Pokémon's Peak Breeder

There are many novels about cultivators, but very few of them are successful. I hope I will continue to update them [crying]

It looks good, come on, the heroine is the hero's grandmother, right?

It's rare to see Pokémon. It's hard to find one like this. Please update it soon [laughs] Kirby's lightning flashed? [What]

It's ok, just the ink stains are a little bit there

What can I say? Although the novel is described from multiple angles, with flashbacks and interludes juxtaposed to make the timeline quite obvious, it sometimes leaves readers with a very confusing feeling. Secondly, the character description has a bit of a female screen feel, which is very stretched, but the selection of Pokémon is very good. Overall, this novel is okay.

Yes, I hope the author will stick to it If I can't hold on, I'll send you a razor blade [smile]

If Big Mouth and Slowpoke are not part of the same egg group, can they end up together? When writing a thing, can I finish it all at once, then jump to another timeline halfway through writing, then write the result directly, and then jump back to continue the previous timeline after writing the result. This way of writing is enough once or twice. The timeline is too messy every time, and novels and literary works are still different. This writing method is not suitable for novels, and it is easy to arouse readers' disgust. It is a bit inexplicable. There is no reason for suddenly becoming stronger without knowing anything. The reason will be filled in after the process and results are finished.

I just read Chapter 50 and I like it very much. The main character is a bit funny and quite funny. After Chapter 150, I can't watch it anymore. It's so nonsense. I can't understand it at all. The combat power is completely messed up.

This book is very good to read. The main character in the early stage is a bit mediocre, which may be due to the author's lack of control over his writing skills. But later on, it can be seen that the writing style is getting better and better, and the plot is also full of ups and downs. Overall, it is a very good-looking Pokémon novel.

The bond between Pokémon is well written, but there are occasional typos and breakdowns in combat power.

Although the rating is not high, the author worked hard. [Sinister smile]

Good, good, good looking

It's very nice and suits my personal taste, but the number of words is not enough. I hope the author will continue to work hard. .

Great author, I hope you continue to work hard!

More details, overall a good book for newcomers

Come on, it's really beautiful!

Very nice I think

It's a bit short, it would be nice to be longer, but it looks good

Not bad, but why are there so many? Can't you use another tone instead? (Ah, um, wait)

This book is different from the cookie-cutter campus articles before. It takes the route of cultivating teachers, which is very novel.

Well, I have a small request, is it possible to add some female protagonists😳

The plot is really good, I don't know why the rating is so low

If nothing else, it's pretty funny.

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you!

Very good, please write quickly.

Come on, author, the book is very good

Come on, come on, come on

What are you doing when my mom is gone?

This book must be more than a year old, I can't remember clearly, the author is really crazy

I don't know what to say, so I'll give you a rating.