A Mortal’s Path to Immortality: Farming and Taming Beasts

I hope there won't be a female protagonist, it's pretty good so far

It looks good. Let's get a dragon egg for the protagonist.

In the Beast Control Sect, it is best for pets to be divided into natal spiritual pets, ordinary spiritual pets, and slave pets. It is best to have birds that can run fast, like Han Li, and be more modest.

To be honest, the beads are a good charade, and the background of the story is in the sea area. It is also good to start with, but the writing is too dull and the adhesion is too low. It was okay before the city was brought into the Beast Control Sect by the Golden Destruction Pill, but there is no highlight after joining the sect, or the author did not write the details well. It is not that it is not good, but the readability of the charade is not good enough, and the Beast Control Sect is not good. The local customs and customs are not reflected, there is no sense of picture and no sense of substitution. (You can refer to Mortals. Although several sects are not fully described, when it comes to Yellow Maple Valley, you will know some outstanding characters and what the sect is. It does not appear redundant and the reading is very smooth.) That girl named Zi forced her to be mysterious and disappeared. I think The more you read, the less interesting it becomes. It's really hard to not get up and down. I just skip over the parts that should be written in detail. For example, the setting of Lingchao is great. But in the end, this activity is like telling a story and it's gone in just two sentences. If you can focus on the core idea of ​​hanging, write out the superiority of hanging, and erase it a little, it will be even better. Readers will be happy, as a writer It's cool for readers. In fact, everyone doesn't care whether there is a heroine or not, but she must be slutty. When I was weak, I could be submissive. When I am strong, I have to be restless.

Encouragement, good

Not bad, not bad, go to sleep

Work hard to update, the more it gets more popular, and finally give the protagonist a dragon I made a mistake in a word. Is it good or not?

It's okay so far. I hope someone won't have murderous intentions for the protagonist out of nowhere. No matter how cruel the world of cultivation is, you can't have murderous intentions out of nowhere with just a look or a word. That's not in line with human nature.

Very good, solving the book shortage

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