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It's super good-looking. It's rare to come across a book where both characters are male protagonists. This book has a lot of surprises. In the early stage, I was writing about Shelley's secret love, which is very well written. It is really written from the image and perspective of a secret admirer. It makes people unable to help but feel the sweet and sour feelings of a girl in adolescence towards her crush. In the later stage, the scene where they confessed to each other was also written, and the image of the twins was vividly described. I also like the description of the rebellious and passionate character. So if you are sitting here, if you don't want to die, let's go to death! ! (Cross out) The flu has become quite serious recently, so please take precautions~ 2023.12.19♥ @€ Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I made a typo, why can't I change it? ! ! ! It's okay, as long as I'm not embarrassed, others will be embarrassed (cross out/it's really embarrassing!!)

(I didn't push the score, but selfishly I think this story is really perfect and deserves a high score! From the girl's secret love to the two-way love, the ending after the war was also very touching [crying] and even shed two drops of crocodile tears (lol to death) Many people may think that it is immoral to be with a Gemini, but who knows, sandwich cookies are the best! ! Neither of them can leave the other. It's an excellent Weasley Twins fanfic. It's not very OOC. The original characters all have their own characteristics. My wife's writing style is really good! ! When I saw that my wife had said that this book had been bought, I felt sad and happy at the same time. I was lucky to have come across this twin book, but I was also sad that this book could not be seen by too many people. It was a pity that the delicious cookies could not be shared with too many people, but I was very happy that I ate the delicious cookies. In summary, if you like the Weasley twins, don't miss it! ! Let's give it the best score, [crying] Beautiful works should not be buried (I'm sorry Mrs. 🙏!! :(

Please give me more updates [crying] [please update] I like it so much The heroine's setting is super sexy and she's the type that makes my heart flutter [shy]

It's so good\(//∇//)\[Admiration][Admiration] The author has updated it a lot! ! ! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Baby, baby, baby, I really love her so much. The details are really well described. It fits my image of the twins very well. The character of the heroine is really not to be loved too much. My family really loves the author for ten thousand years.

I really like it. It is the most realistic HP novel I have ever read. There are no cheats or character changes, but only the delicacy of the heroine. This is the top 1 HP novel I have read so far. They have real characters. It's not love at first sight, but love that grows over time and you don't know where it started. Although the heroine is local, she has the characteristics of a new era woman. The benefits of this costume are also refreshing to me. There is no forced change of character. Some people say why not save Dumbledore, but she is the protagonist and she has no God's perspective. Everything is perfect. [Love] [Love] It is recommended not to read the comments when reading books. It is really good to immerse yourself in them.

It's really great. Because I have had a crush before, I feel particularly immersed in the first half of the story. The unspeakable complex emotions are described in words very aptly, briefly, but also very delicately. The second half makes up for too many regrets left in the original work. Moody, Dobby, Lupin, Tonks, all of them, almost everyone had a happy ending. A good beginning and a good end. It also fulfills my dream as an HP fan. Suddenly, I felt that life was not so difficult after all. Although the world is in tatters, there are always people who can mend it.

It's really good-looking. I think it's the top Gemini story. The heroine is Said's sister. It's neither time travel nor rebirth. There's no system. It's a story about secret love for Gemini. AWSL. Gemini is so handsome. When the heroine is sad, he rides a broomstick to take her to watch the starry sky in the middle of the night. It's really hard not to be moved. Update soon. It should be finished soon. Update soon. I want to watch the ending and watch the sweet wedding @. Check it out.

I really like the heroine's secret love stage, which is as sour and sour as lemon soda, and keeps bubbling out. Although I feel a little distressed and worried (I also experienced a girl's crush period, so I can relate to it), the process of fully accepting the deviant love of oneself and being accepted by the deviant love is really fascinating. Maybe this is the reason why I like to read Gemini novels. The only sad thing is that it is not finished, and it seems to be different from other ones that make up for the shortcomings. Because the heroine is not a scripted one, the whole line is still the same as the original one. I really want to lose the little pearl TAT

It's great. I really like this novel. The descriptions in the article are gentle and delicate, the rhythm is soothing and peaceful, and the emotional transition between Gemini and Shelley is natural, with a sense of narration! Woohoo, I really want to fall in love too ahhhhhhhh (*´з｀*)ﾉ

It's very beautiful. Isn't this the replica of my crush on someone else? [Crying] Bitter and sad I feel so distressed, sweet love is coming soon ♡ I love you so much [love] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

This is really beautiful. It's a rare twin novel. It's also very delicately written. It's a masterpiece. A short story that I read in one day (not enough to watch). Not all people survived, but the butterfly effect also saved a lot of people, but I can get the author because the heroine and the protagonist group are not often together, and she does not attract the professor's attention. Therefore, she is an ordinary student. It is just because she is Cedric's sister and is close to the Weasley family that she can create a butterfly effect and save a few people. However, Dumbledore and the professor's affairs are beyond her reach, so she cannot save them. The character of the heroine is pretty good. She is beautiful and confident, has a strong heart, and has a strong sense of femininity. I really like that the author has included some sense of femininity. It's really great.

It's beautiful, the secret love is real, the passionate love is sweet, and there are no regrets. Their story continues, and our new story is about to begin. Hello 2024

So happy! The emotions are described very delicately! But what makes me sad is that the teacher and the principal left... But this fanfic is about Hufflepuff and Gryffindor, so I can understand it! Personally, I think the only ooc part was when they were watching Quidditch. How could Cedric abandon his sister (the heroine) to find Cho Chang without ensuring her safety? This is the most dramatic part... And it would be great if there could be more sugar in the relationship between the twins and the heroine at school hahaha, overall I am very satisfied!

The angle of this book is very clear and the content is very real. To be honest, the character of the heroine is very similar to mine (just a little bit similar). In the author's book, no matter which world we are in, people's eyes are fixed on women's bodies. If a person's psychology is not strong enough, he may be forced to death. I have only read the first half. The part, overall, is very good. The heroine has the worries of a girl of that age, is sensitive and has low self-esteem, is full of imagination, and can draw people into it deeply. However, compared to Gemini, I personally think Antel is more suitable for the heroine. His long flowing water and gentleness poke me even more. I hope there will be some extra episodes, thank you! (The above only represents my personal views)

The emotions are written very delicately, making it easy for people to get involved. If you have a crush on someone, it will be easy to empathize with them.

The writing is really great and the setting of the twins is not OOC at all. The characters of the others are also maintained very well, and the plot style is also very good. It can naturally intersperse and merge memories with the present. Really love it

This is my second watch. It's very interesting. Some of the plots are a bit vulgar, but I love vulgarity (hey). The heroine is a big heroine but not particularly Mary Sue. The twins are a bit darker than the original. The tacit sharing and slight competition between the twins is particularly good uwu. Because some plots require the quality of the average student at Hogwarts to be written down a bit, but uwu deserves praise for the fact that the second male lead did not use any deceitful means from beginning to end. I really like the twins who are slightly darkened when they protect the heroine - if there are any twins who are darkened, please give me a thumbs up. I will do anything.

I declare this is the most beautiful HP fanfic I have ever seen! And they are twins! ! ! The plot and emotions are well written and the logic is smooth! I'm quite picky, but this one is really nice, I highly recommend it! ! ! Moreover, the original heroine design is also very good. It is not a time-travel type. This type is less popular than time-travel ones, but this book is very interesting to write and the whole content is not long. It is just right👌🏻

Finally let me eat something good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! On the first day I became a doujin girl, I discovered the real charm of doujins. Interspersed between the main plot and the world of the protagonist, I can have a self-contained and complete life of the supporting characters. It can completely make up for the previous difficulties and regrets, and it has a good influence on the Gemini's character. The portrayal of his business acumen, and the sudden description of Shelley's inner emotions were so delicate that I could completely immerse myself in them and completely construct the picture in my mind [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] Thank you, the author Baobao, for taking me to experience their complete story [cry] [cry]

The writing is so good. I really rarely praise a book for being well written, but this book is different from others. From the perspective of secret love, the author has a good grasp of the mentality of the secret admirer and the attitude of the person being secretly admired. From the storyline and the degree of restoration, it is very good. It does not deviate from the original work and movie, but it also has its own ideas. At the same time, it uses a very natural plot and superb writing to bring back those difficult feelings. Very good, really good [Love]

I don't know if I need to control points, but let's give it a four-star rating first! It's really good-looking, a rare pair of essays. The article has a little bit of a butterfly effect and has kicked many people's lunch boxes away. It's really great! Starting with Said at the beginning, the Geminis so far have been saved without any surprises. I'm really happy, and I've kicked a lot of people's lunch boxes away! ! ! ! The heroine is not an all-powerful heartthrob with golden fingers. She is a person who keeps improving and perfecting through a little bit of hard work, and becomes radiant little by little. I really like this process, which is like polishing a diamond! ! ! ! The emotional line is also very smooth. You can feel the sourness of secret love to the sweetness of love. There are also some frustrations caused by the three people? All in all, Gemini smells great! ! ! ! Finally, I really like my wife's article! I hope my wife can update more! ! ! !

[Learned][Learned][Learned] The writing is very good, and I don't feel awkward at all. Moreover, the twins depicted are simply very sultry, very sweet, very sweet, and the whole plot is very real. We will be like Shelley in life. And because the heroine is not traveling through time, she is not reborn, and there is no system. So most of the plot is based on the original work, it is perfect, and the twins are not OOC, they are really flirty, handsome, and very exciting xp The second male lead is also very good. The main role is to promote the emotional development of the male and female protagonists, and he also saves Fred's life later. I can really rewatch it n times. It's really, really, really good. Whether it's plot, writing, or characterization, it's worth watching [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The sour and sweet secret love made me burst into tears. Gemini is really heart-warming. Who knows? I feel so empathetic. Shelley is really brave! The sandwich biscuits are also really delicious, haha, they look so good and I love looking at them.

It mainly talks about secret love from the perspective of the heroine and the emotional entanglement of the twins, with very few plot lines. The heroine's character is very real, there is no cheating. In the early stage, it would be a bit sad to read about the heroine's secret love. In fact, I am looking forward to the heroine and her senior being together...

Update, ball ball The psychology of secret love is well portrayed, but the heroine's counterattack against those who spread rumors and slander her is a bit light. I have finished reading this book after a long time. It is really well written. The heroine's growth, family, friendship, love, and the main plot of HP are all well integrated. What surprised me is the author's portrayal of the character of Casey. There is no pure good person or pure evil person. Worth a look

The twins in this book are so horny! The plot logic is very smooth. I don't understand why the rating is so low. Isn't this much better than some blindly written articles?

This Gemini article is really the most touching I have ever read. The description of Gemini is the most consistent with the original OC. Moreover, the early secret love is also very real. The author's writing style is also very unflattering. This is the only article I have seen where the heroine has a crush on Gemini. But the things Gemini did for Shelley in the early stage are just a bit too exaggerated, but that's not to say it won't work (just a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it). The other things are also very good. This book can really be said to be a hexagonal article. I think a lot of people think this book is a bit short, but I think it's understandable that the author didn't write about the previous years, because if he writes too much about secret love in the early stage, it won't have the same effect in the later stage. Overall, the author really knows how to write (give the author a little red heart) After reading it, I feel that Zundi is very uninteresting. Alas, I want the author to tell the story of Xiao An and Shelley (unfortunately, it is too late)

It feels like a meaningful article, breaking the traditional thoughts on women's clothing. The sentences describing secret love in the previous article are very beautiful. The character of the second male lead is really in love🥰The last few chapters made me cry when I read the battle.

I finally found a double novel. It is actually very well written. The writing style and logic are both online. There are a few times in the early campus life where the heroine is always saved by the hero. There are basically no big flaws. However, the overall shortcomings are not concealed. The author is obviously familiar with the original work and is more friendly to the original novel party, but the process is relatively fast. It is like following the plot at double speed, and there is no particularly big or outrageous golden finger or halo for the heroine. It is not bad. Mainly, there are too few delicious double novels.