This is the author’s first novel, so I hope readers will be understanding.
Naruto and Sasuke won’t be nerfed, and the main plot will be slightly altered. Boruto and Sarada will grow up together from childhood, and Momoshiki is Boruto’s peach trumpet. Sweet BoruSara. If you don’t like it, please don’t flame me.
Your article is like flowing water, written in one go. After reading it, I feel enlightened and enlightened: gorgeous diction, simple language, fresh writing style, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch at the end, which is profound, thought-provoking, and long-lasting.
I am deeply excited about this. There is such a good article in the world. I would like to send you some thoughts and ask if you can add a few more chapters. 😳😳😘😘[top post][top post]
Good, good, good
The author is so short. Sister-in-law, thank you for your hard work. The author is so short.
Not bad (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
The emotional scenes of Zuo Liangna were described in great detail, and the overall plot did not change too much. The animation party expressed their happiness.
The plot is also very fast, and the excessive water injection scenes in the animation have been deleted to ensure the quality.
The author ignored Boruto's chakra attributes. Boruto's chakra attributes are divided and thunder attributes. He also has a little water, but he has no fire attribute chakra, but he used a combination technique (fire plus wind) in front of Hanabi at the beginning of this year. Earth Shun can at least use some basics, but overall it is very good. I suggest the author review the changes in chakra properties and so on.
Can you keep updating every two or three days? Although the main body doesn't look good, the content is still pretty good 🤔
Anyway, it's very beautiful
Very nice, keep going
The author will come back soon
Yes, there are not many books by Zoliana. There is one
Your article is like flowing water, written in one go. After reading it, I feel enlightened and enlightened: gorgeous diction, simple language, fresh writing style, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch at the end, which is profound, thought-provoking, and long-lasting. I am deeply excited about this. There is such a good article in the world. I would like to send you some thoughts and ask if you can add a few more chapters. 😳😳😘😘[top post][top post]
Good, good, good
The author is so short. Sister-in-law, thank you for your hard work. The author is so short.
Not bad (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ The emotional scenes of Zuo Liangna were described in great detail, and the overall plot did not change too much. The animation party expressed their happiness. The plot is also very fast, and the excessive water injection scenes in the animation have been deleted to ensure the quality.
The author ignored Boruto's chakra attributes. Boruto's chakra attributes are divided and thunder attributes. He also has a little water, but he has no fire attribute chakra, but he used a combination technique (fire plus wind) in front of Hanabi at the beginning of this year. Earth Shun can at least use some basics, but overall it is very good. I suggest the author review the changes in chakra properties and so on.
Can you keep updating every two or three days? Although the main body doesn't look good, the content is still pretty good 🤔
Anyway, it's very beautiful
Very nice, keep going The author will come back soon
Yes, there are not many books by Zoliana. There is one
A cough, Peach Lama