The male protagonist Luo Sha is not invincible, but rather a group figure. The Original Wife has no harem, and its style will be more joyful, mainly telling the stories of the people in Sunagakure Village.
Transformed into the wind, stirring the settled sand...
Reader comments
After reading it, um, let me tell you my feelings. I was pleasantly surprised. The character itself is very thorough. However, the plot was a bit slow. The fighting scenes were written a lot, and the emotional involvement was a bit lacking. If the emotional line is added in the later stage, I personally think that the heroine should be more deeply drawn. The pace is a bit slow. I hope the fighting scenes in the next chapter will be faster and the character plot will be more in-depth. The writing style is very delicate and is very good for each character. . . .
There are some minor issues with the language, but overall it's fine.
In addition, why can you comment only after clicking on the rating? Also, the author should eat less and work hard, don't be poisoned by your own fantasies [already planted][already planted][already planted][already planted]⊂(('⊥'))⊃
After reading it, um, let me tell you my feelings. I was pleasantly surprised. The character itself is very thorough. However, the plot was a bit slow. The fighting scenes were written a lot, and the emotional involvement was a bit lacking. If the emotional line is added in the later stage, I personally think that the heroine should be more deeply drawn. The pace is a bit slow. I hope the fighting scenes in the next chapter will be faster and the character plot will be more in-depth. The writing style is very delicate and is very good for each character. . . . There are some minor issues with the language, but overall it's fine. In addition, why can you comment only after clicking on the rating? Also, the author should eat less and work hard, don't be poisoned by your own fantasies [already planted][already planted][already planted][already planted]⊂(('⊥'))⊃