Xiu Zhen: Everything in the Novel Is a Lie!

Although I feel that in terms of character creation, it may be a bit biased towards group portraits. In addition to the protagonist, there are too many "protagonist template" characters, which is impressive. But despite this, it can be considered that the flaws are not concealed. At least this article is indeed relatively rare on the worldview structure of the entire world of immortality, and it is particularly innovative. I have read a lot of articles on cultivating immortals, but many of them are endless cycles of killing monsters, upgrading and changing maps. This article is really rare about the structure of sects and world views, but it seems as if it is a real world. Perhaps, the real world is like this, with countless geniuses vying for glory, and sects that emphasize systems... Speaking of which, in terms of sect rules, this article is really rare. I have read too many articles about cultivating immortals in sects where they are all pure predators of the weak. A sect like this that pays attention to laws and regulations seems to have a glimmer of civilization in the jungle world of cultivating immortals. .

I still couldn't understand the previous part, so I was about to give up, but the more I read, the more I read, and I came across the latest chapter. It's quite interesting, so I'm going to keep reading! The author works hard to update the article! ! I can't wait to see what happens next! ! !

The setting is very good, the new author, the writing is immature and normal, but I have some small suggestions, or logical contradictions. The internal affairs processing within the sect is unlikely to accumulate so much in each closed loop as it is now. Generally speaking, the files are divided into timely events, scheduled activities, and some prescribed modifications. You can write busy, but it is impossible to become an immortal. Then the department is nailed to the revision document, because most of the things that can be postponed can be controlled by spiritual consciousness. There is also a complete mismatch between his serious cultivation and the importance of handling things. His mental strength is destined to prevent him from presiding over a war that is more than two levels higher than him. Note that I am talking about war. He can't see the battle scene clearly at all, let alone other true legends. There is also the matter of pre-selectors for the head. At this scale of the system within the sect, it is impossible to determine the pre-selectors starting from the Golden Core. By analogy, the governor of a province cannot include a college entrance examination champion in the pre-selection, even if he is excellent. Personal suggestion can be set up, three generations, one generation is on duty, one generation is candidate, and finally this generation competes. Of course, the above are all my superficial opinions, and I don't allow you to make drastic changes, so just continue your previous settings, and just be your reader and chat with you. At last. Come on! Sincerely, your readers.

Give my book a good review, please be patient and read it longer, and accept suggestions.

It is very well written. It is different from traditional fairy tales. The world view is grand and everyone is the protagonist of their own life. The male protagonist is more like a narrator. I admire He Yujun the most, especially after seeing his extras.

Very interesting article about cultivating immortals The protagonist is a genius, a rich second generation, not a counterattacker or loser. A super sect, the sect is not the kind of rubbish that plots against its own people every day. To a certain extent, it teaches students according to their aptitude and creates a new direction when there is no direction. Low-level spiritual roots can also rely on their scientific research talents to achieve great success. It feels like the sect in this article is more like a country.

Very nice, good luck to the author

It's okay, it feels a bit like Luofu back in the day, but this is a group portrait of a sect. If you don't have the patience, you can't stand it. If you like to read cool articles, you can avoid it.

I'll give you a four-star review. Although it sounds confusing, it's a bit innovative. Is this yours, is it an ancient or modern essay on cultivating immortals?

Come on, author, well written.

So novel and pretty.

It feels like there's no one there [what]

Don't worry, I'm reading a book. It's quite interesting. ::ೖ(⑅σ̑ᴗσ̑)ೖ:: It's a very nice book, why doesn't anyone read it? [What][What][What][What]

Jujuju looks great, and the ideas are very novel!

It's also very good to read. It's a good book and I highly recommend it.

The background is novel and the characters are vividly depicted, but it's just a bit lacking.

It's too short. Come on, author.

It's very nice to see Lei, the cultivator of immortality! So novel! Looking forward to soaring