The First Genius Idol

You have a wonderful brain circuit. Other "I recommend" fans are thinking of kidnapping Hoshino Ai. If you are good enough, you can directly become Hoshino Ai [laughing and crying] The writing is okay, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch. First of all, let's be honest. The following opinions are purely my personal opinions. If you don't like them, please don't criticize them. Let's talk about the advantages first: there is nothing too toxic, the girl's Tie Tie scenes are well written, the daily life is very warm, and the memories about Hoshino Ai that appear from time to time are very touching. Let's talk about the shortcomings: It's very embarrassing. There is a very obvious two-dimensional flavor, but the imitation is a bit imperfect. The emotions were not well controlled, and the logic of some plots was a bit untenable, making it difficult for me to have a strong sense of involvement. Personal summary: The writing is good. Although there are some subtle embarrassments in some places, the flaws are not hidden and it is readable.

My own book is naturally the best! [Shy][shy]

It's great. This is the second great pusher novel I've read. The author is very optimistic about you. But when will Ai take the road of being an idol? Please [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates] @ Ringtone is not a girl. After Li Xing became an idol, will his stage name still be called Love? [Exploration][exploration]

It also stands out among many faders.

Good review! The characters are well created, the storyline is not too cliche, and the writing style is also relatively good in my opinion. As a fanfic that I recommend, it can be ranked in the forefront [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

Hoshino Ai, recommends people alone and comes uninvited. [Cool][cool]

It's so good. Can the author write some extras to fulfill my wish? I want to see Ruby and Ai perform together, and I want to see Li's parents look surprised when they find out that their 20-year-old daughter has 16-year-old twins [crying]

Just a few dozen chapters, so charming (starry eyes👀👀)

Saigao, you are so low-pressure, hahaha!

Very beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, highly recommended.

Come on, author, this should be the first time I give full stars to a book that is not written by @ [making a face]

Very nice. What I wrote was to directly bring in General Thunder and Lightning as a reinforcement.

Yes, this is a very promising book, but it must not be like the original Hoshino Ai, otherwise, it's up to you.

It's a very nice book. There are very few fanfics about Faders, not to mention Ai-chan [shy] Of course, this book is easy to follow until the end. Hehe, so the author should work harder [smile]

Big cheers for the author!

Nice! ! The author would like to update more [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

This book is very good, highly recommended

Teacher, do you still want to update this book? [Crying] [crying] There has been no update for several months [crying] Your writing is really great [crying]

Lily, after being loved, has deteriorated, so it can be protected from lightning.

Very immersive, but a little short

Come on hh it's very nice and warm

The best book I have read on the Internet so far. The characters are not broken and the plot is reasonable and coherent. It is really like the original if. I hope the author can stick to it. Come on!

Really good-looking, highly recommended

Looks good, come on, do you have a knife?

It looks good, I like it, do you have a book group?

Really beautiful, highly recommended

I just saw that he was alive? [Cover face]

Very well written, keep it up

Overall, it's good, but this lily is a bit far-fetched, which makes it a bit inconsistent, but the rest is still good.

Keep up the good work, author! Very good Keep up the hard work and take good care of you, the author😁