The Star Destroyer of Samsara Paradise

Regarding the fact that an author gave himself a five-star review "fairly" because there were too few reviews from readers... Woohoo, the rating is too low. I think it's good and I'll give it a five-star review. I'll update it from time to time.

Nice, this is a rare beginning. There is no set template at the beginning. Does the author have a group? You can brainstorm ideas at the beginning of the book. Finally, a quick update from the author! 5 A day is not a dream

Why has such a good book disappeared?

It's very well written and is considered a masterpiece among reincarnation fics. I just don't know how long I can write it. Are you kidding me about the scoring mechanism of 6.7 Points on Tomato? This book may not be the best reincarnation fan, but it is the most comfortable one I have read so far.

So far, it seems to be very well written. It is at least in the top three among the Samsara Paradise fans I have seen. How can I put it this way? I can't quite understand those people who turn into crazy people as soon as they enter the paradise. I don't quite understand those who are still virgins after entering paradise, so the character of the protagonist in this book is close to the mentality of a normal person entering paradise. I think it's pretty good.

I really don't know what people think when they read books nowadays. The reason why fan fiction is called fan fiction is because the novel will contain a lot of settings and characters from the original work, and then add the author's second set. When reading this kind of novel, I think the most important thing is to look at the author's second set. Some of the second set will make the novel useless, and some of the second set will be better than the original work (I personally think that if you don't want to argue with others, your argument means that you are right [laughter]). The biggest difference between the protagonist and Su Xiao in the first few chapters of this novel is that the protagonist was just an ordinary person before time travel and had no special skills. That is, when he was on the verge of death, he could not only cheat but also enter the reincarnation paradise. But what about Su Xiao? Avengers, they must have gone through a lot of training for revenge, and their minds are extraordinary. After killing the enemy, they enter the paradise. There is a clear gap between the two. There are still people who have been commenting (you can say they are complaining) about why the protagonist does not think the same as Su Xiao, and what Su Xiao does is what the protagonist should do. Please, if you want to see what Su Xiao does, go read the original work. What kind of fan fiction are you looking at [laughing awkwardly], the original work is more classic than the fan fiction. Finally, come on, author, I think this novel is good [please read it carefully].

So far, it's okay. Compared with other Samsara Paradise fanfics, it's pretty okay. I would like to give the author some advice. It's best if the protagonist enters not too many fan worlds such as anime. I've seen a lot of Samsara Paradise fanfics where the main protagonists are basically in those anime worlds, even if they are very late, there is no native world, or There are very few. I think the most interesting parts of Samsara Paradise are the later original native worlds, rather than the early animation world. Nowadays, many authors write about reincarnation papers by discarding the basics and writing about the anime world one after another. They cannot create their own native world or enter the native world that already exists in Samsara Paradise. Then it is best to write about the anime worlds in the early stage. Personally, I don't feel like writing about Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba or Chainsaw Man. It's not that these anime are not good-looking, but it feels weird to add the element of Samsara Paradise. Some authors even make these worlds very long, which really makes people abandon them. I feel that it is difficult to add these complicated things into the combat system, which makes people feel weird. Finally, the protagonist's combat power system should not be too messy. I feel that the protagonist's combat power system is a bit weird now. It may be a bit messy. It can be adjusted a little and made simpler, so it will be better. I really like the protagonist Su Xiao, and I hope the protagonist in this book is also this type.

Time travel, specific basic rules of reincarnation paradise, there are hooks. Suitable for fans of Samsara Paradise.

Personally, I feel that this is the most comfortable Samsara Paradise fanfic. First of all, I think the relationship between the protagonist and Su Xiao is handled very well. It is not particularly flattering, does not deliberately make enemies, and there is no plot to compete for resources for the time being. Secondly, in terms of the world you enter, since it is a Samsara Paradise fanfic, I personally hope to see more of the same world that Su Xiao experienced. Then add the author's own originality from the world in the original work. (Personally, I feel that blindly making up my own world doesn't have the flavor of fan fiction.) Finally, I hope the author can keep writing.

It's rare to see a well-written Paradise fan on Tomato. Why is it gone?

It slowly starts to look like a reincarnation paradise. Look at the luck comparison between the lucky protagonist and Su Xiao's unlucky guy [smile]

Beef cuts soaked in bleeding water Then blanch it in water and skim off the foam. Heat oil, add onions and beef, Stir fry and add mineral water Simmer for an hour. (You can control the time as you like) Then the key point comes, cut the potato into cubes, Take a small part of the potato and chop it into thin pieces. Add not too much water and boil it into a sauce. When it is soft, squeeze it and thin it until it becomes a watery paste. Peel an apple, remove the flesh, cut into thin pieces, and then squeeze it out to squeeze out the juice. If you have a juicer, squeeze it directly. After an hour, observe the water in the beef, and then put the carrots and potatoes in. The water level should exceed the ingredients. Simmer over low heat for about ten minutes, paying attention to the water level. If there is too much water, just open the lid and cook. The water and ingredients are level Add a few drops of dark soy sauce, not too much soy sauce, add potato paste, applesauce and curry cubes Then simmer it until it's as low as you want it to be The most delicious curry in the world is complete The secret is potato sauce and applesauce

It's still very exciting. I saw the return of the second world, and I have a few questions I want to summarize. First, the protagonist enters the Soul Library at the first level. This is not a problem. The problem is that in the original book, Su Xiao has already been to the Void before entering the Soul Library and learned the Void Common Language. Therefore, it is no problem to talk to the Ancient One, Mrs. Spider, and the Elf, as well as to read books. However, the protagonist does not know the Void Common Language yet. Unless the elf and Madam Spider speak Chinese, otherwise I think the settings need to be revised. I paid some money to learn the Void Common Language when entering the library. The second is Little Spider. It is good to have a follower to follow her. Even though Mrs. Spider forced her here, it can be seen that the protagonist also likes her. However, she was created by someone else and signed a symbiosis contract. Although it is one-way, it is different from the follower contract signed by BooBoo Wang. I think symbiosis is more like two people becoming one. In the future, when you encounter fate or causality systems such as Platinum Apostle, you will suffer a lot because of spiders. However, the spider is the chess piece buried by Mrs. Spider. If it is really possible to offend Mrs. Spider, other than the possibility of an accident, I don't know how the author will deal with it later. It might be possible to cancel the symbiosis contract and sign a servant contract with her. The disadvantage may be that there is no bonus, but this is not a problem. It is better to give up the bonus, just like Su Xiao peeling off his demon clan's real injury mark. There is a give-and-take. Friendly discussion, looking forward to the author's reply. @ Prison

If the elder brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the younger brother so casually? It seems that the younger brother is being sentimental. That's right. The elder brother is weak and needs more rest. The younger brother urges the elder brother like this. It is the younger brother's fault. It hurts the elder brother's body and makes the younger brother feel distressed.

The writing is quite good, although there are some flaws in it, but the author really listens to his advice. If he makes mistakes, he really corrects them, which is much better than those stand-alone authors who know that this is a poisonous point and refuse to correct it, but pretend to be dead.

It's still good. Although there are many second settings, they have their own ideas. The settings of Xian in recent chapters are quite interesting. The protagonist's image has flaws in the early stage, but there are also flaws in Pipixiao's early stage portrayal. It's acceptable. Tomato doesn't write many Paradise fans, and even fewer of them are good. I hope the author can stick to it and get better and better.

The fanfic of reincarnation has private settings and clear logic. At least it can be self-explanatory. The disadvantage is that some settings have not been rounded out yet. The article is not very long at the moment, so you can wait and see. Give it five stars, cheers for the author

Very nice to look at. This book ranks in the top three among the Samsara Paradise fanfics that I have read. The author has given the protagonist a lot of hooks, but it is precisely because of this that it is fun to watch. The only thing I worry about is that the combat power will not collapse. Also, the author is still resting. The donkeys in the production team do not dare to do this. Hurry up and update.

It's pretty good, but my writing skills are a bit inferior to those of Mosquito.

Although the big brother on the list is here, but... This development is so good, I am envious of the real name of Miefa.

From the current point of view, this book should be regarded as the best among Tomato fans. Everything about the combat power system is pretty good, and the friendship with Su Xiao is not too abrupt. However, it is best not to have the talent name related to other games. It is a bit of a drama, but the rest is okay. There seems to be no one in the past two days, and I am a little afraid that the book will be out of date. I came here to rate it in advance.

Please, please add more chapters soon😭, please add two more chapters every day😭, it seems like there are ants crawling in my body😭, it's so itchy😭, please brother, please add one more chapter😭Please, I will listen to you in everything😭

I want to improve it, but I have read some of it, and it is more consistent with the original work among the fanfics I have read. However, there are a lot of grammatical problems in the front, and there are some typos, but the flaws are still there. I will catch up with readers to finish. In addition, I hope the author can greatly control the number of words in each paragraph. If there are no blank lines on a page or it is too long, it will affect the reading experience. Come on!

I hope the author can write better and better at least the first two worlds. I don't really want to read them. The first world has a lot of poisonous points. It's true that it's a bit discouraging. I'll read it again. If the rest of it is finished, I'll read it again. It's a lot of trouble to write behind the scenes here. Please comment.

So far, this novel is okay. I personally like it very much, but it's too little. I don't like to follow novels. It's too slow. I used to read hundreds of chapters in a day with Samsara Paradise. This one is too little and it's not satisfying.

A rare reincarnation fan fiction📖

So far, there are no poisonous points. The settings are also original. They just apply the rules of reincarnation and create a new system. The readability is quite good. Keep up the good work. Ah, one more thing to add, short, too short [punch out] short and weak.

It's rare to find a reincarnation fan with excellent writing. The career setting of the star urger is also quite consistent with the void setting. So far, there are no surprises here. There are no shortcomings except for the shortcomings. I hope the author will work hard and update it! ! ! One hundred and eighty updates are requested every day.

Okay, okay, I hope the author writes some fresh and interesting stories. Use your imagination. It's too short. . . . . . . . . . . .

Come on, this is the best reincarnation fanfic I've seen so far (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I think it is very reasonable to give Brother Su a real self. After all, there is a similar plot in the original work, and I think this setting has been added to this world view anyway, so why not give Brother Su a strengthening, after all, it will be harder to fight later, and it may also share resources.