One Piece: The Shadow Mastermind

Why is the rating so low? I feel that this book is really good. What makes it good is not the storyline, but the overall world view, which rationalizes the world of pirates. In fact, it makes sense. Without these superpowers, the World Government would have wiped out all the pirates. The only drawback is that the names chosen by the author are really staged.

I like this book better. I also read many people's comments in the early stage, and they all said that this book is long-winded. It is indeed long-winded. It is undeniable that many people may like to read passionate books. The kind of book where dozens or hundreds of pages are submitted to the municipal government and then completed in two or three hundred chapters. After reading this kind of book too much, I really feel that he is like a waste, but I like it better. It is really long-winded, and the first forty or fifty chapters are all introduced. The main plot is not advanced at all, but when those people commented, the whole book only had more than 300 chapters last year. That is to say, 1/6 of the page is devoted to the introduction, or even 1/5. They said that it is okay to be wordy, but the world view of this book or the entire line is grand, and now it is almost 500 pictures. I have only written about the Age of Overlord. It is estimated that when Roger officially starts the Age of Discovery, it will take about 700 chapters. If the book is really completed and has more than 1,000 chapters, then this book is really possible. At that time, I will read the introduction of the previous 40 or 50 chapters. , I don't think it's long-winded anymore. Maybe the author wanted to make this book long, so there was such a long foreshadowing. I also had the patience to finish the book, especially because the author described some of the characters in the original plot, their personality traits, etc. Very well. Coupled with the author's own creative elements, I have to say that this book is great. There are no over-the-top elements, and some settings are indeed quite enjoyable to read. Come on, be optimistic about the author

Not bad, okay, but the front part is really too wordy.

I like this very much, but I want to ask the author a question. I feel that the writing style and narrative style of this novel are very similar to a book called Pirates of Darkness. Is it written by the same person or is he learning the style or is it a coincidence? [What] 🤔 👍 👍 👍

Personally, I feel that the content is quite good among the many books I have read.

Number one in One Piece The miracle in One Piece is directly accountability and refutation. This is what the ocean should be like. If One Piece hadn't come out first, I once thought this was the original work. Every era is written in such detail and it's perfect here. He ranks first in my One Piece. The other pirates Rocks have all been mentioned in one sentence. Only here can I feel the real great pirate Rocks, the last sea overlord.

Don't care about other people's opinions, everyone has their own ambitions

In the early stage, you follow the Rocks pirate ship, in the mid-term, you vigorously develop national strength, and in the later stage, you control the world situation behind the scenes. The protagonist, a person with death fruit abilities, does not blindly follow the original work, but has his own world line. Very nice, five stars!!!

To be honest, I don't think it's necessary to make it pure gold, because there are very few pirate fanfics that write about a protagonist from youth to old age. If the story of the protagonist's old age can be told, I think it can show more charm. Just like Whitebeard, if it only writes about his peak, I I feel that his charm is not just discounted, but completely gone. There is no story about his dedication to his family and his sacrifice in the war for Ace. So I am looking forward to seeing the development of the protagonist's country and the pirate group when he gets old. When that happens, I think this is a real masterpiece.

From the description of strength, power and characterization, I think the money is spot on, but there are too many mixed things. I don't understand those who talk about hydrology. What else do you want if tomatoes are free? Water is just water. Isn't it enough to just look good? The setting of this book is quite different from the original work. It can be read as a different world. It is a power portrayal. It has its own ideas. There are too many things mixed together. Fortunately, it is very comfortable to read. The narrative technique and the length of the plot seem to be watery. However, multiple comparisons highlight the character portrayal. Tomato is free anyway. If you write, I will read it. I am not afraid of tj. Good luck to the author 👍👍👍