up. After all, the writing is not bad but it doesn't attract traffic. The shorthand is: old-fashioned. Come on

Very beautiful, very beautiful

Very good, the protagonist and his brother!

It's pretty good, but not many people see it. After all, not many people are in contact with the Ark circle.

It's short. Does the author call it short and concise? [Thinking][Laughing evilly]

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch

It looks good, but who is the heroine?

The writing is good, but there are really few people.

It looks good, please support the author [I learned it] [I learned it]

It's very well written, I give you top marks.

Good looking, good luck to the author

Looks great, five stars.

It's really good

Level 16 newbie looks confused

Cool, but can I have sex with the protagonist and the doctor? [Shy]

Very good book, Love from Rhode Island

Good looking (make up the number of words)

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