Soul Passing Luffy: the Red Pirate World

Very good, come on, the author. In addition, there are many mistakes. Zoro in Rogge Town got "The Third Ghost Tetsu" instead of the "Second Generation Ghost Tetsu", and the "Second Generation Ghost Tetsu" is in Wano. Then, why are the staff codenames of Baroque Works all Miss?

Okay, just a bit short

I have read Chapter 22. This is by far the most satisfying and almost the most satisfying of all the One Piece novels I have read. It is not the best, but the development and arrangement are the most comfortable! In addition to the small flaw of not changing Nami's fate in advance, is there also the fact that Noki Gao doesn't even deserve the name and identity of sister? I really want to deduct one star (it's best not to use the audio book for Chapter 22, because it will be annoying to listen to too many panels, but the author said later that it will be reduced, I hope it can be done)

The writing is good, but the protagonist is too smooth. Without going through hardships, would he be arrogant and proud? But it's not bad to push it all the way. After all, it's a novel and that's all.

It's so beautiful [crying] No matter what others say, you must persist, you must persist, persistence is victory, you are the best. I tell you that it is their reason that they don't like to read it, not yours. Your writing is also great. There is no way to satisfy everyone. So, there will always be people who think the same as you, there will always be people who support you, and then you can write it yourself and think about it. It's really great.

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It's not bad, but the ending is a bit sloppy, but I understand that everyone has to eat, as long as it's not a bad ending, so I give it a five-star rating [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

So far, there are some minor problems and flaws, but they don't affect the look and feel of the entire book. It's great. Good luck, author! ! !

The plot is good, come on

I beg the author to have more female protagonists

The plot is okay, but there are a lot of typos. Simply put, I recommend reading it.

A novel that made my eyes shine. The author must not stop updating it. I will give it to you as a gift for the first time [Cool]

I just said that I can still watch it based on the plot, but the details are problematic. All I can say is that it would be great if I could give it three stars. It entered the belly of Rabu the whale, and then Rabu the whale showed its head in the belly of Rabu the whale? ? ? There are so many details that we can't get enough of. Are the Third Generation Onikiri and Yuki Kakeru the quickest swordsmen? Details determine success or failure. I would say that the score is less than 8 points. It turns out there is a reason.

Although he is quite good-looking, Luffy is not Luffy, and he doesn't feel that good-looking without the laughter.

It is said that Zoro is a road fool. What if he gets lost in the sky after finishing the Piaopiao Fruit this time?

A unique new plot.

Well done for killing Momonosuke!

Not bad Come on

Is there just no heroine?

It's okay, but the author was too anxious and many timelines didn't match up.

Four stars. The first part is almost interesting, the middle plot is good, but later on you can see that the craftsmanship of this book is average, and it returns to the feeling of the early period.

It looks good, but a little short.

If the word count wasn't too high, it would be a great fanfic.

Very good, written, late, sorry

All in all, Momonosuke's death requires five stars.

It's great. Ace and Whitebeard's dream came true. Thank you.

Very nice, but the updates are too slow and too few. Five stars will be given to you when you update more.

I really have no regrets, the Thai pants I wrote are so spicy [like]

It's a really good novel. No pity, I met a little late. Like, Like, Like

Big cheers for the author! The content is very good. The author is so short [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]