Lord: Reborn to Contract a Mythic Loli

Ps: Why is there no one at the first show tomorrow? Please give me some opinions and motivation. Ignore some bugs. What are the good and bad ones? Ps: I apologize to the readers who have caught up to this point. After thinking about this book, I decided to cut it off. This book is purely an exercise in penmanship, and it is really poorly written. Although it has not completely collapsed yet, because there is no conception, the plot is unconventional, and there is no foreshadowing or foreshadowing. It is like a loft in the sky, with the danger of overturning at any time. It's hard to keep writing. On the other hand, if my grades are not very good, I don't want to persevere. Moreover, there is no point in persisting in this book, as it feels like it cannot bring about growth. The book "Lord" is not the author's writing style. It reads like a running account and is boring. Maybe it's because I'm not good enough and can't think of any good plots. The previous plots were also completely imaginary. Next, let's make a summary and let the author evaluate the shortcomings of this book. First of all, the settings are messy and incomplete. When I started writing, I set up one beat and that was it. But then I added the settings one by one, the resurrection altar? Being able to be resurrected, isn't this a tying of the knot? Other countries also didn't think much about the world view, and ended up being completely confused. There is also a realistic plot, added casually. Next, I haven't thought about the specific theme of the book, that is, the thought. What story does it tell and what feelings does it express? Not at all. Also, the characters are emotionally empty, and they are all just tools. As we write more and more, there are more and more female protagonists. It is quite difficult to balance the story and the emotional line. I don't want to write a cliché plot yet. The other is the protagonist. His character setting is not clear. He feels like a lucky guy with great ambitions. The details are inappropriate, and there are too many useless plots, which are superfluous. In short, the story of this book is not well grasped. The author decided to write the next book. As I said before, it is a double-book "Demon Slayer" fanfic, and the next one will most likely be a "Demon Slayer" fanfic.

Yes, it's very beautiful. I hope the author won't interrupt it, let alone interrupt it, and I hate it the most, especially since I like to read it.

I feel like I've seen something similar in the beginning, and I'm trying to experience the later dungeon before entering the big world. Does anyone know?

The author is simply not good enough~ Come on, come on, come on! ^ω^

I have been reading books for several years, and this is the first time I have seen such a wonderful book.

Very nice, classic lolicon

Really good, very interesting

It's very interesting, at least there's nothing poisonous about it. I hope the author can stick with it.

Is the author a lolicon [Learned]

Not bad, the plot is very novel