One Piece: the Mastermind Behind the Scenes

Why is the rating so low? I feel that this book is really good. What makes it good is not the storyline, but the overall world view, which rationalizes the world of pirates. In fact, it makes sense. Without these superpowers, the World Government would have wiped out all the pirates. The only drawback is that the names chosen by the author are really staged.

I like this book better. I also read many people's comments in the early stage, and they all said that this book is long-winded. It is indeed long-winded. It is undeniable that many people may like to read passionate books. The kind of book where dozens or hundreds of pages are submitted to the municipal government and then completed in two or three hundred chapters. After reading this kind of book too much, I really feel that he is like a waste, but I like it better. It is really long-winded, and the first forty or fifty chapters are all introduced. The main plot is not advanced at all, but when those people commented, the whole book only had more than 300 chapters last year. That is to say, 1/6 of the page is devoted to the introduction, or even 1/5. They said that it is okay to be wordy, but the world view of this book or the entire line is grand, and now it is almost 500 pictures. I have only written about the Age of Overlord. It is estimated that when Roger officially starts the Age of Discovery, it will take about 700 chapters. If the book is really completed and has more than 1,000 chapters, then this book is really possible. At that time, I will read the introduction of the previous 40 or 50 chapters. , I don't think it's long-winded anymore. Maybe the author wanted to make this book long, so there was such a long foreshadowing. I also had the patience to finish the book, especially because the author described some of the characters in the original plot, their personality traits, etc. Very well. Coupled with the author's own creative elements, I have to say that this book is great. There are no over-the-top elements, and some settings are indeed quite enjoyable to read. Come on, be optimistic about the author

Not bad, okay, but the front part is really too wordy.

I like this very much, but I want to ask the author a question. I feel that the writing style and narrative style of this novel are very similar to a book called Pirates of Darkness. Is it written by the same person or is he learning the style or is it a coincidence? [What] [Thinking] [Like] [Like] [Like]

Personally, I feel that the content is quite good among the many books I have read.

Number one in One Piece The miracle in One Piece is directly accountability and refutation. This is what the ocean should be like. If One Piece hadn't come out first, I once thought this was the original work. Every era is written in such detail and it's perfect here. He ranks first in my One Piece. The other pirates Rocks have all been mentioned in one sentence. Only here can I feel the real great pirate Rocks, the last sea overlord.

Don't care about other people's opinions, everyone has their own ambitions

In the early stage, you follow the Rocks pirate ship, in the mid-term, you vigorously develop national strength, and in the later stage, you control the world situation behind the scenes. The protagonist, a person with death fruit abilities, does not blindly follow the original work, but has his own world line. Very nice, five stars! ! !

Is this a direct transfer of the Olympian pantheon?

From the description of strength, power and characterization, I think the money is spot on, but there are too many mixed things. I don't understand those who talk about hydrology. What else do you want if tomatoes are free? Water is just water. Isn't it enough to just look good? The setting of this book is quite different from the original work. It can be read as a different world. It is a power portrayal. It has its own ideas. There are too many things mixed together. Fortunately, it is very comfortable to read. The narrative technique and the length of the plot seem to be watery. However, multiple comparisons highlight the character portrayal. Tomato is free anyway. If you write, I will read it. I am not afraid of tj. Good luck to the author [Like][Like][Like]

It's just too short, not enough to watch [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry]

To be honest, I don't think it's necessary to make it pure gold, because there are very few pirate fanfics that write about a protagonist from youth to old age. If the story of the protagonist's old age can be told, I think it can show more charm. Just like Whitebeard, if it only writes about his peak, I I feel that his charm is not just discounted, but completely gone. There is no story about his dedication to his family and his sacrifice in the war for Ace. So I am looking forward to seeing the development of the protagonist's country and the pirate group when he gets old. When that happens, I think this is a real masterpiece.

This book is still acceptable, provided you have the patience to read the introduction of the first 20 chapters. The world view is very good and looks very real. It's not nonsense, so you can take a look.

It's okay, but the general's combat power is a bit too much.

The world view is very good, and the world view is very good. The world view is different from others. He only writes according to the original work. Like you, the world framework has been set up, which is very good. The writing is also good. To be honest, I have read this book. What is the most popular number? Kingdom of Kronos

Invincible, I want to see the follow-up, Not the Holy Mother is very cool, [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like], and there are many second creations, but there are traces to follow. The pirates written by Oda are somewhat of a small life.

Very good, overall very good. One star missing is that the judgment of strength is somewhat problematic. I won't talk about Rocks' period. After all, there is no original work for comparison. Some people in the latter part always feel that it has been strengthened a lot. And another point is that the peak period is pushed too far. It feels like the peak period will weaken within a few years. The peak competition should last for a long time.

The article has great literary talent, gorgeous rhetoric, simple language, fresh writing, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch at the end, which is profound, thought-provoking, and long-lasting. The concept is novel, the subject matter is original, and the plot has ups and downs and is gripping.

Finished spreading flowers! ! The author's writing is very good. There are very few pirate fanfics where he can add his own settings that are consistent with the original work. He has expanded the original story line and structural settings, and truly demonstrated the expanded pirate world. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

To be honest, it sounds very good, and after reading this book, I can't find anything similar. I have been looking for similar books today, such as Underground King, starting a kingdom, and creating your own power. I searched them all, and I couldn't stand it anymore. I can only say that this kind of One Piece power story has been raised by this book (not that the others are not good, but this book is indeed very suitable for power stories in many concepts. The emotional scenes are basically about how to make your country and family stronger)

Although it's a bit watery, the plot is well written I'm a little bit confused, is this monster army a little too much? It feels like the Big Mom Pirates have several emperor-level combat powers, and Garp can't even take advantage of Hades's son? Is the pirate's high-end combat power a bit too much?

I appreciate it so much. It's much better than what I wrote.

After reading it, I don't know what to say. I can only say that this book is really excellent, which is equivalent to writing the story of One Piece from another level.

It looks great, come on! On the basis of the original work, more superpowers have been added to further improve the pirate worldview and make the plot more exciting. The previous chapters have been laying out the worldview, very detailed, with various layouts. The following chapters are about developing the country and raising sons.

This kind of farming behind the scenes, and the protagonist himself is very strong and likes it very much

The content is substantial and every character is well described.

The great powers are competing with the world government, and the great pirate forces have support behind them. Then the Roger Pirates can become the Pirate King, is it supported by the descendants of the D family?

It's better to use less names of football figures, it always feels weird [laughs]

Better than 90% of pirate novels

Very well written. It's very immersive to watch.