After the Supporting Male Character Stops Following the Plot, Even the Protagonist Panics

The writing and plot are great, the protagonist is well drawn, and the system is not a waste system. I just want to make a small suggestion. I hope the author can achieve 20,000 words a day. Except when eating and sleeping, don't take your hands off the keyboard, okay [I'm about to cry]

You can watch it, but some of the plots are not handled well, the parts that should explode are too bland, and sometimes it feels a bit suffocating. The style of the book is quite peaceful, that is, every time there is a conflict in the plot, when someone should be beaten or killed, some people can be easily let go. I wanted to put my hand in and slap that person to death. The male protagonist is written so gently that people are trying to take advantage of him. He also has a bland face, which makes people irritated. The plot is also a bit repetitive, but I can watch it, sometimes it's exciting, and sometimes it's frustrating.

I think it's very interesting. I'll take a front row seat. I hope the author will update it soon [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I really like this novel. The male protagonist is very strong and he is a master of cultivating immortals. He completes the task with ease and has everything under control. It's a great article! ! Strong man! ! I like it very much😘 and every little world is not draggy, I just love it😍

This book is beautiful! Although it is not possible to attack people or solve it with force as soon as they come up, the Great Immortal of Shiqing is not ambiguous at all in his mission. He said that if the male and female protagonists are to suffer retribution, they must make their lives worse than death! So cool stories don't necessarily have to involve fighting and killing. This kind of logic is logical, the male protagonist has methods, the system works, and I still like the male protagonist's ability to travel quickly like an immortal 😍! Well written, looks great! ! ! As long as the writing is smooth and interesting, I will give it five stars and follow it to the end! Come on, author! ! ! !

This is the first time I read this kind of fast-traveling article. I personally think it is good-looking. It has helped many people fulfill their wishes without leaving any regrets. It doesn't break the rules of the world, and it doesn't have any heart-breaking romance. It's simply the kind of love fantasy destroyer [laughing] Why does the heroine run away with the ball and let the male partner take advantage of it? Then run away yourself. The overbearing CEO who eats both black and white is definitely not allowed to violate laws and disciplines. The love of a yandere boss can no longer be yandere. The love of a devil is so harmful that you can't even do it. Rebirth is like a new brain. That can't be done. Just do whatever you want. Anyway, it's pretty good-looking. Everyone has their own preferences for carrots and cabbage.

DaDa writes very well and the writing style is very smooth. The male protagonist in DaDa has his own unique charm. There is not much description, but he has his own principles for acting. I hope DaDa will continue to stick to it and make persistent efforts. [Sending Hearts]

✨🌷💗Shiqing💗🌷 ✨Recommended stars: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ✨Quick time travel+Male protagonist's perspective+With system partner Shi Mu+With space+Overhead+Goldfinger ☞ is himself, and the system+Strong force value+No CP+No ambiguity+No emotional line+Not the Holy Mother+Scumbag+Slap in the face+Calm it as a cool article+No need to maintain the original owner's design ✨(Each plane is still a world derived from the novel, and the time point from time to time is still relatively early, so this is very good), the setting is novel, the writing is delicate and smooth, (although the plots in some planes are a little immature, a little white, and a bit wordy, it does not affect the viewing), the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the content is exciting, the thinking is clear, the story is dense, the imagination is big, and there are many bloody plots. Although it is not brain-burning, it is also quite fascinating! (But don't pursue logic too much, otherwise some logic will not stand up to scrutiny, and the male and female protagonists in the original plot still have a lot of poisonous points, so just read it as a brainless novel) ✨The male protagonist has a strong sense of responsibility, is smart, wise, and has strong hands-on ability (if he disagrees, he will stick to his words, or start a fight), he is decisive, not a virgin, nor indecisive, and his outlook on life is quite positive. It can be said that he is relatively successful in character creation. (It's just that the ending was a bit too hasty, but there are no other big problems) ✨I have finished reading this short story. Overall it is very good, and the more you read about the later stages, the more exciting it becomes. Just give it a five-star review (๑>◡<๑)👍🏻. Brothers and sisters who like this type of writing can check it out! Recommend! 💕

It's super good-looking. I really like it. There's no ink at all. It's a pure and refreshing novel. It's really refreshing and I'm not aggrieved at all. The most important thing is that there is no heroine in the whole process and there is no ambiguity. I love it. There are a lot of female videos that have no male protagonists but they can have ambiguities. They write the kind of stories about never getting married for the sake of the heroine. Fortunately, there is no such thing here. Overall, it's very good. I always read it while eating, but in the middle and later stages, I felt like I was in a hurry. I'm not well-educated and can't describe it well. I just don't think it's as detailed as the previous one. But overall, it's worth recommending. I hope the author's new book will get better and better.

I watched it before, but I don't remember why I stopped watching it again. Then I watched it again now. Reading interest depends entirely on the comment section. Every world comment section asks the protagonist to fall in love. If they don't fall in love, it won't be complete. I'm convinced. If you don't have children, the original owner will have no offspring, and the original owner's life will be unsatisfactory. Then he said that writing without cp is because the writing style is not enough. What's wrong with just not wanting to fall in love? What's wrong with just not wanting to be in love? The only things that come to mind are love, love, love, love, love, love, love, no wonder TV dramas nowadays are all about sadomasochism that started in several lifetimes. Love is not a necessity. They value love in the comments section, so why do they read novels? Why don't you fall in love? When you're in love, you don't have time to read novels.