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It means that the male protagonist has died six times in the past, and the memory was brought back for the seventh time. The sister has always carried the memory. The sister did not take it but got the future diary for the seventh time. The future diary at the beginning was the sixth time. Later, the future diary changed and became the seventh time. The sister could not accept it and went crazy. In the sixth time, Ye Fan failed to catch up with his sister, but was stabbed by her sister. He became angry and reborn to start the game with the male protagonist, only to find that the male protagonist has a light retrospect function. (Also, my sister likes the male protagonist very much and is not arrogant at all. Although my sister likes the male protagonist, she is very arrogant.) Isn't this level of brain-burning?

Read the book review: Very brain-burning Watch the plot: Am I really a genius?

I have read 86 of them. How can I put it, I have mixed feelings. This type of love story (sci-fi suspense) is not something that ordinary people can write. The author, well, is an ordinary person, so I won't go into details. . . I am impatient, and I am already very tired in real life, so I don't want to get too entangled in reading a book. Therefore, what I want to see is that the protagonist and others solve the problem of reincarnation early, confess to each other, and then spread the dog food. Although I have confessed now (personally I feel it was too slow and should have been done earlier), there are still many doubts about these doubts. . . It, it is not the reason for me to pursue books! It can only be said to be a seasoning, but the core is still about falling in love and spreading dog food! I hope the author can develop this aspect well. The first 86 chapters feel just like that. After all, it is not a literary masterpiece. It is suspenseful and logical. After all, it cannot compete with the simple enjoyment!

I thought it was a romance novel, but I didn't expect it to be a suspense novel. I thought it was a suspense novel, but I didn't expect that there is a romance novel hidden in the suspense novel.

I understand, both Yun and Xue like the male protagonist. Xue is more arrogant and refuses to admit that she is a real tsundere. Yun has been reborn. "That thing" is that Xue and Yun live with the same identity (their new identity is Bing). If they don't use the same identity, they will die at the age of 20. In the end, they both fell in love with the male protagonist. Bing's identity was used by Yun at the time and was given to her sister. In the last life, Yun was betting on whether the male protagonist could recognize Bing as Yun. In the end, he was killed by the arrogant Xue. Probably like this

The subject matter of this book is very novel, but the author's writing skills are indeed not up to par. However, the whole book is still very good. Various main lines and hidden lines are interspersed, and the emotional lines are also developed very harmoniously. It does not have the abruptness of ordinary novels. However, one of the more important issues is that this book The audience may be a little small, after all, it is too vague, and readers who have read few books may not have the patience and not understand it well, because the first volume is really convoluted, and the plot only begins to become clear in the second volume, but this novel is still very well written, I hope the author will work hard!

It's a very good book, but I'd like to give you some suggestions. 1. The title of the book could be changed, as it does not match the content of the article. 2. It is recommended to add suspense to the label. Many people want to watch love and relax, but in the end they are forced to burn their brains [face covering]. The introduction may also need to be modified. 3. You can post an outline after the finale and sort out the timeline. I understand it, but many people in the comment area said it was confusing after reading more than a dozen chapters and were speechless. You haven't even reached 33 yet and you still want to understand it? ? ? These are all suggestions. Useful ones are the best. @Today's dog food A general timeline ①The protagonist and his sister had an accident on a plane and disappeared. The sister found out about it and fell into a coma. In reality, many people, such as the female author, entered her sister's dream through some kind of technology. ②The younger sister imagined the protagonist in her dream. Because she wants her brain to believe that this is real and not a dream, the protagonist in the dream is not awake, but a comatose person who was rescued after a plane crash. The younger sister in the dream is trying to wake up the protagonist she imagined. ③ It takes time to wake up the protagonist (in a dream). In order to ensure the vitality of the protagonist's brain, the female author made up a dream for the protagonist, which is the thing that keeps resurrecting and retains memories, also called the "brain in a vat" ④In order to satisfy his sister's possessiveness, the protagonist of the fifth life got together with his sister. Later, the protagonist's memories were also made by his sister (in the dream, not in the brain in the vat). ⑤ As she continues to be reborn, her sister becomes smarter. The fifth-generation sister realizes that she may be in other people's dreams or thoughts, and tries to pass information to her future sisters, from notes to diaries. In other words, the protagonist, sister, Lin Fan, can retain memories, and her sister has a future diary and high IQ. ⑥Reality-Sister's Dream-The protagonist in the dream is the brain in the vat ⑦Finally, there are two endings. A is that the protagonist and sister die in reality, and the protagonist and sister in the dream survive as data bodies, and can enter the mechanical body in the future; B is that the protagonist and sister are alive in reality, and the three of them live together happily. It can be said that both endings are comedies. I don't know if I remember correctly, but it's probably like this Finally, author, please explain to me who is the female author in the finale? ? ? It seems like this is the only thing I can't understand in the whole book! ! !

Overall, it is a very good book. As for the most commented ones, such as the brain-burning and confusing plot, I personally feel it is okay and there is nothing I can't understand. The most difficult part is maybe because other Tomato books are too brainless? However, this book is indeed a bit convoluted, or very convoluted, but the amazing thing is that the author can write it well. This is more difficult to write than an ordinary dual-line plot or a dual-protagonist plot, but this kind of subject matter is not very normal, right? At least I've only seen this one. What I say next may contain some spoilers. The first thing to make clear is that starting from the first chapter, this is a three-layered world, the outermost real world, the middle layer of dream world, and the innermost brain in a vat. The brain in the vat is also the world of the novel at the beginning, including the messy reincarnation. These are all based on the sister's dream world, and the outermost is the real world. There are two lines in the ending. The author is right, neither is be, but neither is he. I feel very annoyed, because obviously you can write he, you only need to make the protagonist immortal in the real world. That's all. Maybe the author thinks tragedy can be more deeply rooted in people's hearts? But I actually don't think so. After all, the reality is sad enough, and you can't be optimistic about the ending just by reading a novel. There are many negative reviews about this book. In fact, they have not even seen the concepts of the dream world and the brain-in-a-tank world. The so-called chaos is only for the protagonist's so-called travel through the book and the messy rebirth with the male and female protagonists. It cannot be denied that it is indeed very messy, but it is not messy to that extent. At least it is understandable and can be sorted out. However, there are so many negative reviews, which is indeed unreasonable. Maybe Tomato is indeed very young. Finally, let's talk about myself. Most of my praise for this book comes from the setting of this world view and the so-called brain-burning. After reading it, it really gave me a bright feeling. It was purely the setting that surprised me. On the contrary, his novels are not very good. Whether it is the setting of the plot, the characterization of the male and female protagonists, or the description of the emotional line, it is quite poor to say the least, which is a little above the average level of Tomato. But it is good. He always gives me sudden changes and directly attracts me in the setting. , But on the other hand, because the update was very slow, the attraction did not last forever, which caused me to take a break for a while. I picked up the book after seeing the end of Brain in a Vat, and I didn't finish reading it until the end. Overall, it's a good book [crazy]

This book is really good. Three Rebirths is already very good with just one theme. The plot logic is very tight and I don't think there is any big problem. After all, this is also my first time watching The Third Rebirth. (I don't know what else the author said?)

It's a good novel, but it's a bit messy, and it's too stomach-ache-inducing. The relationship and story between the protagonist and the two sisters really made me feel stomach-ache and uncomfortable while reading it. The author's writing is good, but I'm not very good at reading stomach-ache novels. If you like it, I can recommend it. It's very good~\(≧▽≦)/~

What do you say about writing a novel... The title looks like a sweet story about rebirth, but as I read it, I thought it was a villain story, and then the plot turned into a suspense story... When I reached 40%, I felt like I was reading a suspense novel with a sweet title and a villain story [laughing]. The writing is not bad, but the plot is a bit tiring to watch, and it belongs to the kind of state that is half-hearted and half-hearted [laughs and cries]. Give it four stars.

It's pretty cool, but the two endings are too brutal. Whether it is a realistic ending or a dream ending, in the end it is just a dream. In reality, Yun is a poor person waiting for the news of the survival of the two people. Even if the consciousness of the two people's dreams is uploaded, it is just like a substitute. For example: the kitten you raised died and you adopted a new kitten that it missed very much. Of course, you also have feelings for the new kitten, and it is also accompanying you, but one day when you think back to the original kitten, you will still be sad. Even if the new kitten is very similar to the original one, there are differences after all, right? As for the ending of the virtual line, it is a complete tragedy. Yun thought he had returned to reality and lived with his lover and sister. But in fact, the male protagonist she created chose to stay, so Ning Yinyin from the outside world chose to create a new world for "them". The reason I say this ending is a tragedy is because Yun is trapped in a dream, but in reality she will gradually die. Secondly, the so-called "quantum entanglement" is just a setting of Ning Yinyinjia. After all, the male protagonist and Yun's sister are still the products of Yun's fantasy. Maybe the characters in the dream have developed self-awareness, but fundamentally they are not the "kitten" that Yun wants. They are a substitute. What's even more desperate is that everyone thinks they have achieved happiness. This feeling is like a drowning person thinking he has grasped a life-saving straw, but in fact there is no life-saving straw. It is just the last illusion before death. It is the brain deceiving you. All you have is sinking alone into the dark water. Maybe at the last moment you will not feel pain but happiness, just like dying on a hypothermic winter night and feeling warm and happy all over.

The pace at the beginning was a bit too fast, causing the story line to look messy, but the pace began to slow down later on. The author probably wants to write a gal-type plot, with daily life and brain-burning, but the prerequisite for writing it into a novel is that the writing power must be in place, the sense of the picture must be created, and the rhythm of the plot must be controlled in an orderly manner. The theme and setting are very novel and quite attractive. Come on.

Falling into a big pit again

We need to grow our brains. ᗜ ˰ ᗜ The author's writing style is very good, and the subject matter is also very fresh. If you want to understand it, you have to read at least Chapter 26. Again, we need to grow our brains. ᗜ ˰ ᗜ

What are you going to do? I looked at more than 40 pictures and still can't figure it out.

It is divided into three worlds, the surface (reality), the middle (dream world) and the inner (dream world and brain in a vat). The protagonist in the surface world is missing in an accident. Yun, who has not found any excitement for the time being, is unwilling to accept reality and enters the dream world. Reality uses brain-in-a-vat technology to allow Yun to better perfect things in the dream world. Therefore, with the setting of the middle world, the main character The protagonist is sick but enters the outside world to keep his brain active. The inside world is the outside world. The novel written by Ye Fan in the middle world introduces the inside world to let the protagonist in the middle world activate his brain. The inside line is the outside world. Ye Fan helps the outside world protagonist awaken Yun's entry into the middle world, so that the inside protagonist understands that the role of the inside master is to wake up the outside world. It's quite interesting. I'll give it five stars. Come on.

Support, support, it is indeed a creative article, like it, my brain will grow.

The writing is very good. The only flaw is that I am not "I" in line A. In fact, as a reader, I can't accept it. Although this is limited by the needs of the plot, it is still a bit uncomfortable. (Line b is not reality?

Line A directly broke my heart. Only Yun was left alive, especially the time Ye looked at earlier happened to be the time of their death. Line B thought it was a happy ending, but at the end, Ning's part silenced me again.

I guess this Xue should be the younger sister, and Yun is the older sister. They probably changed their identities in one life, but due to some uncertain factors, Yun forgot that she was the older sister. . It's also possible that Xue didn't want to give up the male protagonist to her sister, so she cleared Yun's memory, stuffed the memory of herself as a sister into Yun's mind, and then became the sister herself. In this way, no matter how many times she was reborn, Xue would still be her sister. Of course it's just a guess, but Xue must be the younger sister, and Yun must be the older sister, so I'll leave it here, otherwise there's no way to fulfill the protagonist's lot. The person he hopes for doesn't appear. Obviously, the protagonist is looking forward to his younger sister, but the protagonist and Yun already know each other well, and the longed-for sister hasn't appeared yet, so only Xue can be the sister. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

This five-star review is for nothing else, because the author has similar interests to me. Well, I also want to write a novel. The female protagonist also has a similar level of power to rebirth. Well, the male protagonist is myself. In the end, I will find that this is a novel written by myself, just to pave the way for my next life. I can even communicate with myself through the novel. It is like when I was writing, I said that the people in the novel were criticizing me, and I also punished him, such as dropping stones from the sky and hitting him on the head.

The book is very good [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]. It is very popular in aspects such as setting (the male and female protagonists are always reborn but only the female protagonist retains all memories), and the character creation is also good. Not bad (both the male and female protagonists and the male protagonists in the book are thinking about themselves) [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully], but the plot may be too intense, so the author wrote slowly in order to keep the book from collapsing. I suggest you keep it up [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It's really interesting. Mo is the villain. Because he lost to Ye Fan, he wanted to be bad, and Ye Fan just wanted to complete the task of defeating Mo [face covering] Not bad, good articles should be like this, with online IQ and clear character traits. This should be a new faction that created the villain genre [exploration]

I feel like I'm going to have a brain [cover face] [cover face]

Yes, it can be done. Come on, author.

This novel is awesome, with a third-line narrative [shocked]

It feels a bit like Inception, a dream within a dream, but the protagonist doesn't know that he is dreaming at first. It's a bit scary when watching it. When he starts to feel strange about the world and the things around him, it means he is about to wake up. My brain started to smoke when I watched it [face covering]

It is very suitable for people like me who have read too many cool articles and their brains are rusty to recuperate. The two endings are not so happy, but in comparison, A Yun wakes up, and has Xue and Mo's conscious body AI, which is considered satisfactory.

It's a good book. The more you read it, the more rational you become. You won't be beaten to death when you read it while eating. [Learned]