Don't read this novel yet. I'm going to revise it a lot. The first time I wrote a novel, the description was a bit too long and I wanted to describe everything. The plot moved too slowly. I will revise it again when I finish another novel.
Reader comments
Why do the books I like to read have so few chapters?
It looks pretty good so far, but I don't know what the rhythm will be like in the future. Collect it first.
I was really attracted by the introduction. Go your own way and leave others with no way to go... It's quite unique.
Xiong Daxiong II is quite funny, and the author is really unstoppable. It is updated every day.
This book is good, but it's a little short of updates (no matter how many times you update a day, I still think it's too little) [laughing]
Pretty good
I am so different. The protagonist has quite a personality. Come on, author! Do it faster
The comprehensive description deserves five stars. Come on, keep writing.
Five stars for you. If nothing else, judging from the early stage, there are no poisonous points. You can chase them.
Why do the books I like to read have so few chapters?
It looks pretty good so far, but I don't know what the rhythm will be like in the future. Collect it first.
I was really attracted by the introduction. Go your own way and leave others with no way to go... It's quite unique.
Xiong Daxiong II is quite funny, and the author is really unstoppable. It is updated every day.
This book is good, but it's a little short of updates (no matter how many times you update a day, I still think it's too little) [laughing] Pretty good
I am so different. The protagonist has quite a personality. Come on, author! Do it faster
The comprehensive description deserves five stars. Come on, keep writing.
Five stars for you. If nothing else, judging from the early stage, there are no poisonous points. You can chase them.