Fantasy: Dressed as an Ancestor, Helpless to Lead the Fei People

It's nice to look at, but it's too wordy. It would take a long time to fight.

The fight was too grinding and slow, especially the sect leader. If he couldn't beat him, he would be at a higher level. Then there was the magic weapon. It was so terrible and unpleasant to watch!

The front row reminds you that if you don't have certain resistance to poison, you will be poisoned instantly [making a face]. I wrote this for fun

The language is blunt, and writing with flowing words is easier to read than this. It slipped away.

The writing is too confusing, and too wordy. There is no narration in the basic plot. It is always about fighting, or watching other people fight. This is a sword or a palm, and I am speechless. There is no name, and the background is a general title. This man and that sword master are all messy and incomprehensible.

Don't make too many typos and bad sentences. If you feel tired after reading it, you will give it up. You don't even bother writing a novel, so why publish it? How about playing?

It has been added to the bookshelf. I hope the author can update five or six chapters every day. Otherwise, after a long time, I don't want to read it and will give up the book. Every time I can read the book, it is often updated slowly. I have no choice but to give up the book and slowly find other books to read again. [Laughing and crying][Laughing and crying][Cover face][Cover face][Cover face]

The writing style needs to be improved, and the fights were a bit wordy, which lowered the book's rating.

The subject matter is quite good, but there are too many typos, making it difficult to read and there are too few words.

It's a mess, everyone is the protagonist, everyone's vision is similar, it's all nonsense, there are too many words for water,