[No Fixed Couple] [Female Lead's Emotional Growth] [A Plot Within a Plot Within a Plot]
The author is mentally ill and writes whatever comes to mind.
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Suddenly, a soft, sweet voice rings out, and a little white dumpling appears in front of her.
"Hello. Sign the contract."
"What are you?"
"I'm not a thing! I'm a System. My name is Shasha."
Zelan is used to Systems, but this is the first time she's heard a name like that. Given Siming's usual habits, most of the Systems he makes are called 001, 002, 003... 00001...
"I'm guessing you have a little brother called Bibi."
"Huh?" The System looks confused.
"Nope. Master has only given birth to me so far. Hehehe."
"Then you're going to have a little brother or sister very soon."
Zelan looks certain.
"Oi, how you know that?"
"Never mind. It's a secret of Heaven. Where did you come from, little System?" She switches to fishing for information.
If I can't think of a good plot, I won't write it.
It's my first time writing a book review and I'm a little nervous haha I have only read the first page so far. The author's writing is good and there is not much nonsense. He has accumulated a lot of rhetoric. It would be better to deal with some details. What needs improvement is that I think the ellipses affect the look and feel a little, and I think the introduction is too simple. (This is purely a personal opinion. My parents are still alive, so don't attack me.) There are so many twists and turns in the last sentence. The author has a very clever mind. I originally thought it was a routine article, but it turned out to be a twist again and again. The ending was something I didn't expect.