Scourge Walks in Hogwarts

The writing is very good, but it's a pity that there is a female protagonist [I understand]

After reading it (currently Chapter 57 of the Goblet of Fire story is almost over) give a general review; The protagonist is a magician from ancient times who is invincible in this era (currently 57 chapters). The heroine Hermione is very well written and has a very mature personality. There is no cliché plot. The beginning is the plot of Sirius. The protagonist is arranged in the Eagle Academy. In the future, he traveled to the main line hundreds of years ago and founded a big force. He swore allegiance to the protagonist. This matter involves the time theory written by the author. You can read the details for yourself. It will be clear after more than ten chapters. The evaluation is that it is a high-quality HP article. The only drawback is that the book is new and there are not many chapters, but the updates are stable.

It's beautiful, so beautiful. It's been several months since I last read such a good book. I hope the author can keep this kind of writing style. This is much more comfortable to read than some white texts.

It's good to watch, but the protagonist is a bit cowardly, and the plot development lacks imagination. The plot is a bit old, and the relationship between the protagonist and the supporting characters is not handled well. I don't really like the love between the protagonists. The protagonist is not written decisively enough. The first few pictures are not very good. If the plot is okay, I can also improve it. Overall, it is good. The emotional plot is not delicate enough. The emotional plot is not delicate enough. It is written suddenly and makes people feel a little greasy and a little crazyヽ(≧Д≦)ノ

The plot is good, and the candy is very sweet. I originally wrote a 600-word long review to complain about the war with death (mainly complaining about the poor strategy of the protagonist group, and being stolen by death), but after thinking about it, I deleted it. I hope the author will use less knives and give more candy, less Riddler, and more straightforward plot. As we get older, we like to watch candy [Blow Kiss]

From the plot point of view, it is very good. I like this feeling very much [laughs awkwardly] [laughs awkwardly] Why is this heroine Hermione and not Luna. I don't mean to discriminate against Hermione, I'm just tired of reading too many heroine stories about Hermione. Although I don't have a big problem with Hermione, I still like Luna better. If possible, I hope the author can write the heroine as Luna when writing HP novels again? Please [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] This is just a small request from a little fan of the author [Laugh] [Blow a kiss] [Like] [Love] A little bit embarrassed [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

This book can only be said to be a masterpiece of Harry Potter fan fiction. The plot is smooth and basically deviates from the original plot, but it is consistent with the world view and timeline of Harry's world. Hope it ends. Come on.

I hope the author will not stop updating The subject matter of this book is very novel and different from ordinary fan fiction. But it's very good-looking. It has a single heroine. It's a pity that the heroine is Hermione [face covering]

Okay, perfect and handsome, but there is a little problem. You are gone and so is Death. It doesn't have to follow the original plot. That would be too deliberate. But if you want to change it, you need to control the scale and describe a magical world that looks reasonable.

Although I haven't started in the first grade, I still feel pretty good

It looks good, I should recommend it to others. This doesn't look good, so what's good?

To be honest, the protagonist of Legacy is very good at learning a small part of ancient magic. If he is more powerful, he can cast spells silently. Damn it, even if it flies to shrink the thunder and lightning, Voldemort has no ability to kill the Sixth Company. The protagonist can improve the three unforgivable curses.

Good looking, no poisonous spots

Really super pretty

Personally I think it looks very nice! ! !

It's been a long time since I've seen a high-quality HP article [Like]

The writing is good, but some details are not handled well, and the author is very imaginative, almost expanding the world view on HP. The writing is quite good, so I will give it a five-star review.

My biggest feeling after reading Chapter 11 of Volume 2 so far is that the author can actually do without the IP of HP. In fact, only a small part of it has something to do with HP. Of course, I don't rule out that this is still a great novel.

6. No rebirth, no system, one step at a time, the protagonist is lonely but not lonely, he has love and heart

Well, so far, I feel pretty comfortable, but I don't know why the score is so low. Don't be a eunuch. I don't want to go crazy looking for fanfics in the middle of the night.

It makes me sad to write this

Well written, but a bit short

Poor Anubis, he can't do this or that

It feels good to see today. Come on!

The overall feeling is quite good, and the identity setting of the protagonist is very novel. And it doesn't follow the original plot, but it fits the worldview and intersects with the main plot. The only problem is the relationship issue. The heroine is currently Hermione, but the protagonist should go back to the past. How will this episode be handled? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I spent 3 hours skimming this book, and another 6 hours reading it carefully. The logical line is complete, and the emotional line is not missing. If this book can be written like this and not unfinished, it will definitely become Tomato's fifth magical book.

It's very well written. Please support me.

Nine points or even ten points is good

Very awesome Klaas

I feel like it's well written. The author doesn't know how to be a eunuch [laughs awkwardly]