Elder Brother********

"The reason why teenagers are cute is because they have love" "The reason why young people are hopeful is because their love is boiling." "When a person knows what he wants and acts for it, he will not be changed by the world, but will change the world."

I accidentally read this novel in a hurry on Toutiao Jisu. Overall, although the overall structure and content are not long, it has ups and downs but is not boring, it is stretching but not extreme, it is a pain but not cruel, it has flavor and is worth reading. In particular, the author's portrayal of the characters' psychology is very delicate and has many highlights, which shows that the author has certain writing skills. The only regret is that there are many omissions in typos, typos, wording and sentence fragmentation, which have affected the smoothness of reading. Therefore, I am preparing to do a second brush on Tomato like an obsessive-compulsive disorder, and try to remind the problems that have a greater impact (there are actually many problems, but it does not affect reading). I hope the author can improve it. This is the first to leave a message in the novel, thank you. @Miniya

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The author writes it very well, and the ending is also very good. But I always feel a little sad in my heart (っ╥╯╰╥c), a love that is not accepted by the world, a love that once touched my heart and was full of expectations, although it is not vigorous, it is unforgettable. Woooooooooooo~ I feel a little confused. ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚The writing is very good, very wrong! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Although the story is not long, it is quite good, but actually, I want to read 101, although it is not bad to write like this, I recommend it (｡ˇε ˇ｡) Oh buy it, sisters, look at it. It's really beautiful\(//∇//)\ Oh, I hope the author can correct the punctuation and typos. To be honest, every time when I'm watching Excited, a typo suddenly pops up and I'm immediately in trouble (~0~)

It's well written [Adoration] The content is very interesting and the plot is very good [Adoration] Why do you feel that so few people have read it [What] I hope more and more people will discover this book, it is really good [Sending my heart] I don't want to read any books recently, but I am really attracted by this book [Blowing a kiss] And the content is not too much, and the writing is not too verbose😍The protagonist is also progressing very fast. Just these points touched me, I love it so much (●♡∀♡)

I just like these, sweet and short articles, and this is a cookie article [shy]

Tian Wen Tian Wen is a very loving couple. Fu dotes on Chi to no end. Fu is Chi's only one, and Chi is Fu's everything. It's so sweet, so sweet, and they even went abroad to give birth to twins. 23-12-02

How to say it! ? That is, the love in youth is tolerant, afraid, moving forward or retreating, but as long as you recognize the love in your heart, you will love to the extreme, let go and let the other person calm down. Fortunately, both parties love each other and are happy.

It's nice to watch, but I thought the ending would be like, cough cough The two of them will arrange a baby kiss or something like that [shy]

She looks so good-looking and has candy from head to tail.

It's beautiful. I wish them happiness in their world.

The author wrote very well. Although it was very short, I finished reading it very quickly. Come on [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Come on, it looks good, but it's a bit lacking.

Don't poke me, I'm a local dog and I just like to read short and sweet articles.

I liked it so much, I watched it twice

Pretty and super sweet

Very beautiful, the characters are full-bodied

Very good short article

I watched it one night, and I was excited all night. It was very well written, and the content was profound and moving. I really liked it. Although it was short, I was very happy to read it.

A sweet and sad short story. Love, love, [fly a kiss] [fly a kiss] [fly a kiss]

Good-looking [lick the screen][lick the screen] "Interesting" (touched his face that was as sharp as a knife, put the bleeding finger to his mouth and licked it, making a smile that was three-quarters sarcastic and seven-quarters cool)

It's so sweet and beautiful, but there are no quotation marks when speaking, which makes it a bit uncomfortable.

... A good-looking sentence can travel the world 😁

Very nice, I like it very much [smile][love][love]

Very good, the content is wonderful

Good, good, good, good

Recommended, very good and worth a look

Like. Sisters watch it

Very beautiful and wonderful