Divine Condor*****

Come on, come on, come on, come on!

It looks good, keep writing hard and don't want to be a eunuch

Five stars for encouragement, the story is well written. But I hope that the author will change two small details, so that more people will read this book. First, the protagonist's name is unified into Yang Guo, which makes it easier for readers to watch, and readers who have read The Condor will also have a more sense of involvement. Second, the author's descriptive techniques are somewhat, how should I put it, a bit bland, which means it is a bit boring to read. Although the story is generally based on Shendiao, the author has made many adaptations, and the changes are quite good. The author's creation of the main protagonists Yang Guo and Guo Fu is relatively successful, but Xiao Longnu is a bit stiff. Could it be appropriate to add some language descriptions, make the text descriptions more ups and downs, and make the narrative techniques more varied? Then this book should be very successful. The story of this book by the author is still very exciting and has many outstanding points, but it also has some shortcomings. The above is just my personal opinion, and I should give the author a bit of a bystander's perspective.

What a pity that such a beautiful novel has to be blocked

Not bad. The plot of the original story has not been changed much, and the characters have not changed much. The only Yang Guo that has changed is the modern version of Yang Guo. I hope the subsequent plot can be written excitingly, otherwise it will be boring.

It was changed once before, to Yang Guo, and then to Yang Guo. Should I change it or not? [What] The others are pretty good, except for Li Mochou, who is more than ten years behind, so the heroine won't have her.

I think this book is the best book I have ever read in the fanfic category of Shendiao. I hope it will become a big hit.

Come on, come on, come on, read this book

The author is really good. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] There is a part at the beginning where it is clear that the person is pretending to be confused. It's a bit uncomfortable to watch. Everything else is great. The rhythm of the plot [laughs][laughs]

It's very beautiful, and the author's writing style is pretty good among Tomatoes.

The plot is still pretty good, just hang in there and don't be a eunuch.

Well written, keep it up

I hope you can write it well and don't try to confuse people. Shendiao should be good and Shendiao should not be comprehensive. Come on, five stars.

This is a five-star review. Keep it. Speaking of which, you have gained the favorability of so many people. I am very curious about how you will deal with it when the time comes. [Learned]

The novel is really worth reading. I support the author in continuing to work hard. 666

Keep writing, don't finish it.

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It seems okay for the time being, but there is one thing I don't understand. Yang Guo will be Yang Guo, and return Yang Guo. Is it time travel or rebirth?

Oh oh oh oh, oh oh oh oh, baby, please update soon. I enjoyed reading it so much. I have no more books to read. Please update it quickly!

Very exciting, clear and logical, rush rush

It's really super good-looking, I haven't seen such a good-looking Shendiao fan for a long time [Adoration] [Blow kiss]

There is no system to watch, just whether we can leave the harem!

Come on, come on, I love you so much. Great author, your writing is really great. I am waiting for your update every day [Blow kiss] I hope you can come on, your book is the motivation for me to come to Tomato every day [Adoration]

Come on come on. Good

Must be five stars, very beautiful

Very good, keep looking forward to it.

Author, can you write some emotional lines?

I was about to go to bed when I found this book that I love

Great author, will there ever be a Shameful Ecstasy Palm?

I don't know if there is Dugu Nine Swords