Young Junior Brother Siyangzi Lies Down in the Shura Field Every Day.

The writing is very good, and I am already enjoying it... One point that the author handled very well is that as Lily, he did not let the "female protagonists" fall in love with the "male protagonist" who wears men's clothing. Ye Er also likes the "male protagonist" who wears women's clothing, and is very aggressive towards the young prince [face covering]

It's good-looking. It's rare to see a fairy tale that doesn't focus on swordsmanship. The emotional line is also very smooth, not too fast or too slow. Senior Sister Jiang, you are so sweet, Senior Sister Chu, you are so sweet, Senior Sister Su, you are so sweet, Second Miss, you are so sweet, Pei Nian, you are so sweet, Zhanyue, you are so sweet... When can I fall off my horse in front of Senior Sister Jiang? It's so cute. Every time I see Xiaowan who is not masculine, I am very happy. Even Senior Sister Jiang, who works hand in hand with Xiaowan day and night, only realizes her feelings after Xiaowan's identity as a woman is exposed. Dust and Starry Sky Who Are You? But I still have one thing to say. The introduction and name are really weird. I only clicked on it because of the tags of "women dressed as men" and "heartthrob", and they almost persuaded me to give up. But the world view and settings are great🥺Please add more updates to Dust and Starry Sky, I beg you. (Look at the reading time

Cool! ! ! It's a cool story about two heroines. The heroine started out weak, so she felt a little frustrated, but she quickly started to level up. Moreover, the heroine's baby keeps improving, and the Shura field keeps increasing. [Cool] After the heroine recovers, the heroine directly transforms into a tender, peerless beauty who fishes for the second lady.

Really, only wearing a vest like this makes you more stable [Like] Indeed, it is really difficult to write about a hundred queens here, and they will be wiped out by the "way of heaven" accidentally. I have never seen this type of movie before. The main thing is that it combines lily, a woman disguising herself as a man, seizing the original male protagonist's luck, and a harem. The writing is okay (I may have read too many novels that take away the luck of the original male protagonist, so I feel a little bit indifferent). Except for this, the other plots are well written. At least I like it quite a lot, and the logic is clear. So, I personally don't think it's easy to be blocked, mainly because it's difficult to lock [smile]. Unless that **** uses force [punches hard] Having a vest as insurance makes me feel more at ease [Cool]

My Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to read 200 chapters every day. This thing is awesome. Doubao helped me generate bikini photos of the author. Doubao told the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, OS finally let me see something good. It's also very fast, okay. It must be highly praised. Watermelon is awesome. Cantaloupe, Sunshine and Rose are awesome. Coconut milk pie, coconut milk ends the game. ! It's awesome. OK, OK. I wish the author directly that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine, okay?

Very nice! Super pretty! I have been looking for this kind of NPC story with multiple female protagonists like Lily for a long time [crying] I finally found it! The plot is compact and not procrastinating, the setting is novel, and there are not many vicious cannon fodder scenes. Every girl is nice, not brainless, not fall in love at first sight They all have their own thoughts and take good care of the heroine o(≧v≦)o The heroine's baby is also very good, beautiful, gentle and kind, not a holy mother!

Xianpin [Admiration] [Adoration] is better written than some of Jiang's two-heroine novels! ! Great, I didn't expect to see such a great two-female article on Tomato! ! 1. First of all, the writing style is very good, above average level, and the description of some details is very good. 2. The characters of the heroines are set off by the writing style. The characters are very good and each has its own characteristics. Buy stock articles! Wonderful! Especially the setting of the heroine, the main perspective is the temptation. How to describe it, the gentle and weak temptation of Little Sun? The perspective is to see how various beautiful sisters 1 attack themselves [laughing evilly] How wonderful! 3. No more words! I won't say too much for fear of spoilers! Go and see it! No loss in investing! !

I feel that the plot actually develops a bit fast. I originally thought that the plot of this sub-timeline was just for Jiang in the sub-timeline to question the gender of the protagonist, and by the way to recognize his feelings for the protagonist, and the protagonist's strength. Moreover, the sub-timeline can really write a lot more, and to be honest, I feel that the B-level of the Demon King in this plot has dropped a lot (can this be said), and it suddenly feels very mysterious. The main palace with unique personality turned into a boss with a classic identity and fell in love with me. The character created by the illusion in the early stage was basically lost [crazy] This time the plot directly revealed the gender of the protagonist. I personally feel that the plot is developing too fast. With so many original heroines, each character can have some plots that are basically unique to them to write changes in feelings and changes away from the original position. But in general, the writing is okay, at least many of the stories are 9. Or so, but I can't read them at all. I can finish them immediately here, and the plot is still very attractive. I feel that the story is too fast, just like Miss Ye Er, seeing through the disguise of the protagonist. This is the most exciting part of watching Lily's story where a woman disguises herself as a man [crazy], but now I have just tasted the trend of ending after a little bit [crying]

It's well written. It's a good article with both writing style and logic that is worth reading. It is recommended that the protagonist should not be too weak emotionally (with the eldest lady). The most brilliant part is actually the part about cultivating immortals, especially the understanding of Fu Dao. It is rare to see such a refreshing and logical article. Come on, author, keep writing patiently and it will be a masterpiece with eight and a half stars.

It looks good, I like the subject matter, and the writing is good. I feel like it can be written into a long novel. Author, you must keep writing! Also, I want to ask how many heroines there are. Have all the heroines appeared?

The traditional upgrade flow of cultivating immortals is not bad. I just feel like the protagonist is suffering too much. It's not that I'm weak and weak, but I'm just so passive in front of the female protagonists, and my emotions are easily affected by others. I have a lot of inner drama and I blush easily. It's really uncomfortable [face covering]. Sometimes I feel a little aggrieved watching it.

This is the best thing I've seen on Tomatoes. It's full of all kinds of cool things, the female characters have diverse characters, and their emotional lines are just right. There are so many people watching that you don't have to worry about the update hahahaha

Help! The daily routine of a woman pretending to be a prince to save her life is so funny. She denounces the male protagonist and takes away her halo. All the beauties still prefer this sick man. The male protagonist is so tortured that he doubts his life. The more I read this article, the more addictive it becomes!

There is foreshadowing, there is foreshadowing after more than 200 chapters. Aunt Yun gives me a big score, and her heavenly guest gives me a lot of pleasure. It seems that she is the only one who has been tolerant and fond of the heroine from the most difficult period to the end. This kind of tendency to tolerate and like absolute from the beginning is the absolute right palace in my heart. Lao Jiang is really cool. The Qing Leng hexagram is great. Ye Xiugou is super sunny and is a super clingy Xiu Gou. Yue's gentle sister is really exciting, and Pei is really finished. In the early stage, the progress was ahead of everyone. Later, he was found to be unidentified and laughed to death. Fortunately, he finally came again after more than 400 chapters. In summary, it's a whole lot of fun to eat. (Ｔ▽Ｔ)ヾ(＠^∇^＠)ノ

The fantasy harem story about Lily that I have always wanted to read has finally been written by someone! ! ! The writing is excellent, and the emotions between the heroines are described very delicately. I have read a lot of articles about cultivating immortals, and many of them can only be imagined after reading the front part, but the author's ideas are very novel and not cliché, and the plots are also interlocking, very natural and not rigid! I read Zuo Wei and Shen Zhiyue many years ago. After reading it, I have always wanted to find this kind of fantasy novel with multiple female protagonists developing emotional lines. However, there are too few. After waiting for so many years, I finally got the hang of it😭 Who knows how you feel when you can't help but want to finish it but can't bear to finish it?

It's really good to watch. I didn't like books with too many 1Vs at first, but this one really shocked me. I used to mind women dressing up as men, but when I watched it, it didn't feel masculine at all. It just felt very gentle. The plot of cultivating immortals was also very interesting, and it wasn't all about emotions. It's quite passionate. The heroine is portrayed very well. Even I like the heroine a little bit. She feels so cute. I also like Zhanyue, Pei Nian and Aunt Yun. It's really not enough. I reached chapter 470 in 4 days. The author must not stop updating. Highly recommended. GL is really delicious😋

Very nice! The author has great writing skills! The characters are quite full! I'm very proud of it! I have been reading it for the past two days. This is the first time I have seen such a novel work. The more I read it, the more I hate the single-arrow Shura field in the introduction (just kidding, Lin Wan is such a big block). I don't know whether the 1v1 extra is a 1v1 extra for each heroine and Xiao Wan or there is only one 1v1 extra. Invest in Wanli, come on Wanli! (I don't mean to say that other CPs are bad. I personally like Wanli the most. I hope there will be more 1v1 extras.) [Crying] [crazy] Boss, when can our Lin 1 be served? [Crazy] Boss, if Lin 0 and Lin 1 each have a new heroine, [crying]

It's super good-looking. The author should break the filter of the heroine and quickly enter the Shura field. I want to see them fighting for the heroine to death [shy]

From the first two digits to the current three digits... Da Da really portrays each character very well. The personality charm of several characters really makes me fall in love with this one and that one🥺🥺🥺The emotional lines between Xiao Wan and everyone are so delicious... Everyone restrains themselves just to give Xiao Wan a place to grow wildly and freely... This novel "women pretending to be men" is not offensive at all, but more delicious, because women She doesn't have the sky-shattering Long Aotian setting. Her strength is really developed step by step. I feel like a grown-up daughter (?) Hart is soft and soft... Every time she cooks, it gives me the feeling of throwing sparks from the pot. Although she is very inactive in the comment area, she has already established a grand image in my heart of an unknown fried rice fanatic (can this be said? No matter, go for it, Master!)

It looks good, very enjoyable, but I wish there were less Shura Fields, which is a bit embarrassing, but it looks very comfortable all day long. Especially the whole process from the early stage to the later stage is particularly good-looking, and the cp is very difficult later. Ahem, but unfortunately the protagonist is a bit too serious... But it doesn't matter, the writing is okay, I hope the protagonist Goldfinger can be strengthened, because when facing the male protagonist of the original book and the inexplicable time traveler, it seems that there is a sense of uncertainty and confusion... Well, but the protagonist is very powerful! Come on

It can be seen that the author is still relatively young, the wording in some places is inappropriate, and the novel has a strong sense of Internet writing. As a novel of the fantasy and immortality genre, the dialogues of the characters lack distinctive features. It is difficult to tell who is speaking without the preface. In addition, the sense of online writing is due to the fact that sometimes there are words that do not match the background. It should be difficult for the author to find a better description. This is not to say that this is a shortcoming. After all, it is just an online novel, so don't ask for too much. If you don't know how to act, it is still worth reading. As for the plot, it's a bit anxious and lacks subtlety. For example, in the part where the protagonist lives in Ye Er's place as a canary, there are some scenes where the heroine pretends to be weak to win Ye Er's favor. However, both the heroine's methods and Ye Er's psychology are almost touched upon in one stroke, and are not very detailed. It gives people a sense that the plot is given but not written in detail. The framework is sufficient but lacks flesh and blood. Overall, the plot is greater than the details. The character creation is acceptable, and it does not give people an overly flat or illusory quality like a castle in the air. However, due to the flatness of Duan Shui, multiple female protagonists appear at the same time most of the time, and there is a lack of long plot single-stage development (I know that there are plots with a single female protagonist, such as Ye Er Canary, Pei Nian's Oath, Zhan Yue's Memory Redemption, etc., But for some reason I always feel that there is something missing, maybe a single serving of sugar?) This can only be regarded as my subjective feeling. But the author is already very good. I didn't say that I wanted to favor a certain heroine. After all, she is a queen, so everyone can be happy only if she carries the water. Finally, I really like Baihou! ! ! Especially since this kind of formal platform is really rare, I hope the author will work hard to make it bigger and stronger! ! ! Full support and five-star praise! ! ! There is no obligation not to support Senior Sister Su! ! ! The eldest lady, who is gentle, calm and a bit like a loser, still has low self-esteem. The looming femininity is just right when she is delicate, and the temptation is MAX! Please support our Senior Sister Su! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The writing is really good, and the characters have distinct characteristics. It would not be embarrassing if it was written so that the reader could take on the role. Some of the other double heroines are embarrassed to be substituted. It is very simple that the author on fq did not do it, but this author did it.

From the beginning, it can be seen that the main character is not smart and witty. He is not very thorough in showing off his bad skills, and he is not very diligent. The system is not very useful. The part where the male villain is jumping around for fun is a bit frustrating to watch. The protagonist doesn't take much initiative later on, and is basically pushed along by the plot. It's like picking a lucky reader randomly in the comment area and wearing it to replace her. But the author's emotional writing is really good. All the female characters are very interesting, and the part where the waistcoat is dropped is especially interesting (the five stars are mainly given here)

Mine Clearance seems to be about all the protagonists, Lin Wan, with a complex plot, rich characters, and good writing. It is not a simple mindless system based on the original male protagonist. There is nothing poisonous about it. If you like group pet stories, I recommend reading it. There is nothing cruel about it.

Each character is three-dimensional and plump, with their own distinctive characteristics and delicate emotions. Every character is cute (cute here means worthy of being loved) At first, I only liked Miss Ye Er and Pei Nian, but then I was gradually attracted to senior sister, Zhan Yue and many other characters. Each character has their own uniqueness. The author is really good at shaping the characters❤️ But I don't quite understand why there are so many illusions. Every experience is an illusion. Every time you conquer a character, you have to enter the illusion. Except for Miss Ye'er, I don't know if there is any foreshadowing behind it. I've only read more than 300 chapters, so don't blame me if I'm wrong.

Finally, there is a real article about fighting monsters and cultivating immortals. Before, the stories I read were all based on the story and interspersed with the practice. Now it is about practicing fighting monsters as the main body. Although a large part will describe the relationship between the protagonists, there are many more and more details about the cultivation and improvement. It seems that the heroine is striving to make progress in her career, and emotions are not the first priority. Although it is a new way of imitating male immortality stories (ten immortals and nine harems), it is still women as the main body, which is very novel. I also hope that there will be more articles describing women's careers.

Well, to be honest, this book about cultivating immortals is the second one that I like most besides Swords Asking the Heart, which is a multi-person and full-length book. The writing style is really good. The good heroine didn't say yes, the heroine didn't say yes. She was ill from the beginning, and she was very motivated, and she also attached great importance to love and justice, and she didn't ruin her three views. I basically started following it when it was about ten chapters in. I didn't expect that it would reach more than 300 chapters in a blink of an eye. I really liked this article. It gives me a very different feeling. Although it tends to be a victim of multiple attacks, in a later scene, the protagonist is not willing to be on the non-leading side all the time, but actively dominates other female protagonists. This is really something I didn't expect. Finally, this is the first time I have written such a long book review for a novel with two female protagonists. It is really very interesting. Please be patient and read a few more chapters, and you will find that it is very readable. ٩(*´◒`*)۶

Damn it, this novel is so awesome, it doesn't look like it was written by a human, it looks like it was written by a god, oh my god. How could someone write the emotional line and the various logical links on the path to immortality in such a complete and awesome way? Damn it. This huge world view astonishes readers. It is really unbelievable. It is really unbelievable to be able to write this novel. Every character in it is portrayed so well. The protagonist doesn't need to make seductive moves at all. He relies on his own continuous efforts to make himself stronger and go further. This charm is so attractive. Lin Wan is so charming! It is true that there is no meal replacement on the entire network. This novel is so excellent.

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How should I evaluate it? It's so in line with my heart. The previous text is coherent and smooth, the emotions are long-lasting, the articles are progressive, and the characters have distinct personalities. Among the chapters I have read so far, the author has handled it best, but at the same time, it is also the most likely to make people abandon the book. It is the explosion after the accumulation of emotions. When everyone's emotions are at the top of the bottle, it is the most difficult time to deal with it. This is my first time. When I saw them bullying the heroine, I thought they had done it. This is what I don't like the most, because it means that the author can't write anymore. However, I am glad that I read the comment section and know that the author's original text has some unchanged content. This is a good way of writing. It not only makes the article reasonable, but also shows the foreshadowing of the previous star seal. It is a model! The handling of the second heroine is also perfect, unobtrusive and with a real flavor of immortality. I like this author so much, but the modifications in that chapter are too easy to misunderstand. If I change one or two words or directly summarize the actions, it will be better than writing as if I have done it. This article is limited by the subject matter and has a limited audience, so the rating is less, but the author has a solid foundation and delicate emotional processing. I think it is absolutely worthy of being super beautiful.