I Can Freeze Time

The later plot is good

Damn, the main character is as good as a dog

Don't include too much introduction about the author, and don't include too much introduction for the sake of word count. It looked disgusting.

The attribute panel appears too frequently and there are too many character transitions. The foreshadowing of the harem in the later period has been laid, but the novel's concept and soul are not there.

Two attributes in one chapter, True Nima Water

The system is not powerful. The protagonist is arrogant and arrogant. Afraid of wolves before and tigers behind. It's too much waiting. It's embarrassing for the time travellers.