[Naruto] Who Poked My Grave! ?

What should I say? After reading it in a day, it can be said that it is not a direct torture that makes you eat a knife, but a dense pain after careful tasting. Yiguang was too miserable. He couldn't influence the opinions of Madara and Hashirama. He could only watch their backs getting further and further away. He was silent, silently accepting his own ending. "Are you going to abandon me?" Yiguang still opened his mouth while looking at Madara's leaving back. What was he thinking at that time? What were you thinking when you later learned that your mother had been killed by your father? What was he thinking about when his father married someone else? I don't know, maybe only Yiguang himself knows that he can do nothing but wait silently for the end of his death. Perhaps, at the moment of death, he finally gained freedom and finally left the courtyard that trapped him in his short life. Mu is an unexpected child. Her birth represents the death of her mother. Will she be curious about who her mother is, having never seen her mother? Will she feel sad when someone says she is a disgrace to Uchiha Izuna? Yes. What were you thinking when you were killed by your own father? Will you despair? The girl's father represents the ocean. Does sleeping in the ocean represent returning to her father's arms, just like her father held her when she was born? Finally, when will Chieko die? I hope everyone is happy, or that Yi Guang can really get some sleep.

To be honest, it's quite beautiful, and the writing is also very good, but it's really convoluted. My brain is about to explode. The writing is really, really good, so good that I can't understand it [crying]

Not bad, not bad. The author is very bold and dares to think. I was shocked three times when I read this novel! ! ! But this book uses humorous sentences to make my heart ache. It's not the death of a person, it's the kind of heartache that makes people feel sad, but it's a helpless tragedy. Truly moved from the heart, not just a beheaded knife between yin and yang. At the same time, I still want to say one more thing. The author has a good idea. I never thought that fan fiction would have such a setting. There may be one or two pairs in other fan fiction. You have really put together all the clichés. It's amazing!

Coming from Xiaolujiang, please come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

I like it very much. It's very interesting. Goodbye to those who don't understand this book.

The setting and writing are pretty good, but the timeline is so confusing_(:з∠) It feels like a lot of things are not explained clearly, and the endings of many people are not explained. It feels like a collection of short stories inspired by imagination, because the same settings are put together. The perspective change and the span of time and space are very large, but they are not specified through clear descriptions. Both Yiguang and Mu are full of contradictions and tragedies, both in their origins and in their growth. The stories between them and their parents and between them and Him, the grudges between Uchiha and Senju, the confrontation between Konoha, the family and individual ninjas, the story of the code in the future, why he came back to help Yiguang and Mu. There is also the main storyline of Naruto saving his mother and the source of grudges (p_q) The stories that can be extended and told are very rich, and I feel that there are still many things that can be written. The writing is really great (//∇//) I hope there will be additional chapters to supplement it. Looking forward to the author's new book (⑉°з°)-♡

Ah, it's beautiful. The description of the three members of the family together before Hashirama was separated really gave me a very warm feeling. In the end, Madara was killed by Hashirama (although it was a fake death), and Yiguang and Hashirama had a quarrel. When Yiguang died, it reminded me of why we came together. It's a pity that time can't go back to that warm time.

Ninjas are people who know joy and sorrow. This sentence is really good. How many tragedies have been caused by instrumentalist ideas? Yiguang, a child of light, was trapped in darkness. The cherry blossoms in the courtyard never bloomed until her death. Mu, is the daughter of the sea, buried in the sea. In the end, did she hate her father's indifference, or was she already numb? What is a ninja? This article cannot be read purely as a CP article, because it exposes ugliness more than warmth and is more redemptive than love. My child, are you truly at peace? The author is good at using the camera and switching techniques, which is suitable for handwriting, movies, or short stories, but for novels, too many techniques will appear a bit confusing. But I understand. Also, the characters are complex and the emotions are the same. Sometimes if you don't understand them well, you will be letting the author down a lot.

Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was a cookie. . Look back, huh? Why does your cake (chew chew) look so weird (bleeding from the corner of your mouth)? After watching it, I was very energized. I couldn't sleep much and was a little bit upset [I almost cried]

Although it's depressing, it's really beautiful.

Very good! ! If the author wants to write an extra chapter in the future! ! I would like to ask the author if he can write about the main world in the future, which is the four battles in the main storyline of Naruto that we are watching now [which is the plot of the original Naruto anime] [Thinking] Watching the movie Now, the author, what is the plot in this book? During the Fourth World War, we watched the plot of Yi Guang and Mu's world together [heartfelt] I think the author portrayed the psychology of Yi Guang and Mu very well! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] So can I write this extra? [Top post][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] I really love this book! ! ! ! !

I felt so empty inside that I changed my account number twice and kept this book in each account. I remembered at noon today that I haven't watched it for a long time. After watching it, I felt like I lost strength. It's very complicated. It seems like I watched it last year. I think I waited for almost a month at the longest. I waited for a long time before updating a chapter. I never felt that the author was lazy. I am very happy every time I see a new chapter ^ ^ When I saw the comments left on my first account, I felt powerless. But I'm happy (˶ᵔ ᵔ˶) it's over No need to wait. Thank you author.

Do it well, but don't use too many knives. Yi Guang's character transformation is very good and smooth.

It's sad, heart attack, and my eyes want to pee [crying][crying][crying] I just saw chapter 36. I came relatively late. I looked at the table of contents and found that it is a discontinued author. I like the setting very much. I have all the cp's, but I'm a bit brainless. I haven't thought of that yet. Who is this thief? And he has a wife who cooks. I feel like I can grow my brain after watching this. It's still good-looking. I didn't know how to abuse it at first, so I watched a little bit and realized something was wrong. It was too late. I fell in. It's set to eat me. No, I'm going to bed. I can't stand it anymore. I'll check it out tomorrow. It's not that I read it wrong, I'm sorry, this book is finished, but it's actually finished, goose goose, I'm going to read it in a dark and twisted way, it's really good to read [code] [The God of Sparrow Food]

"The bones and flesh return to the Senju, and the blood and eyes return to the Uchiha" The author really wanted to kill me [I feel wronged] I thought it was a funny article...

It's a shame to read this ancient drama. Of course, if it wasn't written like this, it wouldn't be full of ups and downs. It's really exciting, but it's very exciting. I recommend you to follow it. Overall, it's very good, but you just have to endure the pain to read it.

It feels really good! ! Working hard to sell! ! But more importantly! ! ! ! Obviously I'm here to read fan fiction! ! ! ! Why did you eat a mouthful of knives! ! [Angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] But still the education

It's nice to watch, but there's no reason why the author is so sharp. It's too sharp. Yi Guangguang can't live. He clearly doesn't want to live. It feels like a peaceful death.

It's very beautiful. Yiguang is a heart-wrenching child, and so is Mu. They are angels who came to the world, but there are always people who don't want them to have a good time. The bones that were used, the bones that were soaked in sea water, and even the souls exude the smell of decay after reincarnation. It's really surprising to see the latest chapter, whether it's Mu's death again or the belated letter from home. No matter what, I hope you will finally achieve what you want.

In summary, how do Iguang and Mu feel about his father killing his mother, about his mother's humiliation, about his own death, and about the Senju and Uchiha families? They are very similar, yet completely different. Yiguang has not had a surname since he was born. Yiguang is Yiguang and only Yiguang. He has been burdened with the powerful power of Senju and Uchiha since he was born. He has been burdened with illness since he was born. Is this what he wants? Maybe all he wants is to love his parents, live an ordinary life, and die in an ordinary way. Madara and Hashirama have complicated feelings for him and love him deeply. Yiguang's feelings for his parents are pure and dependent, otherwise he would not call out "father" and "mother" in times of crisis. After he was abandoned by his mother, after his father killed his mother and married a wife, Yiguang did not hate them. (In fact, I feel that Yiguang was a victim of harm. Afraid, afraid of losing, but also hoping that he would be loved and accepted) In the end, he learned that his bones had not left the small courtyard and had no grave. Yiguang was sad and painful. He wanted to get rid of it all but couldn't. The last action he made may be that he loved too much (not for Konoha), so that after learning the truth, it turned into endless hate, endless sorrow, and the small courtyard that he could not get out of until his death... Mu, Senju Mu, Uchiha Mu, her fate seemed destined from the moment she was born, from the time her mother was killed. She was destined to become a Senju, and she was destined to be for Konoha until her death (death after resurrection). She spent her whole life for one question, but no one answered her. In the end, she got the answer, and the question that had trapped her all her life was finally answered. Does Senju Tobirama hate his daughter? Not for love? Not really, out of guilt? Maybe. He wanted to hug her and comfort her, but every time he thought of Uchiha Izuna, he couldn't take that step. Qianju Mu has been pursuing a question her whole life. On the edge of the cliff, her doubts about this question have deepened, but she has not received an answer.

It's really awesome. He was created by the yin and yang chakra, and then he was exposed to the blood-stained disease. After his death, he was used to poke his grave. It's so miserable. It's not about torture, but it's fate. It's doomed to be destroyed. It's the same ending as the original Banzhu. The sister is also miserable. The two children are miserable every day. Whoever has the fate of the two children will chop them off.

Come on. My writing will get better and better

Very good~ A rare subject matter and a unique approach. Except for a few typos and occasional fluent sentences, it can be considered excellent. Please give it a try~

The ups and downs of the content caught my eye.

I will always wait and wait

The writing is good and the characterization is good. It's just that the narrative in the first few chapters is a bit confusing and I can't tell the time. I was still fighting at the beginning and then I arrived in Konoha. Come on author

This article is really good, very vivid, and it feels like they are alive. It can be said that it is one of the best articles I have ever read on Tomato. I would like to ask you to add another chapter, just one! ! !

So pretty woo woo woo

Looks great. Love it. Love it.

The knife is really too sharp.