Black Lotus Female Partner Hand-Torn Original Work

Update soon. I really like watching it. In fact, secretly I prefer Duan Jihe (ps) and want the heroine to be with him [crying] [crying] Of course, how it develops depends on the author's wishes.

The author is great, the male protagonist must be Duan, he must be tortured by Shen, he can't fall in love🉐

Ah ah ah ah ah can you be together with Mr. Duan? They are a good match [cry][cry][cry][cry]! ! ! ! !

It's relatively novel, beautiful and I love watching it. Although it has a clichéd beginning of sisters competing to be raped by their loved ones and then reborn, the story after rebirth is not cliché at all and has some unexpected twists. In addition, the author's writing style is good and he is very good at writing. He slowly solves the puzzle as if peeling off the cocoon, and you can't guess the plot behind it. Then, my mother was really abused. I didn't feel uncomfortable being plotted by the original heroine and stabbed to death by the original hero. But the fact that the parents didn't love their children so much that they hated her to death was really unbearable. It's like the root of a person's existence has been dug out, and he can't stand in the world. Finally, it would be nice if some of the confusing names and typos could be fixed.

I hope the male protagonist is Duan, not Shen, but generally speaking, the author will only write Shen as the male protagonist. It's a routine. If he cleans up his innocence, the whole family will be happy. As for how to clean up his innocence, it depends on the author's level. If he cleans up his innocence well, Shen can be the male protagonist [Thinking]

It's so beautiful, the plot is not cliche, and it really hit my mark. [Top post][Top post][Please update] Actually, well, although Duan is very good, I still prefer Shen. I always feel that if Shen is the male protagonist, the emotional scenes will be more exciting. Then I feel that Duan being the second male lead will also leave us with beautiful fantasies.

The author's writing is skillful, and the story lays out a large pattern. He writes about love, but it is not just about love. Through the memories of the heroine, a different plot direction from the previous life is unfolded. Through the appearance of various characters, the mystery of the truth of the past and present life is gradually revealed. The wasted death of the border soldiers and the unpredictable situation in the court, are they a conspiracy? Is it a trick? Who is the chess player? Who is behind this? I am looking forward to the author's subsequent articles. Looking forward to it! Come on!

One star is deducted because Shen Yi, Shen Yi and Qin Zheng hope that the broken mirror will not be reunited. The damage is real no matter what the reason. I really hope Shen Yi is not a cp [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

It's good to watch, has a lot of plot, and the characters are quite attractive. The only drawback is that after the interlude of the memory killing, it gives people the feeling of continuing the timeline of the memory killing, which is a bit confusing. In addition, there are many typos, and names of people are often repeated, which somewhat affects reading. I made it to chapter 14. . Come on guys, give it a challenge

Damn, I'll give you five stars, can you let Duan Jihe be the male protagonist [crying], and can you give me more? I'm addicted to books, I really like it. It's the first time I met someone who likes me so much.

The biggest abuse point is that the heroine's mother is too ruthless. Nice

It's really great to read. This book feels like a reversal. When I first read it, I thought the original male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist. But later I found out that he was taking advantage of the female protagonist, but later he came to him and liked the female protagonist. Then the female protagonist was very tough. Her mother was not good to him and she would be tough when she slandered her. But she would also surrender to her grandmother and seek her blessing. As her grandmother said, she was just right, just tough enough and flexible and smart. It's such a pity to miss her. Do you really want to stop watching her? You will regret it [crying]

Ten years of reading! ! [Makes a face] This book is so beautiful~ The characters are well portrayed! I give a big shout out to the author, don't care too much about other people's opinions (with malice), they are all hateful keyboard warriors, so cheers on the author! ! ! I think you're awesome~ [blowing kiss]

I hope that Shen Yi is the male protagonist chasing his wife in the crematorium. Even if he is not the male protagonist, he will still be deeply obsessed with the female protagonist and let him taste the feeling of not being able to love.

Nice! Supports no cp. It's okay to have cp as a paragraph. Sometimes it's a bit messy to put the memories together.

The author is so good at writing! ! Come on, come on [love] [love] In fact, after reading it now, I feel that the main text can make the heroine alone beautiful, and the male protagonist may not be determined. The eldest heroine is the best. We Xuanxuan have no system and no golden fingers, but we still work so hard to fight against fate. I am in tears [almost crying] [almost crying]

The anti-routine is so powerful. I'm confused about this: both the male protagonist and the supporting actor like [face covering]. This is the first book where the female protagonist clearly knows who died in her previous life. The interaction is so wonderful and I hope they can be together... And then the other one is reluctant to give up... Whoever comes up will make the supporting character sad. I don't dare to read it... The three views are shaky. The heroine was miserable in her previous life, but she was also thoughtless and vicious. Shen has become my Bai Yueguang...

It's very good-looking, I can't describe it in words, and as for who is the male protagonist, I personally prefer the female protagonist to be the only beautiful one, let them be moved💗 This is considered stock buying, you can have no cp in the main text, extra 1V1 or all [shy][admiration][shy][admiration][shy][admiration]

I want the heroine to have some situations with Ye Shizi, and it would be best to be more ambiguous. Duan and Shen are both aloof, and I want Ye Shizi to take the initiative like this.

It's very interesting. The author should work hard to write. Don't pay too much attention to other people's external attacks. Just write what you want. I hope that the heroine will gradually become stronger and be able to deal with problems on her own. However, this is a slow process. I look forward to it and hope that it won't collapse in the future. I really admire the heroine's spirit of not admitting defeat. That part is pretty good. I hope Shen is not the male protagonist. After all, the damage has already been done. Even if he wakes up, nothing can be saved.

It's so beautiful, it's so beautiful, it's important to say it three times

I really like this book. The characters are also very interesting! I hope the author will write more words and never stop updating! Short dramas are so popular now. Come on, come on. Maybe it will be made into a drama in the future. You must write it well [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The author writes very well. The characters are vivid, I like the protagonist

1. It is full of ancient charm and has a special sense of pictures, as if you are watching a TV series. It is a very novel novel. 2. The setting is novel. I don't like things that involve systems, but I accidentally clicked on this novel and found that the system is not rigid, there are a lot of kickbacks, but there is no repetition. 3. Although reborn, there is no golden finger, no God's perspective, and it is reasoning. I especially like the setting where the result after rebirth is the same as the previous life but the development path is different (it seems like learning the displacement and distance of physics)

It looks good. Don't stop updating. I really see Mrs. Qin's attitude towards Xuan. I really want to slap her.

It's very interesting. I've been waiting for it. The heroine is very three-dimensional. She's not a virgin, but has brains and is bad. I like bad girls~ I hope there will be more updates. The plot is novel, the protagonist has his own opinion, and the characters are three-dimensional I re-read the current plot and also read the comments from other book friends. Shen Shaxuan had a hidden secret in her previous life. It just depends on how she handles it. Then there is Xuan's emotional line that most book friends have proposed. For a long time, I personally feel that whoever Xuan ends up with is right (of course, the process will be selfish and may be unreasonable), because no matter what, there will be regrets. Shan also said that the ending is 1V1, and the process has a high probability of 1V2. No matter who it is with, I think there will be sweetness and cruelty as the plot progresses, so I still want to wait for the day when the story ends to express some opinions. But it would be good if the ending is Xuan alone and beautiful, because for Xuan, she has her own name in this life. If she lives happily in the end and has no regrets, it will be better than anything else. I also believe in the author's ability. The writing is online, the characterization is good, and the probability of OOC is very low. Before the end, I will not give up or belittle my opinions because of the characters and plot that may be staged. Everything has to be completed before the real chapter. Everything is focused on Xuan, and what I am most interested in is her subsequent personal growth, destiny struggle, and breaking into the game. I hope she can win [laughs][laughs][laughs] 2025/08/18

It was so beautiful, why did it die young later? Why is the plot behind it a bit confusing? It's a bit unclear, but no, the author is great. This book you wrote is really beautiful. There is no conclusion to their final tragedy, so why is it gone? It's such a pity. Please continue. When will it be updated? If you want to read it, read it first. It's really well written. I like the heroine's character. I love it.

Ahhhhhhhhhh I hope Duan is the male protagonist

It's really beautiful. I feel sorry for the heroine. I hope there is someone who will really prefer the heroine, not for other reasons or taking advantage of her.

It seems very good so far, worth watching [Blow a kiss]