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Forget about the typos and it's still a mess.

I was really convinced and wrote a theme about the world of immortality. As a result, the entire realm of fantasy covers the sky and the ancient continent (for example, the given physique, the ancient holy body), which is nothing, but can be seen. The theme of the world of immortality is written around family members. It is written that the son of destiny becomes Xiao Yan and breaks off the engagement. Even the exercises, the grandfather in the ring, and the identity of the alchemist are exactly the same. This is not outrageous. What the hell is the fighting skill? Auction, residual pictures, Pure Lotus Demon Spirit Fire, what the hell is this? Fight to break the plot flow? How lacking in words do you have to be able to incorporate content from other novels into your novel and write such a frivolous plot? Even if you want to be arrogant, at least the level of the skills and the use of spiritual fire alchemy should be close to the theme of cultivating immortals. Even if you are clearly writing about the world of cultivating immortals, but it turns out that it is in the ancient continent (similar to Zhetian flow) but has something to do with Dou Po, the flow of "Child of Destiny" and "Golden Finger". You can't think for yourself. If it is close to your article, is it possible that the next "Child of Destiny" will be Gu Shisan (Tang San), and you will also be in the Douluo flow? It's a good novel. When I saw Gu Yan, it made me read Dou Po Continent. It's really disgusting.

There are no less than ten books with similar routines, so it is a cool book suitable for beginners.

I felt pretty good before. After watching the 50th chapter, I saw a woman, in order to survive, revealed that she had some kind of yin-yang holy body, and dual cultivation can improve her cultivation. Then the protagonist, an ancestor who uses plug-ins, "reluctantly" accepted a "lady" in order to improve his cultivation. I guess she is an ancestor-level super stallion. I'm sorry, as a young man in his twenties, I can't accept this kind of novel with nine years of compulsory education.

What did you write? Can you check for typos? I can't tell what was written at all.

There are too many typos. The other shore is four times and the other time is three times. Can you be more rigorous?

There are so many typos [laughing awkwardly]

Come on, come on, the content is wonderful, keep up the good work

Is there no heroine or only one heroine?

Shouldn't the skills given by the system be full of great potential? Even if it takes three years to comprehend and comprehend, the protagonist's talent is not good. Is there still a system?

How should I put it? It seems to me that it's almost interesting, but I don't know where the problem lies.

The writing is messy, there are a lot of typos, and the combat power is broken. The protagonist is in the other side realm. If the clone has three levels of your combat power, it is a broken realm. It is one level lower than the protagonist's combat power.

I quit after seeing the chapter about Taoist Companions! It's not good to act and stand at the same time!

I won't mention the typos, the realm is in a mess.

Okay okay okay.

It's pretty, but a little lacking.

I'll give it two stars. I can't stand it.

Recruiting Taoist companions is so casual, and they come from transactions. It seems that this is a harem article, boring.

I like Harem, it must be praised

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking