I’m a God of Cooking in Another World

With the investment of time and energy, I can feel that the writing power has improved slightly, but the character creation is still very immature, and there are too many subjective descriptions. I don't know how to describe and clarify some book settings through objective descriptions, especially from a third-party perspective. More work is needed in this aspect. The protagonist Shan Chaofan is more like a confused majority, who only wants to go home for his own understanding. The description of other characters in the early stage is also very immature, and the opportunities for their subsequent appearance are also vague, making it difficult to reflect the role of supporting characters from other levels. The above problems are being continuously improved in the process of improving my writing skills. I have also changed from a person who holds back 6,000 words a day to a proficient at 4K in 3 hours. I have also noticed these problems in the process of improving my ability. In particular, I have made a lot of modifications to many of the previous settings and character descriptions. If you see something that you think is wrong, please go back and take a look. If there are no modifications, you can modify it again. I try my best not to eat the book! I'm a novice writer, I hope you can bear with me, thank you for your love!