Harry Potter: For a Better World

I have to praise myself first [laughing]

The protagonist's character is distressing and contradictory. ① Disadvantages: As a Slytherin, he openly cheered for Harry during the Quidditch match, which caused dissatisfaction; to save his classmates from the dementors, he took risks to save people, but fortunately the principal came to the rescue at the last moment; to save Harry, he lured the werewolf away alone and was bitten... Maybe after amnesia, he retained the memory of the time when he just traveled through the world. The article also describes his mature speech, but his "dedication" spirit to his friends is somewhat contrary to this. However, perhaps this contradictory personality is the highlight. I hope that he will not have to become the nanny of the protagonist group, and that he will not have to put himself in danger frequently and be sent to the school doctor's office. I hope that he will stick to his direction, and I hope that he will protect himself (the mentality of raising a cub). ② Advantages: The emotional line between master and apprentice with Professor Snape is sincere and natural. At first, it was due to supervision under the instructions of the old bee. Later, he found his own shadow in the protagonist and appreciated his talents. It is worth savoring. The protagonist's psychological journey is brilliantly described. Different memories are different individuals. Before and after amnesia, "they are two flowers blooming on the same tree." But the kindness of the friends around him is towards the other person before the amnesia, or towards himself now? The psychological pull on the self is profound.

Like it very much! Finally I found another HP that I like! I really like the character setting of the protagonist. The foreshadowing and hidden clues are well laid out. The logic is self-consistent and can stand up to scrutiny. The other thing is the relationship between me and the professor. I really like this feeling of family affection. There are too many people who are trying to make love, and I personally don't like that kind of thing. Especially some of them are just for the sake of making friends, which is quite blunt, and the OCC is serious, and I can't see it. In addition, getting along with the protagonist group is okay, not that rigid, more natural. Looking forward to the next plot very much! Also, he hoped that Sirius's matter could be dealt with. He had no good impressions of him. All his loyalty was given to Potter. There were too many people he was sorry for, but he didn't feel it at all and only cared about Potter.

Very nice! Five-star encouragement! (Spoilers below) I really like Winston White, he has obvious Slytherin qualities (of course the good ones) The teacher-student interaction between Winster and Teacher Si was also super good, and my wife's grasp of Teacher Si's character can be said to be quite accurate. I didn't feel very OOC, maybe because I watched the movie series instead of the original book. Although the Sri Lankan teacher written by my wife is obviously more relaxed and softer, I like this kind of Sri Lankan teacher very much, and Voldemort has not been resurrected yet. I am looking forward to the various conflicts that will break out after Voldemort is resurrected in the fourth grade. In addition, the description of the protagonist group. From the movie version, it can be seen that the three Harry trio are complementary and have their own character flaws. These are clearly reflected in the wife's writing by Winster - after all, there is an age gap (judging from the current plot, although Winster has lost his memory, he is still a time traveler, and he only lacks the memory of being "White" and has not lost the memory of his previous life, so he must be older than the protagonist group in terms of mental age). Looking forward to seeing the growth of the trio, especially Ron who currently feels that there is quite a lot of room for growth (I feel like he is just a stubborn p-kid at the moment) My wife left a lot of suspense. My CPU burned out and I chose to throw away my brain and give up thinking and wait for my wife to solve the mystery. Although there are some shortcomings, it may be because my wife expected it to be a long story and the plot is just unfolding in the early stages. The update experience is not very good either (I don't mean to urge updates! After all, it's great if my wife can write it for love! And I obviously feel that my wife has higher standards for her own writing, so I am quite happy to see her need to think about and polish her own writing alone hahh) I feel that after the completion, it must be a very, very good article, because the experience of reading it in one go is great! Anyway! Very good in terms of reading experience! ! Very much looking forward to the next plot! Come on, madam! !

It's been a long time since I've seen such a high-quality HP article. The character of each character is very vividly portrayed, and the academic characteristics are also clearly revealed. It's rare that it is not described from one aspect. Slytherin students are not the only ones with pure-blood supremacy. They are described from all aspects, being wise and protective, calm and collected, smart (cunning) and rational, looking at problems from a realistic perspective, etc., All of which are vividly depicted in the author's writing. There is also Gryffindor, who is brave and passionate, and dares to pursue the truth. Even if the friend is a student of Slytherin House, it still does not affect the friendship between the two parties, as well as the over-idealization and prejudice of some students against Slytherin. The author has expressed it very well through words, making people have the desire to read the entire book at once, and read it again and again, etc.

Great offspring! ! ! The following is my personal review, spoiler warning: (Written before, I don't know much about HP's original work. I haven't read the original work. I have watched the movie but it was several years ago) ① The setting starting from the third grade happens to skip the first two grades that I have watched countless times (because many HP fans have lost their stamina after writing the first two grades). There is a sense of relief that "I finally see the third grade of the descendant" (Hey), and at the same time, some foreshadowing of the original White is laid, and I look forward to the author's subsequent revelations; ② From the available information, it can be roughly inferred that the protagonist is a descendant of Regulus (surname White + misidentification of Sirius + born in a Muggle orphanage but Slytherin), but there is not much content related to the Black family at present; ③The author's writing style is very good, and basically all the descriptions and character speeches are not out of place, especially Snape's taste is very good (?); ④ The teacher-student relationship between Snape and the protagonist (perhaps a bit of family affection?) Is well portrayed. There is no stiff feeling along the way, and the emotional changes are smooth; it is also great to see the protagonist develop potions by himself and put them to use. I look forward to a future talk with a potion master [full]; ⑤At present, there are not many places to deduct essay questions. It seems like there is only one place? Although it's not a big problem, but I still want to give it some serious consideration? Overall, it was a blast to watch! I don't mean it to be a cool article, but for a reader like me who prefers emotional impact, it's very comfortable to read.

Beautiful! ! And I like the characters too! Not too OOC, I'm really happy, I seem to have discovered a treasure! If you keep reading more and more, the rating of this book will definitely get higher and higher! (PS: Please add more updates (｡>∀<｡)

It's very cool. When Winston first came here, he was worried that he had taken over Ling Yi's body. But later he found out that the original owner had expected it? But it seems to be transitioning recently, and there is no plot about this? Anyway, the author will update the article soon! Too little and not enough to see╭(°A°`)╮! ! !

Do you have CP? I think it's Snap

It's beautiful, please update it more often. If you don't update it for too long, you will be forgotten [almost crying]