The Adventures of Lolo: the Immortality of the Moon God

It's so beautiful. Great support, author!

Very exciting, the author's writing style is very good

The first time I read the Adventures of Lolo fanfic, it was pretty good. I finished it in one sitting. There's no such thing as a soul traveling to another world. It's just the fantasy of an unlucky guy who was struck to death by lightning while playing games on a rainy day.

So far, the original work focuses on group portraits and there are too many motorcycle protagonists, so each vehicle is not very impressive at the moment. However, the character traits of the beast tribe, whether it is the wild ape or the tiger king, are particularly well grasped (it is not obvious in the first few chapters of Dragon God). It is a great book. It's worth watching. If it doesn't collapse in the later stage, you can definitely become a god.

The writing in this type of fanfic is good, and the author's writing style is good, but you can consider forming an army such as a special forces team, and if you write about Tianwai in the future, it is best to unite the iron lumps in this world

It's a tribute to my childhood. It's okay. I like all the characters in it. Except for Blue Poison Beast, to be honest, every character has charm. Blue Poison Beast is really successful as a villain. I hate it so much. I don't know how to arrange him in this book.

This book is actually quite good after reading it all, but there are some places in the middle that I don't feel are particularly engaging, and I don't have much desire to read it. But after reading it all, it is quite interesting. It has supplemented many settings in the original work, and the author also compiled poems for it. It feels like it has the charm of the original work after reading it for a long time. The war king returns with a rustling wind, and the artifact reappears. The world of game life is turned upside down, and the supreme arc embraces the world. They say life is a game, so why isn't a game a kind of life? (─‿─)

It is a pity that this book only scored less than 9 points. I have to say that this novel is the best in the same text. Whether it is the Black Dragon Beast army attacking the Wild City, the touching display of the Black Iron Beast army's bravery and fearlessness of death, or the Beast Clan's willingness to put aside their grudges and reconcile with the Motorcycle Clan, they are all admirable. However, there are also some loopholes in the novel. For example, the Blood Dragon Emperor sealed Jingjing in the Fire Dragon Valley, but did not know about the energy amethyst in the Fire Dragon Valley. Overall, the content and the emotions of the characters are rich and colorful. After reading this book, I regained my childhood and saw a different feeling. It perfectly restored the flesh and blood of the robot world in the original drama, and it was ingenious. The death of Feng Xue at the end of the chapter is filled with a sad atmosphere. Although it deviates slightly from the content of the happy ending, it plays an intuitive role in completing the book.

A very good fanfic, with humorous language and characters, and flesh-and-blood characters. However, the problem of the unequal basic bases of the robots and beasts has not been solved. If the population of both sides is applied in the anime, then the war potential of the two sides is not on the same level. This is also the most obvious shortcoming so far. I hope the author can fill this shortcoming.

It is considered to be one of the best among Luo Luo Adventures fanfics (at least to me). It has group portraits and is not just a random killing by the protagonist. The writing is also good. The author has also greatly filled in the pitfalls of the Blue Arc. It is very good [eating melon] [like]

Very nice! The characters have flesh and blood! I really like Boundless Sea! Strong and handsome! The logic is clear and reasonable! The writing is beautiful, the origin crystals for building weapons are reasonable, the gold finger of the protagonist is reasonable, using the tokens from the Moon Temple and the low-end version of the King of War gems brought by the system, and absorbing the energy of the moon, Boundless Sea is suddenly raised to the level of an S-class King of War! This setting is quite reasonable! It just feels a bit redundant to hit other planes at the end. How old is the protagonist Bei Yue? The robot has a lifespan of 1,000 years, and Boundless Sea is from an older generation. It feels like he won't live long. Can he live forever? Or return to the original world after death!

Very good, very good-looking, but a bit short

I finished reading it yesterday and got a five-star review. The main problem is in the early stage 1. It's just that Tiger King came to the door, and the protagonist didn't come out for a long time, and he came out at the end. This is a bit poisonous, but there will be no problems in the later stage. 2. There are also some descriptions of the drama, such as "under the blessing of a certain mysterious power" and "under the author's special arrangement". The last sentence of these two is that a certain black robot has an increased IQ. This is also common in the early stage, but appears once or twice in the later stage. Overall, this is a fanfic worth reading. The good stuff is all at the back, and the final episode of Snow Storm is also pretty good.

The combat power has been improved reasonably, and it has been uniquely expanded on the original basis. The character descriptions are vivid and vivid. The Tiger King and the Golden Iron Beast in it make people feel alive. There are not so many intrigues and conspiracy theories, which really makes me feel like I have returned to my childhood. In addition, the description of the battle scenes is the best I have ever seen in Lolo's adventures. The author used words to paint a picture in my mind. Thank you very much to the author.

It's good. The author can learn from The Adventures of Luoluo: The Bull Demon King at the beginning, and add a multi-dimensional world in the later stage.

Through this book, I learned more hydrological skills. The Adventures of Lolo is well written, I like it very much. I'll write one too. The author is either a Chinese teacher or a student with excellent composition.

The first book of this type, the content is novel and interesting. The protagonist is thoughtful and well-planned. He brings the dead situation to life and changes the regrets of many city lords who were defeated and died in the original drama. The only drawback is that there are many non-critical plots that have nothing to do with the protagonist. I always skipped this part.

The writing is good, the entry point is also very good, the beginning is explosive, and the new plot line developed based on the background of the original drama is also very interesting. Hope it doesn't end badly

Whether it is the heroic talent of the Tiger King of the beast clan, the affectionate nature of the wild orangutan, the resourcefulness and loyalty of the golden iron beast, or the protagonists of several generals of the motorcycle clan, the author has all portrayed them very well and the writing style is also very good. It's really amazing👏👏

The description is detailed enough that even those who have not read it can understand it. I also like the subject matter. I think five stars is too little. However, whether it is in the original work or in the extras of this book, the story about Fengxue is difficult to understand.

Give it five stars. The author's writing style is excellent. Except for those few in Tomato, the rest can't compare to this one. Of course, in terms of scenery description and battle description, it is the best in fan fiction. I support it.

The writing is very good, especially the description of the battle scenes, as well as the individual poems about the skills, including the original plot behind it, plus the author's filling in the original work. It's just that the bears are out there and I can't stand it anymore [laughs evilly]

This is a novel that recalls childhood! Maybe it's not the best written, but it makes up for some previous regrets. Let the protagonist become the Moon Temple Boundless Sea to make up for some regrets.

Okay, I haven't seen such an interesting Lolo Adventures fanfic for a long time, and the setting feels good too

This is my first time writing about the adventures of Lolo and the old city lord of the Moon Temple. It's very good.

It's really super good-looking, highly recommended [laughs], the author's writing is very vivid and the characters are vividly portrayed, and the vivid images strongly express the author's serious mood when watching this cartoon and the excitement of writing this book [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

What I wrote earlier is very good, really. I'll give it 5 stars first, and I'll follow up later.

Yes, there are a few books that I can read to the end

Tomato can have an ending, so it's okay, and it's well written.

The author's writing style is very good. Anyway, I have a strong sense of empathy. Try not to believe some people's complaints in the comment area. In fact, you still have to read this book to know whether it is good or not.