开局帝境宗主，无限合成仙人长老

Hello, author, I have moved your book to another platform. Collections, subscriptions, and rewards are pretty good, but your updates are too slow and I always get pushed! By the way, I want to buy a new car next month, and I hope you can work hard!

It's okay so far. Come on, author, don't be clumsy or brainless, keep developing and don't end it. Update quickly

It's really good. I haven't seen a female protagonist until now. I like stories without a female protagonist. In this sect novel, except for an irresponsible protagonist, I have never seen a female protagonist. I hope the author doesn't write a female protagonist. Those who ask for a female protagonist are not opposed to it. They all have their own preferences anyway. Mud, it's nothing, it's all female apprentices, don't watch it anymore

Only in this way can the protagonist have fun and be worthy of the word time travel.

After reading this book, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, silently turned off my phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of the 1982 Tibetan Edition of Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and walked slowly to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy. Gradually it began to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred, I don't know if it was because of my tears or because it was raining heavily, maybe it was raining heavily, and my mood became more melancholy. I could no longer keep my inner emotions, so I opened the window and shouted out the window: It's so awesome 6

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't overflow, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I'm just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only by leaving a message in the comments can I stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your Dear Readers First July 18, 2023

Can the author update more every day? I'm stuck in reading and it's a critical moment. I've been keeping it for a long time. If this continues, I don't know if I can keep it up. And you haven't updated it yet today.

I can't even break the void with this great emperor. I'm always flying around so well. Anyway, I haven't seen the protagonist Shattered Void flying around all the time so far.

I have read the latest chapter so far. Although the story is a bit cliche, it is well written. It's only chapter 50, and it's too fast to accept 5+1 apprentices. You can write more stories about apprentices. The previous scene where the misty trio entered the secret realm was quite interesting. The score is a bit low, please add a star.

Yes, it's well written, but I just can't stand Xiao Yan's hypocrisy. It truly embodies the hypocrisy of Xiao Yan's character and is well received.

Author, your updates are too slow. You stopped at the most classic part [crying]

The book is very good and the system is very powerful. But after reading it for a long time, I didn't even have a wife. Life is not fun. Do I have to arrange it? [Sinister smile]

It's okay. After reading 100 chapters, I feel that the readability is quite high. The characters in it are not brainless, and they don't speak obscenely or make bad jokes. I just use characters from other novels and comics and I feel a little discouraged. There is Xiao Chen, the Medicine Saint, in the ring. What about the Soul Palace, Nalan Yanran who broke off the engagement, and Tang Yin holding the Neptune Trident? I won't talk about the previous ones. I used Tang San because I was afraid that others would continue to look at it. Don't you know what kind of character Tang San is in a fight? Moreover, Xiao Chen only has nine stars, and Tang Yin is still ten stars.

This refreshing novel is fast-paced, and the sections of "pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger" and "crushing the villain" are very relaxing. The setting of the protagonist's identity as a boss + his outrageous disciple is interesting, but the characters are a bit thin and the plot is too routine. It is suitable for reading when you want to relax and enjoy the pictures. Readers who pursue depth and delicate writing may find it not enough.

It's better than I thought. I thought that by drawing the characters, I don't have to do it personally. It turns out that the protagonist is a hamster. If the card is stuck, it's hard to burrow it. If you ham it up enough, a fairy will come out. It's ok.

A very interesting book, it shouldn't be rated so low

An in-depth review of "Immortals are servants, emperors are slaves, and all the disciples are outrageous" If the full score is 100 points, it can be given 85 points comprehensively. Overall, it is a fantasy work worth reading. Creative setting and originality: The setting of the sect system in the novel is unique. After the protagonist Chen Xuan traveled through time and became the leader of the declining sect Piaomiao Sect, he relied on the system to recruit disciples with different potentials to obtain various powerful summoning card rewards, such as saint summoning cards, emperor summoning cards, etc. This setting breaks the rules and makes the development of the sect and the growth of the protagonist full of variables and surprises, making the story break out of the framework of traditional fantasy novels that rely solely on cultivation and adventure to enhance strength. Character creation, distinctive personality: The book creates many characters with different personalities and unique talents. For example, Lin Fan, who possesses the ancient sword body, has a resolute character, pursues the way of swordsmanship wholeheartedly, and marches forward bravely in battle, fully demonstrating the persistence and sharpness of the swordsman; Ye Qingcheng, who has the Samsara Immortal body, is gentle and intelligent, showing her delicate thoughts and leadership skills in sect affairs. Each disciple has a unique growth trajectory and personality characteristics, and together they build a Piaomiao Sect full of vitality and personality. The plot is compact and exciting: from being bound to the system at the beginning to obtain the Great Emperor's cultivation and the ultimate weapon, to constantly recruiting talented disciples, conflicting and confronting various forces, to becoming famous in Kyushu, and pacifying the restricted area of ​​​​life, etc., The story has a tight rhythm and constant excitement. For example, Chen Xuan instantly killed four powerful men in the Concentration Realm in the secret realm of rules, and when faced with the threat of three super sects, he summoned three emperors and elders to easily resolve the crisis, allowing readers to fully experience the thrill of counterattack and crushing, and always maintain a high level of excitement during the reading process. Humorous language and relaxed atmosphere: The author is good at using humorous language to relieve the tense plot atmosphere. For example, in the daily interactions between Chen Xuan and his disciples, there are often some hilarious dialogues and plots. Scenes such as the fierce fight between disciples for cultivation resources and Chen Xuan's helpless mediation are full of life, allowing readers to have a relaxing and enjoyable reading experience in an exciting fantasy adventure, which is different from the serious style of traditional fantasy novels. Appreciation of fine sentences Domineering side leakage type: "If you go and never come back, you will never come back." When faced with the crisis of the war when the warships of the three sects were dispatched, this sentence reflects the courage and determination of the protagonist and his disciples to move forward without flinching, showing a kind of domineering attitude. In the article, the protagonist and his disciples also have some words about persistence and growth in the process of cultivation, such as "The journey of cultivation is to compete with God for fate. Even if the road ahead is full of thorns, we must move forward bravely." It conveys a positive and inspiring spirit and allows readers to be inspired while reading. There is a problem Inadequate exploration of depth: The work focuses on the sense of excitement in the plot, but lacks in exploring the depth of the theme and ideological connotation. Compared with Xiao Yan's profound thoughts and insights on family, friendship, love, justice and other aspects during his growth in "Fights Break the Sphere", "The Immortal is a Servant" focuses more on superficial fighting and upgrading. For example, when the protagonist Chen Xuan faces the conspiracy of the Soul Palace, he relies more on force and system rewards to solve the problem. There is a lack of in-depth discussion on morality, ethics, human nature and other levels, which makes the depth and thickness of the story insufficient. Logical flaws occasionally appear: the logic of some plots is not rigorous enough. For example, there is a lack of reasonable transition between the power of system rewards and the rapid growth of the protagonist. For example, Chen Xuangang received the Immortal Summoning Card from a disciple with super ten-star potential, and then directly relied on the summoned Immortal to easily defeat a powerful opponent in the subsequent battle. There were no twists and turns and difficulties in the battle, which seemed too abrupt, making readers easily feel drama while reading, and affecting the credibility of the story. The emotional description is thin: the description of emotional lines such as love and friendship is relatively flat and not delicate and moving enough. Compared with the complex and profound emotions between Zhang Xiaofan, Lu Xueqi and Baguio in "Zhu Xian", the emotional interaction between the protagonist and his disciples and confidante in "The Immortal" lacks details and depth. For example, the relationship between the protagonist and a certain confidante only briefly mentions that they have a good impression of each other. There is no more emotional conflict and interaction to deepen this emotion, and it is difficult for readers to have a strong emotional resonance. Reader suggestions Fantasy novice: If you are just starting to get into fantasy novels, this work is a good choice. Its relaxed and humorous style, novel settings and compact plot can quickly bring you into the fantasy world, allowing you to experience the charm of fantasy novels and feel the passionate adventure of the protagonist and his disciples in the ancient continent. Lovers of refreshing writing: For readers who like refreshing writing, the book is rich in refreshing elements such as system rewards, genius disciples, and invincible crushing, which can satisfy your reading needs for excitement and pleasure. You can enjoy the wonderful process of the protagonist leading the Piaomiao Sect from weak to strong, and moving across the continent. In-depth readers: If you are a reader who has high requirements for the depth and literariness of novels, you can adjust your mentality appropriately when reading, but do not demand too much depth and perfect logic. Pay more attention to the innovative settings and relaxed and humorous style of the novel. You can appreciate the story from a unique perspective and gain a certain amount of reading pleasure from it.

Personally, I think this book is quite good. The Outer Sect Elder, The Sage, the Inner Sect Elder, and the Great Emperor are both pure and refreshing. However, if Tang Yin is removed, it should be a few points better. Why are there so many two-star reviews in less than 30 minutes?

I've read Chapter 38, and overall it's okay. The flaws don't hide the flaws, and it's not like buying a physical book. Give the author a little more tolerance, and there's no need to be too picky. Sorry, I saw Chapter 118. What the hell was written? If you are new to the trap, I suggest you first parachute into Chapter 118 and try the poison.

This book is really great. Please give me a boost. Please update it! I hope the apprentice will not overthrow the master, and I hope there will be no female protagonist

Can you please give Xiao Chen a separate sequel? The whole story is really about the two of them. It makes me crazy and makes me happy [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Give this a 5⭐

The book is very good and exciting. It looks better. I hope the author can produce more books like this. I also ask the author to update it as soon as possible [Like][Like][Like]

It looks cool, it's my type The writing style is quite humorous. The humorous writing style writes a cruel plot, but it is a bit uncomfortable to watch the family being wiped out at every turn... The male protagonist's character as a straight man who doesn't understand amorous feelings is well developed! Whatever woman you want, this is the B level. Fighting against the stars and the sea is delicious

Yes, Shuangwen, it is a neat and refreshing feeling. What's wrong with the harem? Shuangwen is not happy in the harem, so it is still called Shuangwen [eating melon] [eating melon]

It's a good read. It's a pity that it hasn't been updated yet. I'll give it a while.

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The emperor is so lazy? 18 Great saints want to kill the great emperor with the imperial weapons. The greatest saint in the life restricted area has the highest cultivation level.

Personally, I feel that the writing style is pretty good. I just hope it doesn't end badly in the end. It's best to write two or three thousand pieces of it. Big boost, author. Go, go, go. 😂😂😂

Good guy, the author has no use for it. No. [Laughing]

Very good, I think this author is very interesting