Win the World Championship and Defeat 100,000 Void Creatures

Three points are for stains. If you write stains, write them well. It is normal to use the system to make up for your regrets. However, what you wrote is too outrageous. It has become a fantasy. You can also add buffs to your teammates before the game. Brother Sha and Brother Fei have become Chinese directly. They are still in the EDG youth training. This is outrageous.

There is no bottom line about the word count and some nonsense, and it's still embarrassing

The subject matter is good, but the writing is shit

If you can't write it, don't write it. Whose game doesn't include any details of the game? Do you write in vernacular? One chapter a day? It's difficult to give birth.

The writing is good, but it's a bit watery, and the author is too lazy to write well. 666666, Direct fantasy, Geneva

Come on come on!

The sentiment is very good, but the writing is so rubbish

The idea is good, but can you stop being so watery? It's only been a few chapters and you're already crazy about this. What the hell is the last chapter? It's a whole piece of nonsense literature.

There is a lot of nonsense, I am convinced by you, there is so much nonsense [laughing awkwardly] [laughing awkwardly] [laughing] [what]

It's outrageous, it's especially outrageous. JDG becomes RNG, RNG becomes JDG, it's a combination of the two.

Not bad. .

It looks good without the needle pricking it

The extra two stars are for uzi.

When I saw Chapter 60, I was confused. I said I was fighting RNG, but ended up fighting JDG?

I don't like the experience card, it's boring