Daqin**********

The writing is really messy

The Qin Dynasty should be called the Grinding Terrace, right?

Logical confusion,

The writing is quite domineering, and when it comes to Montaigne's daughter, she feels like she is mentally retarded.

The previous chapter was pretty normal. Chapter 80 started to fill up. I had to stop chirping for a long time before I could attack. I was thinking it was a competition. You move one move and I move slowly. Xiang Yu ambushed the protagonist. He didn't expose the strong man. Where is his IQ? The result? Didn't he become wise? Didn't he say that the Tianren level is very awesome? Even if Xiang Yu escaped, his subordinates could also escape? It would be funny to escape with the help of traps. If traps can defeat heaven and man, the protagonist should commit suicide. Regardless of whether the Gongsun family or the Mo family have traps, this novel is bullshit. The first paragraph is good, but then the comments are turned off. It is really disgusting.

It's such a retarded novel. It's all messy and the words are messed up. It doesn't describe Qin Shihuang's domineering power at all. In it, I only see the protagonist's mental retardation and lust. Although men are not bad at lust, is it interesting to just write about a lust?

The logic is confusing and the time writing is confusing. It's just the studio using Quan Qin's writing to deal with it. Are these kinds of things recommended? [Cover face][cover face]

A bit expensive, but I love it

There are a lot of typos. The 18th prince Hu Hai is either the 18th brother or the 18th brother. The second prince is called the 18th prince and the 18th brother. A lot of them don't match up. The plot is okay.

The writing is too confusing. Fusu is sometimes the eldest brother and sometimes the younger brother. And if you don't call me Young Master, you should also be called Prince, right? What the hell is the young master? Your status will be directly lowered. If you don't understand, don't write it.

I can't stand watching anymore. I feel that the typing is messy and incomprehensible, which completely affects my viewing experience [face covering]

This is the most fucking trashy book I've ever read.

What you wrote was Hammer. It was so uncomfortable to read. Did you eat the first chapter?

It's so confusing. Fusu is the eldest brother, and you say he is the younger brother. Then you say he is the eldest brother. You can only say that this book is confusing. You need to clarify the order of your characters first before talking about it. It made me dizzy.

I can only say that there are too many typos and the meaning is unclear [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

The logic is confusing, there are typos, the sentences don't make sense, the preface and the follower are inconsistent.

It's so messy, I don't know what it is written in a mess, it doesn't have a beginning, it just starts from the middle, I don't know where it was copied from [smiles]

Anything is acceptable, because the writing is indeed pretty good, but if there is a mouse excrement in it, it is not good. I said Rat Shit is the woman in Chapter 24.

It's boring. I know it's a woman's provocation, but I still can't help but ignore it. Sure enough, the protagonist of every book cannot pass the beauty test.

What did you write that was so messed up?

If you can't write a novel, don't write it

A star can experience it himself

What did you write at the beginning?

What a bad book?

Messy, written in a mess

There are so many typos

There are many typos and the writing is very messy.

Not bad, five stars given

The language is not fluent and the expression ability is insufficient. The author should practice the basic skills before publishing articles.

Shouldn't he be called Young Master? What do you call young master?