A Wet Nurse, What Output Do You Want?

I can only read, I can't leave messages. Unless you can't help it. Give the author a shout out. I said something. . . . . . . .

Since I am a newbie, I will give you a five-star encouragement first. In the early stage, due to setting problems, the protagonist had too little plot and looked like a supporting character. After returning to reality, it gradually became a dual protagonist. The plot transition is relatively moderate, a little too fast, but there are a few plot changes, and the transition is a bit stiff (novices don't force it); there are ambush, not many, more like foreshadowing, but you have to fill in the holes carefully; the background setting is acceptable, and you can learn more from others; if you are not good at fighting scenes, you can try some side descriptions or scene descriptions, after all, it is really difficult to start with frontal fighting scenes. The protagonist's character is over-the-top but not over-the-top. It's more like a lively and naughty girl, rather than a boy-to-girl transformation, but at least the characterization is pretty good. As for writing, practice more and I believe you will get better. The above are all personal opinions and are subject to refutation and criticism.

Why does Gu Yuan, a supporting character, have more scenes than the protagonist?

It's not enough. There are 24 hours in a day. Excluding 7 hours of sleeping, there are still 17 hours. One chapter per hour. You can read 17 chapters in one day. But now it's only two chapters a day. It's too lazy [laughter] [laughter]

It's very interesting. Why can't the protagonist be a female from the beginning? Because some descriptions make it seem like the protagonist is very gay... And the interaction between Chi Yu and Gu Yuan seems a bit ambiguous. I hope it will be better in the future. Come on.

The author says that he is single, but he always feels that he has a tendency to change his marriage.

The book is good, but ever since I met Zhu Ma, it started to feel more and more like a female channel. It even made me wonder if this was a remarriage [face covering]

Ahem, this is my first time writing this. If you have any suggestions, please leave a message below.

Come on, it's still possible to write like this. I'm not a very good person so I won't comment too much and I'll just give you a few stars. (O゜▽゜)o☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆guess how many stars there are

Very good author. There are a lot of lilies in the transformation stories and I am tired of reading them. I still like to read single ones. Personally, I don't like lilies very much because I am tired of seeing so many lilies. I hope it will continue like this and I will not get tired of lilies. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

Although the subject matter is not new, it may be because the perspective of the protagonist changing into a woman looks more comfortable. At the same time, the plot is comfortable and joyful, which brings a happier emotion to people. The writing is okay, and the writing style can also improve the plot. Although the plot is cliché, it is enjoyable to watch.

It's obviously very beautiful, but why are there so few people?

Why do you feel that Gu Yuan and the protagonist will be together? The more I read it, the more it felt like a marriage story. Obviously the profile says single/hundred.

It's really beautiful, but there aren't many people [almost crying] [almost crying]

Is it to get married or to be single? If it's a change of marriage, can you not pretend to be single and trick those who are looking for a change of marriage into killing you? [Eat melon]

Although I am single, I still like the protagonist and Gu Yuan Write me a letter about changing your marriage quickly Forget it alone, why add a hundred now?

Author, did you name the protagonist "Chi Yu Si Si Yu Yuan"?

I want to ask about the author's grade. When I first started reading it, I didn't think it was a big deal, but when I was in high school, there was a line in "Returning to the Garden and Living in the Fields" called "Chi Yu Si Si Yu Yuan". When I first started reading the co-author, these two were an official match, so the author, you are not a senior in high school now, right?

Please note that the incarnation is also a poisonous plot, especially the male incarnation. You don't have to deal with this male external incarnation, it's a huge hidden poisonous point. Combined with what the author has written before, it is difficult not to suspect that the author will marry himself. If you do it this way, it is no longer just highly poisonous.

Chiyu is so cute! I would like to ask if He and Gu Sang are CPs, this is very important to me! ! [Laughs][Laughs] If the author feels that the control is not good enough, he can change the introduction and arrange it a bit (if the article is not easy to revise, just change the introduction, right?) Maybe it's because I haven't finished reading it yet, and I feel that the arrangement of the scenes seems to be okay (?)

Changing marriage is not unacceptable

The book is great, come on

Ahem, I understand everything. It's very beautiful.

It's really good, good-looking, cheers! If you can, please give me more [Sending Hearts]

It's really good to watch. I really like this kind of plot, but I always unconsciously regard the protagonist as my heart.

It's very pretty, but the only drawback is that it's too short.

By the way, did the rating drop? [Thinking][thinking]

Suddenly I discovered that the protagonist looks very similar to a certain dragon girl from the Mi family

Like it very, very, very much! ! ! ! ٩(๑`▽´๑)۶ Appears suddenly

Personally I think it's good, but I don't know why it's rated 7.3 I'm back again, I don't know what to say, but I feel like I should say something. If I remember correctly, this book was previously labeled by Baibian Married. I've read about a hundred chapters. The author seems to have interrupted updates very frequently during that time, and the plot is a little unclear in my mind, and then I urge you to make it clearer. There were obviously a few people who liked it, but I was the only one in the comment section. I was bored, so I just threw it on the bookshelf to collect dust and wipe it. After writing it, I didn't want to read it anymore. Forget it, I wrote so many words and it would have been in vain if I didn't post them. Just think that I am sick because I am bored. By the way, have you finished filling in the author's holes?