Mysteries Fade and I Am Immortal, Old Gods Pass Away and I Live Forever

Oh my God, this should be considered a new genre. The writing is delicate and interesting, and the plot has no poisonous points. There are just too few MDs. It's so painful that I have to keep reading again!

It looks good, Gou Dao gene has soared. The protagonist started out as a little boy (the kind who wants to be poked by the priest), then he was found to be Liu Chan, then Gou Jian, then he thought he was the FGO version of Qin Shihuang, then Fuxi, then he was found to be the Warhammer 40k Emperor, and now he is the mother of thousands of children. Ps: I don't agree with the loli mimicry that has not evolved with white hair and red eyes.

The plot is reasonable (has it reached the first-middle-low level? If the word count goes up and keeps up, it will probably be as strong as the Black Star book), the characters are vivid, smooth, and addictive. I advise the author not to be ignorant and update it carefully.

Brother is cute, feel free to buy it, and it will be good-looking. Style: This book is more mysterious and restrained. Characters: The protagonist is a mysterious creature (a two-meter-tall white moth with compound eyes?) Plot: The protagonist is currently the Pope, spreading the gospel (two dimensions, true) Writing style: The writing is smooth and I haven't seen any typos yet (it could also be that I'm blind) Summary: Who doesn't like a cute (bushi) big fluttering moth.

A very good book. It is indeed Changsheng-ryu and Goudao-ryu, not some Tianjiao-ryu works with such titles. Some book friends told me to quit the early plot. I can only say that everyone's taste is different. After all, the protagonist is just an ordinary person. There are no powerful cheats. When facing unknown things, I feel that it is normal to feel afraid, worried and suspicious. Faced with a painting style that favors restraint, the protagonist does not have a God's perspective. He is not sure what the consequences will be if he is tainted with such a spiritual path. Just like when we encounter an opportunity with uncertain prospects in life, we will miss the opportunity due to hesitation and worry. Although in the eyes of many people he misunderstood the priest's good intentions and missed the opportunity, the protagonist has a longer lifespan and can explore and become stronger bit by bit. He does not bear any hatred for his family, and he has not offended any strong people inexplicably. The need for strength is not urgent, so the protagonist is very stable and stubborn. In the end, he has achieved great achievements like the Saint of the Western Continent.

Wow, I've read the author's first book, but I haven't finished it yet. I read it a long time ago. However, the writing in this new book is much better than the previous one. Great work for the author. It's only chapter 50 and it's not enough to read [laughter][laughter]

I have been reading it for a long time. I caught up on the last book. I was quite angry at the end of that book. I still have more to read. I will read the new book later. To be honest, maybe this book is not as to my taste as the previous one. I have indeed read a lot of medieval, Western fantasy, and Greek genres, and it is a bit boring. It left me with a slightly worse impression. The writing is still quite good, and I may continue to follow it. Five-star wisdom teeth.

"True psychology, all doubts" first summarizes the direction of the story in one paragraph, and immerses yourself in the story. Volume 1: The beginning of the western fantasy century, which is ignorant and strange. In the past, there was a legend of the mother goddess coming to the world, and in the later, the saint judged the world! The spirits of heaven and earth, no longer filthy, lead wisdom, and all praise the holy name; they have been sleeping for thousands of years, waiting for a breakthrough in the realm, and the world will change... Volume 2: The 'spirits' are all prosperous, pollution exists again, the Holy See is split, and the federation coexists. The saint Juesu sealed his coffin in ice, broke through to the fifth level, and brought peace to the world; the space Europa strategy, ascended to a foreign space, entered the sixth level of demigods, and unified the entire continent Three volumes: Brain in a vat, the universe is gone, resources are locked up, the regime can save itself? Use the Saint's Gate to invade Sonas, destroy the whole place, hide and collect, and catch them all in one fell swoop. The Federation invades, fusion shines, unlimited coverage, and half of it is charred. Reaching the true God, the world of gods is easy to talk about, the mystery of the realm, "order" and "disorder"... (Serialized) Starting from humble beginnings and achieving extraordinary achievements, the novel begins to describe the cruelty of the world, using emotions as the key to interests and leveraging the world. The novel throws up a lot of suspense at the beginning, and the later verification is even more profound. If you make a mistake, you will be doomed, thus setting a humorous and dark tone. As the protagonist grows, the world also continues to grow. Protect the world, protect my world, I Don't Eat Beef, in which the waves of the world and the vividness of the characters resonate with readers. The low rating of the novel does not represent everything. The number of book reviews and the reading time of various book reviews are enough to represent the charm of this book. The length and evaluation time of many negative reviews are particularly low. It is enough to explain the various dissatisfactions that I speculated during the period of updating the novel, especially a small dissatisfaction can lead to a big dissatisfaction. Now the book has been updated to hundreds of thousands of words, and those small shortcomings are just the evil deeds of those book friends. There are also many book reviews, which were very ridiculous after I read them. Some of them were followed by the previous negative reviews, and the content was without language, and there were many misconceptions. [If you want to know more details, you can ask me]

It's really beautiful, especially after joining the church. It's really cool.

I have read about 76 chapters so far. According to my evaluation, a long-time bookworm, it is only above eight, about 8.5. First of all, the advantages. The plot is compact enough, the subject matter is interesting, and although I don't like the plot development, it is still reasonable. Then there are the shortcomings. In many places, it may be due to lack of experience. The writing is a bit fragmented and stiff. To put it bluntly, it is not smooth and natural enough. It is like a chain that is not oiled. It is fine in the short term, and you may not even pay attention to it, but in the long run it will be uncomfortable, and the more you look at it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. Then there is the plot. The plot is compact enough, but it seems very thin because there is not enough lubrication. There are many supporting characters in a work, but for now, many supporting characters have little or no character development. For example, after seeing this, what impression do I have of the characters here? There is no impression other than the thin writing by the author. For example, for the image of the prince, I only have his sarcasm and submissiveness in the later period, but there are only a few sentences to describe these. What about the others? This is still a relatively important supporting role, but the writing and ink are so sparse that it makes no impression, especially for other characters. Many characters are like this, as if they were thought of temporarily and then offline temporarily. Without too much writing, they are just like tool people. This is where I mean no lube. A character can have primary and secondary roles, but just because he is a minor supporting role, we can't just write nothing. He will be offline temporarily without any warning and appear to be disconnected. The above are the biggest problems and opinions in my opinion. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Sometimes it's not that the bigger the world, the better the story, but the creation of characters is more important. For example, Jin Yong's martial arts are obviously ordinary people fighting, but you can still have a deep impression on the characters. There is a lot to say, I hope the author will do his best. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

Many people scolded the protagonist for using Su Yue to refine weapons. I think this is normal. They have nothing in common, and their only connection is the waiter who delivers messages to the protagonist during his sleep period. In terms of blood relationship, she is a collateral member of the protagonist's family who is not related by blood and is a descendant of the protagonist a thousand years later. It can basically be said that there is no relationship. The only problem is that too many details about the character made some people uncomfortable with her death. Some people say that Fang Yuan is more humane and kinder than the protagonist. I just want to say that anyone who has watched the live-action Qingmaoshan at the beginning will not think so.

"Under the crown of the flowing church, the iron-clad 'walking on earth'!"

The plot is reasonable, a standard villain story, the characters are vivid and lively, and it seems quite addictive. So far, the writing is pretty good, but I still hope the author will not make it unfinished. In the early stage, the protagonist's psychology is similar to that of ordinary people, and then he becomes less and less human (by the time I read it, the protagonist was a 4-meter-tall white moth with compound eyes, and his human form was an uncoordinated weirdo of 2-meters). The protagonist also kept doing tricks, and he beat the Pope to death and became himself. The leader has also changed the Pope and is now called the Crazy Pope. The faith has directly changed from a moth to a beautiful girl with white hair and red eyes. The protagonist is also constantly innovating. This thing is made into a figure and is regarded as the belief of everyone. I think the inspiration obtained in the early stage is too little, and it is normal in the later stage. The protagonist is now the top power in the Western continent and is preparing to explore the Mother Goddess, because when this thing is active, it can inspire Jordan. So far, the writing is quite good, I hope it will not be unfinished.

So pretty! This is the first time I have seen this type of Christian novel. The writing style is also good. It does not objectify women. There is no heroine. The protagonist is a very indifferent type. I feel that as time goes by, he becomes more and more divine. I really like this type of novel, and there is nothing that I dislike at all. Good luck to the author! You must keep writing and don't finish it

Dark literature novels are very friendly to egoists like me, and they are very interesting. From the beginning of the game, I have been holding on to the hook, and I have made good use of my immortality characteristics to hook up to the third level before I showed my prominence. It was not until the book Becoming the Mad Pope that I began to become a god and use my power to open up wasteland. Although after a thousand years of dormancy, science and technology exploded, and there was a huge amount of inspiration for the novel. Later, the settings of the heavens were opened.

I could write about a lot of topics, but I don't know why I feel like I have to finish it, but I feel like there's nothing wrong with it. But there is one thing to say, the work is much better than many 9.0 Book reviews, and it is worth reading. I saw the latest part. It turns out it's just the end of the first act. It's great [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

It's pretty, I think it's quite novel Well, I feel that not many people have read this book by the author. It's too short. I'm afraid I'll die from it again, so I'd better read it every day. Come on＼(`Δ')／

The author writes well about the protagonist's development after becoming an angel and becoming the pope. The description of the development is even more excellent. It has reached the state of development writing that is refreshing but not a nanny. It is recommended to continue to work hard to create greater glory. But the only flaw is that the description of the protagonist's fight in the harbor battle was neither decisive nor cautious enough.

The characters are vivid, the plot is smooth, and the characters are described with flesh and blood. It's very good. I couldn't put it down after watching it. It's so beautiful that I stayed up late to finish it, but! Why are there so few? Give me an update ah ah ah ah ah

A pretty good novel, It's not about adding points to the game. This point feels more like an evolutionary progress bar. The protagonist's form is still relatively small at the moment. Other forms should be added in the future. I look forward to the author's imagination. It feels like the plot has not yet unfolded, and the narrative pace feels like it could be slowed down a bit. The later chapters are a bit too much, and are a bit disconnected from the previous plot, and there are still too few updates.

The look and feel is quite good, and it gets better in the later stages. It can be said that the author has great ambitions, but he chose the wrong platform. Tomato is not suitable for overly ambitious novels. Rating (three stars for the public) Three stars for update speed Four stars for novelty The writing is more than three stars. I personally think it is four stars, but different people have different opinions, so it only represents my personal opinion. In short, the overall score is five stars to encourage the author, and I hope you can continue to follow.

This novel gave me a very good feeling, and I really like this feeling. Unlike other novels where the three views are so bad, this novel's three views are still okay. As for this novel, the articles written are also very interesting, but the updates are too slow. It took me so long to update so little.

It's good, but it's a disease of immortality. Most of the characters are "ephemeral", usually a person who has been described for twenty or thirty chapters. He jumps in time and passes away. The timeline of this book spans a very large time span of less than 100 chapters. A thousand years have passed, and from the Middle Ages to Cyberpunk, there are dozens of chapters. So this is more like reading a legendary epic and a history book of time, rather than a Cthulhu supernatural story. There is almost no sense of oppression of monsters destroying the world, but the process of the gradual rise of mankind.

The first thirty-five chapters are very well written, with a sense of medieval restraint and mystery just like when I first watched Lord of Mysteries. The following words feel like they were written by someone else. It would be nice if it was a serious medieval Cthulhu, without adding two dimensions to the label. I thought I finally found a good book again😭

It looks good, but I'm a bit unsure in the later stage. Personally, I estimate that it will be completed in about 400 chapters. I hope it doesn't end badly🙏 Finished with flowers, finished with flowers. The ending is a bit sloppy, but not bad.

The plot is smooth and has a small sense of déjà vu, but it feels grand. Then the characters in the book are well drawn. Not just the protagonist, but all living beings. The protagonist has an interesting personality.

Let's give it a five-star rating first. At present, the world view setting is reasonable, there are no bugs, and the protagonist's post-production setting and character design are not broken either (and I like to see contrast, Nanliang? Times more? Schrödinger [shy]! Lezi welcomes all comers! Lezi Moduo Modo [sends heart]), currently From the beginning, it is still a cp-free [like] (I hope the ending is also cp-free [thinking], and the protagonist's single-mindedness and pursuit of evolution can be held in check). I hope that all the foreshadowing will be filled in later & it will not be unfinished. Wow [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] It's getting more and more interesting later on [like] [laughing]

"Good-looking" is my general evaluation of the content at the end of this book. I highly praise the author's imagination. The author has expressed it well in terms of world view, character creation and details. The protagonist's name is Saint Jordan The author's description of this character is very detailed. The role played in the article is an "entrepreneurial master" composed of good qualities such as rational personality, good calculation, hard exploration, and courage to climb. In terms of plot and other aspects, the author uses some humor and a very small amount of comedy elements to increase readers' interest and to better enable readers to read on. In addition, I would like to mention that a series of titles such as Evil Pope, White Dragon, Pure White Church Saint, and Human League Saint are still too few for the protagonist of this book. I suggest the author add more [Evil Laughter][Evil Laughter][Evil Laughter]

The plot of the novel is very good, I hope the author will continue to work hard.

This book is indeed very good. Although the writing was too weak at the beginning, and the plot was a bit frustrating. Everything went smoothly after that. Well enough. Worth a look.