Long Night****************

It looks good, but I don't know why the rating is so low. It's not like Some authors write system articles where the system appears more than ten or twenty times in each chapter, and the character attributes and panels in the system take up an unknown number of words. Some people think that the protagonist is the system. This book is okay, but there are a few chapters. . .

I lost the bet, hello husbands The plot is exciting and the article is good-looking

It's a good-looking movie. It's a very good Japanese-style western fantasy in Tomato. The plot has ups and downs and the logic is smooth. Especially in the previous part of chasing the husband, it was quite satisfying when the Morning Star team was wiped out. Moreover, the witches are well portrayed, and it can be said that there is really no homogeneity. Everyone's personality is different. It feels better and has better lightning protection. Recommend

Personally I feel it is well written and more interesting than some similar works.

It would be a good idea to turn it into a cartoon, if the author has this idea. This kind of plot is very close to Japanese comics and is easily loved by readers.

This book has a different development on the original path, adding the bond between the witch and the male protagonist. The advancement and ups and downs of the plot are very good. The style is biased toward daily life, but the plot is biased toward adventure. But the writing is really good and has no poisonous points. The characteristics of each witch are highlighted very well. I have just finished the first volume and it is very good. At the end, Cynthia has a bleak feeling like a fat cat in an alley. I am also looking forward to the future plot. The author also promises that there will be no routines. It is more worth reading in Western fantasy.

Good writing, a semi-harem story from another world, no turning back, no virgin

Seeing that it is not poisonous now, the holes dug have been filled, and I feel that there are too many twists and turns, which is quite exciting. It feels like the author has a lot of content and inspiration in his mind, and he can write whatever he thinks of, and he writes it well. I feel that the author likes to write he, and it is very comfortable to read. Even if it is short, it is short. I have finished reading this chapter. There is only one chapter in the new chapter. I will recuperate it first before continuing.

It's true that it opened low and left high. Many of the previous things were foreshadowing. It's better to be patient at the beginning. It's not incomprehensible that there are more negative reviews. Although it is indeed a bit cliché to return as the strongest male protagonist and embrace Emma and the others for no reason, I think this is a way to attract some popularity. Moreover, the supplementary plot is remarkable. I really like the relaxed daily life when everyone gets together. I always feel that my broken soul is slowly being transcended. Regarding the portrayal of the Night King and Eli, the young master and the witches redeem each other quite well. Although I haven't read all the details for a short period of time, I believe that Eli's story has just begun. I hope that Ye Laothier will not miss the mark in the follow-up. I think it is not only to add color to their story, but we also want to realize the fantasy dream of a different world, right? (Ps: Although I admit that the story without the knife does lack some charm, but this does not mean I call you an old thief [laughs awkwardly])

It's really pretty. Guys, don't ignore it because of the ratings. If you don't click in and take a look, how will you know if it's good or not?

My favorite chapter of this book is the day-to-day part. The appearance of one witch after another is really fascinating. At the same time, the portrayal of different witches is also distinctive, which allows me to easily bring my favorite characters into my mind, and at the same time, I have a deep understanding of the characters around the protagonist. The color portrayal, whether it is the image of the Imperial Dragon King or the difference between the before and after the insect queen, is very clear, and you can also feel it. What I feel is insufficient is the in-depth introduction of the witch, and the characters introduced in the early stage are not well explained and cited, thus leaving a hole. At the same time, the daily line pushed back the main line to lead to the second genre of witches. When the empire was destroyed by the Silver Leaf King, more settings were introduced, but there was still not enough foreshadowing or explanation, which caused me to feel that the pace suddenly accelerated while reading. For example, the story between the elf and the old president can be summarized briefly and then lead to the plot of the previous battle, or the memories of the witches. The main reason for the story is that it can be updated quickly [smile] [smile] [smile] Of course, it does not rule out that the author has his own more profound considerations and plans. My suggestion is that the author can write more daily stories, with more memories, stories and new encounters. I hope the author can regain his glory and write this book to the end. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's really good in terms of light novels, at least much better than those Japanese toilet paper comics. To be honest, western fantasy and this one are only three books that can catch my eye on Tomato.

This book is really a good-looking Western fantasy novel. It can be said to be a masterpiece in Tomato. There is no poisonous point or lightning in the whole book. The plot is interlocking and the foreshadowing is filled in. The character creation of the male protagonist and the female protagonist is so good that I can't say anything. Moreover, the writing style of this book is very soothing, just like that of Riqing, but it also has a sense of fate. The plot is ups and downs and not dull. It is a very good novel. The third advantage is that its world view and settings are classic but not cliché. It is not easy to find this book. After all, this genre is so lacking. It is a real treasure. It doesn't matter if it's a little slower. I hope the author will write well and not end up messing up, and the quality will be good. Come on!

It's okay, five stars. At least he's not like other male protagonists in other worlds who know nothing about the people around him. This panel is still okay. The identity of the maid and the people around him can be known, which is great.

It's very well written, but I was almost misled by some of the comments.

It looks good. Although the creativity may make readers guess, the writing style and the overall grasp of the plot are very high. Simply put, it is very enjoyable to watch. The image of each witch is fully portrayed and very three-dimensional. The plot is also relaxed and relaxed. The tension and relaxed atmosphere are switched very well. So far, I personally think it is full score. I am I read it all in two days and couldn't stop at all. Then I will express my views on the death of Bug Girl to prevent some readers who read the comments from missing this good book. Bug Girl's death is part of Eli's growth. It is a punishment for him as a chess player. Because there is a very powerful witch around him, he is too confident in the entire direction. Witch They are not omnipotent, and there are things they cannot do. They should be very cautious in every step when the information is unequal. Take the second volume of King Power as an example. Eli is in the dark, and the eldest prince and the auxiliary are in the open. The latter has no idea who he is fighting against. He easily created public opinion and alienated Chilong. If we stand in the eyes of the eldest prince. From a perspective, it would definitely be very frustrating. The death of the insect girl this time is also the same. Eli knew nothing about Silver Leaf and had no idea what her thoughts were, so he suffered this loss. Shouldn't he be so confident when he was incapable of "overturning" the chess game. The death of the insect girl may also be a breaking point between him and the King of the Night. Of course, I also hope that Bug Girl can be resurrected. After all, the author also used a certain amount of pen and ink to describe the process of Bug Girl transforming from a creature to a human. I hope the author can give a good ending.

I thought it was good. It took me two days to click on the home page before I clicked in. I read more than a dozen chapters and thought it was very good, so I kept following it. The ending of Morning Star Guild is also satisfying both physically and mentally, and the encounter between the protagonist and the witch is like collecting illustrated books (it feels very fulfilling [laughs crookedly]) and the author's output is also good. All in all, in short. I think it's OK.

It's a great book that makes people read it. The writing style is very good and it's refreshing. It's very comfortable to read. I personally think it's a masterpiece in Tomato. Come on, author, I hope I can see the ending in my lifetime (it's acceptable to be slower, but I hope it won't be a eunuch (◠◠)).

The plots so far are very exciting. The protagonist is not a brainless Madonna, but is decisive in killing. What's more, before there is no so-called system and witches, he has made his own reputation in the Adventurers Association as a blacksmith. It is enough to show that the author is still very good. I hope to continue to work hard and look forward to the next plot [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

It's a very good novel. When I read the words, I feel like I'm watching an anime. The ideas are clear and the characters are distinct. Although there is a system that everyone hates, the advancement of the plot does not completely rely on the system. The plot itself is very interesting. Highly recommended! Also, update quickly, author! ! !

It looks good, I like darkness the most🖤, I like masks💔❤️Red is destruction💙Blue is indifference💚Green is disguise🤍White is nothingness💛Yellow is warning💗Pink is hypocrisy💜Purple is mystery🧡Orange is anger🖤Black is destination.🥳🥳

To be honest, the writing is good, but I still like to read more refreshing articles. What can I say, I always feel a little frustrated after reading them. Until the latest chapter, the protagonist is just a toy to be manipulated. Although I can see signs of getting stronger, people with reading habits like me probably won't be able to save the time when the protagonist is truly invincible. But overall, it's still good. Come on, author, I've picked up this book first. [Full] [full]

A very interesting book with a lot of foreshadowing. I hope the author can fill in the holes and look forward to the plot behind it.

It's a pretty good read. Although the guild slap-in-the-face plot at the beginning can't help but feel a bit disgusting due to cliche, but it doesn't have to dig holes with other types until it ends hard in the end. This book is quite good to fill in the holes. I consider myself to be a rather picky reader, and it is rare for me to read a book for such a long time. Come on a. It is easy to dig a hole but difficult to fill it. It is easy to explode by expanding so many worldviews at once. But still, come on!

It's very good to watch. The male protagonist is decisive when he should be. He can't walk without seeing a woman. He kills women when they need to be killed. There is no annoying Japanese Asashi who hurts his own people. He is worthy of the witches' unreserved love for him. The plot is unique and exciting. I can give it 5 stars.

I've been reading this for so long, and to be honest, it's too late to give this five stars. It's really good-looking, and it suits my taste. Although the update frequency is a bit slow now, the author must have some special reasons. [Like] [Like] [Like] Like to support it. I look forward to the reunion of Eli and the witches.

Each character is well created and the foreshadowing is well laid out. I just feel that I can somehow treat others as my family. I was taken away by a very simple stroke. It feels a bit weird (ice dragon and elf kid). Please update more. Damn it, I saw later that you stopped updating. Come on, brother, can you update? It's so well written, don't stop.

The article is very well written. I think it is very profound and the plot is detailed. Elodie's side story is very touching. Everyone in the witch group has different personalities and everyone has their own past and emotions. Overall it's great! I like it very much [blowing kiss] The overall plot in the early stage is a bit vague, and it may be a bit confusing at first. But later on, when the whole story is connected in series, it will be easy to understand.

Whether it's the main plot or the branch plot, I still feel very good, and the character portrayal is also very good. It's just that the update time makes me a little panicked. Although there are a few people watching, please don't mess up the author.

It was good to read, but I found it was interrupted in the middle and stopped reading because I hated the feeling of not being able to finish it after reading the last part. The author has updated it and I am ready to come back and read it again. Is the author busy with something recently? It would be nice to send a notice or something so that readers can have a clear understanding [cry][cry][cry]@