The God of Miracles Begins on a Desert Island

I'll check the reviews... You can't see the comments on the mobile phone right now. If you think there's something toxic, you can just @ me or comment directly to criticize me. But don't scold me for not accepting girls, then I might scold me back. After all, this book is not originally an article about accepting girls. Everything goes with the flow, and everything else can be discussed in a reasonable way. Well, those who scold me and those who want to leave suggestions can go to the book circle. I opened two posts...

It's good-looking, the world view is huge and novel, and the character of the protagonist is very suitable for me. All the adults and children in the family love it, and the kids next door are so greedy that they cry [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

The surprise is not bad, but I still recommend changing the title of the book. After all, with the current development trend, it will not be about surviving on a desert island, but more like raising a civilization. In the future, there may be some racial wars and battles between "gods" and "gods". Another thing is to write down the protagonist's fighting ability and common fighting methods. Just like the battle with the fungus tribe, there is no real sense. I just saw the text, but I couldn't imagine the picture.

I would like to give you some advice. The author's previous plot was a bit too jumpy, causing readers to lose a lot of time. It has gotten better now, but it still needs to be improved. For example, the description of the City of Miracles is too little, and a big change has occurred just by looking at it. I think it is possible to write a small character and use his eyes to present the City of Miracles. By the way, write about some things that happened to him. This can not only describe the background, but also write one more character, which can make the whole book fuller. Of course, don't put the cart before the horse, just insert one or two occasionally. Personally, I feel that the main line is progressing too fast now, so I can slow it down appropriately and don't write too hastily. And because the protagonist upgrades too quickly, the entire power system is a bit vague, and can be completed by writing about subordinates. To sum up, I feel that this book was written too fast. The author should not be too anxious. The rapid leap in the early stage will lead to a large loss of readers. The characters and background can be enriched. Having said that, give me a five-star encouragement.

Whether it is detailed description or general structure, this novel has no obvious flaws. Moreover, the plot is interesting and rich, and the protagonist's team style also tends to be cautious and joyful, without any disappointing elements.

The last few chapters have become interesting, Sao Feng is back

Not bad, just change the name. I saw it several times but didn't click on it.

Very good, there is no forced suppression of the protagonist and Goldfinger, and so far there are no plots where the combat power is broken or brainless (for example, the protagonist is very strong but barely wins every time, or there are a bunch of equally matched enemies)

Very nice, very supportive, and I especially hope the author can update it faster [laughing]

It's pretty good. The rhythm is very good.

To be honest, if you hadn't changed the title of the book from "Desert Island System and Momama" to "The God of Miracles", I wouldn't have clicked on it to read it.

Personally, I feel pretty good, just don't give up. The protagonist is very strong, so strong that he can change the rules and logic of the world at will. You think he is not that strong because all the protagonists encounter are beings at the same level as him. They are all beings that can change the rules and logic of the world. They are all concepts or even existences beyond concepts.

The book is good for me, but the name of this book makes many people uninterested. It would be better if I change the name to one I found in the book circle.

Brother, can you update it? If this continues, I won't dare to raise it anymore. I'm very afraid of raising it!

It looks good. I recommend changing the topic. This topic actually affects the number of clicks.

Surprisingly okay

Pretty good

Very good, can't sleep at night

Yes, you have a lot of imagination.

Not bad, very beautiful

A book delayed by titles and pictures

What about the two-headed bird? The two-headed bird is missing

Not bad, it's big and comfortable when hanging open. It's just that not many people read the book

A very recommended novel, it's just good

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Big cheers for the author!

What is Mumama? ? ?

Author, here I come again

Come on come on come on come on

I only saw Chapter 22. It seems that the trigger for enlightenment is too high. I prefer the plot before I drew this golden finger. Come back and have a look later Maybe the taste might have changed at that time.