Have You Ever Used Power Systems from Other Worlds in Marvel or American Comics?
For example, the mages in Marvel basically seem to be all about melee combat. Let's have a traditional mage who travels through time, rubs fireballs, and performs forbidden arts. And the most famous Marvel series is Iron Man. Let's have a wizard who inherits the knowledge of the super god universe and shines in Marvel.
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The ability was given so much but not used. The biggest problem was that the power was not written out, and the feeling was not written out. This is so boring. What can I say about this book? The beginning is okay, but it's very boring if you keep writing like this. People don't have data panels, but they can write out the feeling of strength and weakness. Unfortunately, you can't write it out, and you don't write data. Anyway, now that I see it, I feel that the protagonist is an ordinary person, an extremely ordinary person. Ordinary people with no power at all.
This person's words, how should I put it, appeared too abruptly and were solved too quickly. In addition, the abilities are too baffling. If you want to create Mephisto, well, you are targeting the protagonist. You can use him or a time traveler or something like that. You are baffled. Especially if you don't dare to kill someone for several hours, how is that possible? If the protagonist is not a time traveler, it is very likely that he has just grown up. He's already died once. If you say he doesn't dare to kill someone, that's nonsense. As for the other person being interrogated, can the protagonist not know who he is? There is a bit of a mistake in the positioning of the protagonist. He is obviously a time traveler, but you wrote it as a boy next door who has just grown up.
Playing house, what is the protagonist's mentality, and do primary school students experience life?
The ability has been distributed in the book circle.