The Plot Collapsed After Becoming Cannon Fodder

I have now read Chapter 11. Well, I am making suggestions based on my feelings. It may not be very accurate because I usually read novels without thinking. I only come up with ideas when the protagonist is wronged. I feel that the first chapter is about the psychological activities of the protagonist and the systematic dialogue. Most of the second chapter is dialogue, which makes it seem a bit tired. The subsequent chapters also have too much inner thoughts and very little plot, and the plot is very bland and ordinary. Chapter 10 has too many dialogues, 11 Most of the chapters are the first day, the second day, etc., All describing the psychological activities of the protagonist. One or three paragraphs are okay, but writing them all shows that this book is very poorly written, and the plot has not passed. This is what I feel through feeling, it is quite good, but I have read Chapter 11, and I feel that the plot is not even half of the 11th chapter. There are too many dialogues and psychological activities. OK, I still shoot my five-star [air kiss] [air kiss], I want to be the first [adoration] [adoration]

I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it [Blowing kiss] [Adoration] [Admiration] [Send heart] I hope the author can do more [Blowing kiss] I really like the interaction between the female protagonist and the male protagonists, I really like it (I hope there is no cp in the main text, but I can give each male and female protagonist a 1v1). The life experience of the male protagonists makes people feel so distressed [crying] But with Ali here, it will definitely get better and better!

It's a super, super good-looking [Adoration][Adoration], the heroine and the male costars are very good at fighting each other. I hope there will be an extra [Shy][Blowing Kiss] after the end. The author, please don't stop updating, come on! [Blowing kiss][top post][top post]

The writing is outstanding, the descriptions are vivid, the heroine is cute and interesting, the speech and psychological description are quite playful, and the contrast is very good. The cold and beautiful appearance hides an interesting soul, which always makes people's eyes shine. She is a top student and a good friend. She can always surprise people, and the CP is also very good!

It's super invincible and beautiful. The female protagonist is very cute. Each male protagonist has his or her own personality. I love it so much. It's so beautiful. I love watching it. Please give me more updates. I can't get enough [crying] [crying]

It looks good, except that sometimes it's easy to type the wrong names of people, there's nothing wrong with it. But why is no one watching? Weird

I think the author wrote it very well, great! The style of the article is fresh and elegant. I really like the character of the heroine and the images of the boys are perfectly created!

It's very good to watch. I've said important things three times. It's really good to watch. I like the heroine very much. My favorite male protagonist in it is Gu. He is really kind, gentle, sincere, and good to the heroine. The key is that he and the heroine have the most sense of camaraderie. I really like it. Can the author give him a sequel? @Never be a scholar

I love you very much. Although it is a little immature, it is really just right for youth [Send heart]

The author writes very well. Every character is very attractive. The heroine's personality is also very lovable. I really like Gu Xianzhi! ! ! ! ! I want to hold a banner for him! ! ! ! ! ! Please ask the author to write a good ending for them [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy] Haha, in fact, it's not just Gu Xianzhi who I also think matches the heroine very well. Xuexue and the heroine are also stumbling so hard that they can't help but blush, who can't love them! ! ! ! ! ! [Shy]

Ahhhhh! This novel is very good, I really like to read it.

Ahhh, it looks good. I like the heroine so much. She is beautiful and good at learning👌🏻

It's so beautiful, I really like the heroine's character and the author's writing style [Blow kiss] By the way, is there a male protagonist? [Thinking] The author reads it to me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update it. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding. This is true day and night.

It's so beautiful, the heroine is so cute [blowing kiss]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Like like like

It's pretty, I like it anyway

Wow, it's not very good at all. What kind of fairy treasure novel is this?

It's pretty, but it's really pretty

Overall it's pretty good, but I didn't expect the author to suddenly run away at the end, which was shocking.

The more I read, the better my writing became.