[Tear-jerking+funny+slow-burning+single heroine+not cool writing+semi-fantasy (no harem, no routine, not invincible, not cool writing, no system, not brainless)]
Han Yu, who was supposed to be idle and idle, accidentally met Lin Zhu on the ramp, and his fate took a turn. In order to fulfill the girl's wish, his life is no longer peaceful. Let's walk down the long ramp with her!
It is a miraculous journey starting from the slope, reaching the middle of the slope, then saying goodbye to the slope, leaving the slope, heading towards the starry sky, putting the tenderness of the starry sky into the pocket of memory, until the end of the starry sky. (You can feel free to eat it if you haven't seen or played the original work. This article is a fan work of KEY's games and animations, including Clannad, etc. Those who have been exposed to it can look for Easter eggs. Those who have not been exposed to it may be better)
Reader comments
A fan of Key Club, the style of Asahi's quasi-style, and the title of the magic word, it is very complicated. In addition to clannad, there are also summer pockets, little busters, loopers, etc., And there is also a plot that imitates Asahi's quasi-writing, so it should be relatively long.
Start from the ramp
Let me write a few words!
When I stand on the ramp,
Thoughts stirred like bees.
I tried to write a funny poem,
Hope it makes you laugh.
I think of a little kitten,
It always wags its tail and meows.
It snuck into my socks,
As a result, I was shocked.
I thought of a little dog again,
It always runs after its own tail.
One day it chased too hard,
As a result, I was thrown out.
Another time I went to the supermarket,
I saw an aunt wearing slippers.
She almost slipped while holding the watermelon,
As a result, I was also frightened by her.
Funny poems are like this,
It's great to make people laugh.
When you are not in a good mood,
Reading a funny poem will make you happy.
So let's laugh out loud together,
Enjoy your time with this funny poem.
Whether it's a slope or flat ground,
Let laughter echo in every corner.
"In this case, what will happen in the provincial competition or even the national competition? Your goal is to win the national middle school student martial arts competition!" It's so passionate and well written!
What a good book. The author's writing is good. The plot is interesting and attractive. It is worth reading and appreciating. I give it a five-star rating! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
There are very few Key fans who write about Katsuhei Hiiragi, which can be regarded as making up for the regrets in Asada Jun's writing.
Especially Su Ming's thoughts, only give you the sunny day, the "if" rain, and the tears.
Very nice fanfic! The author has a big brain and novel ideas, the story is fascinating, the writing is fluent and silky, and it is highly readable. It brings tears in laughter, and torture in pleasure. I can't bear to put it down while reading [Like][Like][Like]
The content is rich and colorful, the plot has twists and turns, the story is fascinating, the author's writing is smooth, and it has received five-star praise.
The author uses line drawing to create characters, the writing is delicate, the plot is bizarre and tortuous, and the text uses a lot of terminology. The work is highly readable. It is a good novel and more suitable for young people to read. I like it!
The work is humorous and engaging, so keep reading!
It's a wonderful novel. It took me a day to finally finish reading it. I really couldn't put it down until I got to the middle of it.
The author uses a large number of line drawings to create each distinctive character. Han Yu, Han Yili, Bai Yu, Jiang He, Gong Jie, Jing Yuan, Li Shu, Qian Wu, and many more such vivid examples are all made flesh and blood by the author and very attractive.
I read this novel again and was attracted by the vivid characters here again.
Murong Qinmei, Ning Shengping, Han Yu, Lin Zhu, etc. Are a series of vivid characters. The author has created them with flesh and blood, and each person's language and actions are in line with their own characteristics. Very good and worth recommending.
I finished reading it in one sitting. It is a very warm and delicate novel. There is no particularly exaggerated plot. It is very comfortable and natural to read, and it is suitable for enjoying quietly!
Definitely worthy of five-star praise! Big cheers for the author!
K Company's works have always been my favorite. It's rare to see such a masterpiece on Tomato. It's really exquisite! I clicked in right away to take a look! The author's interpretation of the plot is really perfect. I am really grateful to be able to bring this work to more people and let them know about these warm and touching stories! Big cheers for the author
The story has twists and turns, the content of the article is delicate, and the characters are clearly drawn. It is still worth watching. Great author, come on! ! !
Watching it from beginning to end, you still have more to say!
The content is exciting, and the storyline is not laggy at all and is interlocking;
The plot is designed to be very suspenseful and gives people a sense of immersion;
Five-star praise, highly recommended to everyone [please update]
The author writes so well, the language is fluent in introduction, and many details are well grasped. However, as a person from four provinces, it is really sad to watch the protagonist's leisurely life! Now I really like this kind of novel that is not invincible, not harem, and not brainless.
The tears will start from now on, it is indeed a crying style! Howl directly [cry]
Ning Shengping's writing is really good. I have played the original work and I feel that it is better handled than Mazi, but it is a different style. Overall, it is the best control of plot tension among the Key Club fans I have seen.
The writing is clear and smooth~ The plot has exciting twists and turns~ The emotions of the characters are also handled very well. It is very interesting and worth recommending~ Unfortunately, there are too few chapters, so I read it in one sitting~
The title of the book is good, and so is the idea! The author's description of the characters in the book is very delicate, the writing style is smooth, and it is easy and interesting to read. Five-star praise
A very novel book, with a relaxed writing style, humor, and a story that is very suitable for young people to read. Like it!
There are a lot of plots that I didn't understand, but the writing is really good
Rich imagination and smooth writing.
Give me a call. Funny, funny, funny! The plot is very weird! I like it very much! Finally found a book about myself and my taste
It's well written, but it's too short. I hope it will be updated more, otherwise it won't be enough to read.
It must be praised, the writing is beautiful, the story is great, support it
The subject matter is novel, the writing is sophisticated, the plot is cleverly conceived, and the reading is fascinating. Before you know it, it has come to the end, and it is still full of meaning!
Not bad, I read it again, I like it very much, keep going!
The article has fluent language, ingenious conception, rigorous structure, brilliant content, relaxed writing style and a strong sense of humor. It is indeed worth reading.
The writing is smooth and the words are humorous. It is a good book to relax after tea and dinner. Recommended Highly recommended.
It's a very good book. The subject matter is novel and interesting. I've never read it before. It's refreshing and interesting to read for the first time. There are some sad points, but not much. But the neutralization is good, I love it, I love it [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Nice writing! Very funny! Like it very much!
Super good-looking, endlessly exciting, and the characters are very well drawn. I give you a thumbs up for the delicate writing and clear logic.
It's well written, a bit tear-jerking, the story is close to reality, and it's not easy for many people to access, even though they didn't understand some parts. But we can still see the author's intentions. Worth encouraging! Come on!
A fan of Key Club, the style of Asahi's quasi-style, and the title of the magic word, it is very complicated. In addition to clannad, there are also summer pockets, little busters, loopers, etc., And there is also a plot that imitates Asahi's quasi-writing, so it should be relatively long.
Start from the ramp Let me write a few words! When I stand on the ramp, Thoughts stirred like bees. I tried to write a funny poem, Hope it makes you laugh. I think of a little kitten, It always wags its tail and meows. It snuck into my socks, As a result, I was shocked. I thought of a little dog again, It always runs after its own tail. One day it chased too hard, As a result, I was thrown out. Another time I went to the supermarket, I saw an aunt wearing slippers. She almost slipped while holding the watermelon, As a result, I was also frightened by her. Funny poems are like this, It's great to make people laugh. When you are not in a good mood, Reading a funny poem will make you happy. So let's laugh out loud together, Enjoy your time with this funny poem. Whether it's a slope or flat ground, Let laughter echo in every corner. "In this case, what will happen in the provincial competition or even the national competition? Your goal is to win the national middle school student martial arts competition!" It's so passionate and well written!
What a good book. The author's writing is good. The plot is interesting and attractive. It is worth reading and appreciating. I give it a five-star rating! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
There are very few Key fans who write about Katsuhei Hiiragi, which can be regarded as making up for the regrets in Asada Jun's writing. Especially Su Ming's thoughts, only give you the sunny day, the "if" rain, and the tears.
Very nice fanfic! The author has a big brain and novel ideas, the story is fascinating, the writing is fluent and silky, and it is highly readable. It brings tears in laughter, and torture in pleasure. I can't bear to put it down while reading [Like][Like][Like]
The content is rich and colorful, the plot has twists and turns, the story is fascinating, the author's writing is smooth, and it has received five-star praise.
The author uses line drawing to create characters, the writing is delicate, the plot is bizarre and tortuous, and the text uses a lot of terminology. The work is highly readable. It is a good novel and more suitable for young people to read. I like it! The work is humorous and engaging, so keep reading!
It's a wonderful novel. It took me a day to finally finish reading it. I really couldn't put it down until I got to the middle of it. The author uses a large number of line drawings to create each distinctive character. Han Yu, Han Yili, Bai Yu, Jiang He, Gong Jie, Jing Yuan, Li Shu, Qian Wu, and many more such vivid examples are all made flesh and blood by the author and very attractive. I read this novel again and was attracted by the vivid characters here again. Murong Qinmei, Ning Shengping, Han Yu, Lin Zhu, etc. Are a series of vivid characters. The author has created them with flesh and blood, and each person's language and actions are in line with their own characteristics. Very good and worth recommending.
I finished reading it in one sitting. It is a very warm and delicate novel. There is no particularly exaggerated plot. It is very comfortable and natural to read, and it is suitable for enjoying quietly! Definitely worthy of five-star praise! Big cheers for the author!
K Company's works have always been my favorite. It's rare to see such a masterpiece on Tomato. It's really exquisite! I clicked in right away to take a look! The author's interpretation of the plot is really perfect. I am really grateful to be able to bring this work to more people and let them know about these warm and touching stories! Big cheers for the author
The story has twists and turns, the content of the article is delicate, and the characters are clearly drawn. It is still worth watching. Great author, come on! ! !
Watching it from beginning to end, you still have more to say! The content is exciting, and the storyline is not laggy at all and is interlocking; The plot is designed to be very suspenseful and gives people a sense of immersion; Five-star praise, highly recommended to everyone [please update]
The author writes so well, the language is fluent in introduction, and many details are well grasped. However, as a person from four provinces, it is really sad to watch the protagonist's leisurely life! Now I really like this kind of novel that is not invincible, not harem, and not brainless.
The tears will start from now on, it is indeed a crying style! Howl directly [cry] Ning Shengping's writing is really good. I have played the original work and I feel that it is better handled than Mazi, but it is a different style. Overall, it is the best control of plot tension among the Key Club fans I have seen.
The writing is clear and smooth~ The plot has exciting twists and turns~ The emotions of the characters are also handled very well. It is very interesting and worth recommending~ Unfortunately, there are too few chapters, so I read it in one sitting~
The title of the book is good, and so is the idea! The author's description of the characters in the book is very delicate, the writing style is smooth, and it is easy and interesting to read. Five-star praise
A very novel book, with a relaxed writing style, humor, and a story that is very suitable for young people to read. Like it!
There are a lot of plots that I didn't understand, but the writing is really good
Rich imagination and smooth writing.
Give me a call. Funny, funny, funny! The plot is very weird! I like it very much! Finally found a book about myself and my taste
It's well written, but it's too short. I hope it will be updated more, otherwise it won't be enough to read.
It must be praised, the writing is beautiful, the story is great, support it
The subject matter is novel, the writing is sophisticated, the plot is cleverly conceived, and the reading is fascinating. Before you know it, it has come to the end, and it is still full of meaning! Not bad, I read it again, I like it very much, keep going!
The article has fluent language, ingenious conception, rigorous structure, brilliant content, relaxed writing style and a strong sense of humor. It is indeed worth reading.
The writing is smooth and the words are humorous. It is a good book to relax after tea and dinner. Recommended Highly recommended.
It's a very good book. The subject matter is novel and interesting. I've never read it before. It's refreshing and interesting to read for the first time. There are some sad points, but not much. But the neutralization is good, I love it, I love it [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Nice writing! Very funny! Like it very much!
Super good-looking, endlessly exciting, and the characters are very well drawn. I give you a thumbs up for the delicate writing and clear logic.
It's well written, a bit tear-jerking, the story is close to reality, and it's not easy for many people to access, even though they didn't understand some parts. But we can still see the author's intentions. Worth encouraging! Come on!
The author is a veteran at first glance