Interpenetration of Two Worlds: I Am Just a Magician

Not bad, the rhythm is soft. I hope there will be more updates and not too many updates [laughter]

Overall it's pretty good. No licking, no erection, no sex. It's good. The only bad thing is that the heroine's appearance is a bit sudden, and Hermione's affection is also a bit sudden. There's nothing else, I like it very much.

The writing is very good, but so far, there have been three female characters who have no blood relationship and whose appearance is emphasized. I haven't read Chapter 20 yet... I don't want a female protagonist. I will comment later when I see that there is no female protagonist or there are ambiguous situations with multiple female characters [shy][shy][shy] It's okay, except that there are too many female characters. I'm already having an affair with the eleven-year-old, and I'm very nice to other beauties. I get all kinds of coincidences, all kinds of help, good guy, and a high-end central air conditioner, right? A harem is not like a harem, and a single heroine is not like a single heroine. If it were a harem or a single heroine, or no cp, it would be quite speechless. To be honest, I can't imagine what love is like for primary school students. No matter how precocious it is, it's not like that at eleven years old [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

Magic and entertainment, two worlds that cross each other. It's very novel. I haven't read Harry Potter, so I don't feel the poisonous points mentioned in some comment sections. And I don't really dislike the girls throwing themselves into their arms. To me, it would be good if he could write the stories brought about by entertainment well and write the magic carefully. This book may get three or four stars in the eyes of book lovers with good taste, but it avoids my poisonous points. My senses are okay, so I give it five stars. Every story should have its perfect ending, I hope the author keeps writing it. Yes, I gave it to my granddaughter not long after I finished speaking. One star will be deducted.

It is a series of stories about an ordinary person who values fame and fortune and suddenly gains the ability to travel between Harry Potter and reality. The realistic plot is very poorly written and I don't really like it.

The plot is interesting, I encourage you, I'm not very good at commenting, I just hope it won't be unfinished or discontinued, I beg the author to make more chapters, it's not interesting at all. The themes and plots at the beginning are quite novel and interesting, but the pace becomes faster later on, and it still looks a bit chaotic. The most important poisonous point is that Tang Lin falls in love with different people in HP and the real world at the same time. At the beginning, it is written that he and Amelia are sweet and affectionate. Later, when he founded Future Wings, the relationship between the two was forcibly turned into an ordinary partner. , And then backhand Zhang Li in the real world to take over, and then the writing of Tang Lin collapsed. To be honest, I was disgusted. I failed to live up to my expectations. I thought it would be better to hold on to the fast-paced part, but the response was indeed such a crappy article. Goodbye, the author. I hope you and everyone will get better and better, get rich, and have a happy Mid-Autumn Festival. This star is given to you.

The story is very interesting and matches the two worlds well. Each has its own points of view, and the addition of characters is not offensive or abrupt. If it can continue like this, it will be a very good work.

I haven't read it for long. To be honest, around the time of the drama, I started skipping chapters. After jumping to the point where Hitomi absorbs the golden light and awakens, I decided to write a book review. First of all, the author's creativity is great, but the performance in the real world is not as exciting as he wanted to get. Instead, he gets points through literature and art, which can be said to allow the protagonist to gain points in the magical world. The ability has become less important, which is a bit self-defeating martial arts; secondly, the emotional lines written by the author in the real world are a bit unclear. All the important and unimportant girls are constantly highlighted without revealing or hinting who she will be in the future. In the magical world, there is only a little girl, eleven years old, falling in love with her, is there any sense of accomplishment? Third, the sister and brother in the orphanage appeared once. That Tang Sen was completely the protagonist's tool. Apart from being the protagonist's assistant, I didn't see any family affection at all. Fourth, the people around me gradually changed from a help to a burden, but the book did not change it. Every reader's favorite supporting character has turned into a hated supporting character. Based on these points, I think I can leave temporarily, but I still admire the author's imagination and creativity, and the writing is smooth, with foreshadowing and subtle threads. I am very much looking forward to the author's next masterpiece!

This book, so far, has not impressed me. The character of the protagonist is quite good, and the two worlds feel different. I felt tense when I watched Harry Potter, but relaxed when I watched it now. I really love this book and recommend it wholeheartedly.

The writing is very good and the subject matter is quite good. However, it is a bit difficult to grasp the two worlds. If the plot content of the two worlds is too long or too short, it will make people's senses worse. It feels like a test of writing skills. I can only say that the author should work harder.

The book is good, and the writing is generally not wrong. I am most afraid of the kind that when it comes to women, they wish to add the adjectives of elementary school. It is better to have a harem without a harem, which is really terrible. This book is written more realistically and the plot is better interspersed. Personally, I think the magic part is a bit too simple and not as realistic as it is full of reality.

Intuitive feeling: good-looking The plot of this world is light-hearted and relaxing. The magic plot is tense and exciting, but it doesn't make people feel excessive or monotonous. Occasionally, there are some interesting little plot twists. This is a degree of relaxation I don't know how to describe the writing style, but in the eyes of an old bookworm like me, it is relatively smooth and natural. I feel very comfortable whether reading or listening to books. The only pity is that I am too short of money to give the author more support. I sincerely wish the author a smooth life and a happy family. This will save me some trivial matters and give me more chapters.

To be honest, I think all the storylines and content are very good. But really, the love line in the Blue Star world is a bit unacceptable. Zhang Li is supposed to be the heroine of the plot, but suddenly she becomes a little birdie, and it is very disgusting, which makes people feel a little uncomfortable. On the contrary, the love line in the Harry Potter world seems much more natural. Although they are in two worlds, their hearts are the same and their souls are the same. Loving two people feels a bit like having a harem. This makes people doubt the character of the male protagonist and find reasons for themselves to avoid problems. But this is still a very good book. The story content is very novel and reasonable. The intelligence of the male protagonist can be felt from the reader's perspective, and it does not give people a very stiff feeling.

Not bad, two heroines (unacceptable, avoid the thunder) (/ω＼) The protagonist has three memory lines (ﾉωﾉ) The first one is originally from the world and does not belong to the main line, (///ˊㅿˋ///) The second one is about a parallel universe, ヽﾐ ´∀｀ﾐノ＜ The third line is the world of HP (Harry Potter), both of which belong to the main line (#／.＼#) The subject matter is very novel and the content is very clear, (´∀｀)♡ I like the character of the protagonist very much. He is a little lazy, very sunny and gentle, and he is also engaged in a literary career. ♡＾▽＾♡ It's a pity that I usually watch movies without CP, otherwise five stars would be absolutely fine (∂ω∂) Come on, author(*'▽'*)♪ Forgot to mention, one from each side of the world

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong's Q picture for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Other than that. I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain in Picture A, "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character descriptions are spot-on!

It's so exciting [crying][crying][crying] I really like the part at Hogwarts I just don't like the relationship between the male protagonist and the two little girls. They already get along very well in the HP world, so why do they have to add another one in this world? And it's inexplicable. Originally, everyone had already accepted the HP heroine, but then there was this inexplicable feeling that they couldn't understand.

Well, this is the latest chapter that I have seen so far. Among the many HP fans in Tomato, it is considered to be average. There is nothing poisonous, but there is also no big explosive point. The current situation looks at HP learning magic, playing entertainment in this world, and entertainment is developing in all aspects, but it still has a lot of overlap with other entertainment, and it is nothing more than a routine. The overall feeling to me is like one protagonist in two books. And currently, each character has a relatively distinct personality, which is a good point. I hope the author can write better in the future.

It's very exciting and brilliant, and the descriptions of both worlds are very fascinating. But the love shown here is indeed not very harmonious, and it is a pity to have a hasty ending! ! ! Why doesn't anyone appreciate such an excellent work? 2023.12.19 Guimao. Jiazi. Xinhai. Jihai Completed Linchen

I think it's okay. I haven't finished watching it completely, but I've watched 80% of it. I just felt a little tired after watching it. And the story line on Harry Potter's side is, let's put it this way, not exciting enough. So I skipped a lot of chapters. In contrast, in the real world, I am more willing to read a little bit, but it is a little off track. I think it will mainly follow the magician line, and other novels, songs, etc. Can be cut out as they are superfluous. It seems that I have half a foot in the entertainment industry, but for the sake of personality, I force myself to stay on the boundary of the entertainment industry. Wouldn't it be better to have a bit of mystery? Either exaggerated, crazy like a clown, with a touch of Gotham, more exciting.

The subject matter is novel, the content is good, and the writing is okay Deducting this point does not mean that one on each side is bad (although I still hope that Blue Star will be single here). The main feeling should not be Zhang Li. Before Tianzhi's birth, Zhang Li gave me a pure feeling. Although he was tied to the protagonist, he had some affection for the protagonist, but he still worked hard towards the eight items. But after Tianzhi's birth, he was like a "little girl" who fell in love, chasing the protagonist, and it was not so pure (I don't know if I expressed it clearly)

The writing is actually okay, the story line and outline are quite perfect. Although I didn't say it felt like it was written, the first part is still very exciting, but since you are a eunuch, then I can only lose one star [face covering]

I feel that this novel is quite good and the subject matter is quite novel. Maybe I have never read this kind of book before. The main thing is that this book is not a mindless cool novel, it has some thoughts, and it feels like it has depth of thinking. Although there are not many, some of them are more interesting to read, unlike those cool novels where the plot is very cliche. This style has its own thoughts and a little thinking, which I feel is better. I still prefer this kind of novel with my own thinking, I think it is very good. Of course, my judgment may not be correct, but I think it is more appropriate. In Chapter 44, the self-awareness of the character Zhang Li and some questions about the protagonist. I prefer this kind of plot, which contains some cognitive thoughts and my own reflection on social humanity and morality. I feel like I see other people's personal experiences. I can listen to other people's thoughts and reflect on my own feelings. Novels with this kind of content are generally not bad. Anyway, I feel that this novel is good. This is my personal opinion. This is my review of this novel. Of course, it only represents my personal opinion. Furthermore, I hope the author can do more [please update], [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] Finally, I hope that all book friends can recommend some books of this kind to me. Such books are relatively hard to find. Thank you all!

In my opinion, this book is currently one of the top HP fan works. Not only on this platform, but also among works of the same type on other websites, it is also very good (maybe because its setting is more to my liking [snicker][snicker]). The writing is mature and smooth, and the depiction of the main characters is relatively clear. It is a work worth recommending. I hope the author can work hard and work hard. (ง•̀_•́)งAlthough it looks good, it is really a bit short [punch out] [punch out] Hurry up and update while maintaining the level [eat melon] [eat melon]

The writing is quite good, but the author is right. Zhang Li's image is not established well, and the connection between the two worlds is not natural, and it ends in a hurry. The main reason why I gave it five stars is that the subject matter and writing method are novel and attract readers' interest in reading. By the way, the relationship between Amelia and the protagonist is not very clear, which is also a problem, but it covers all the flaws, and overall it is good and worth recommending.

It is a very good novel with a very novel form and good writing skills. However, the writing skills for writing about reality are far inferior to those for writing about magic, which often creates a big gap between the two worlds. I saw Chapter 231, and there are no big poisonous points so far. Small is indeed a bit 1. Some HP settings have been changed, maybe because I don't understand enough, maybe for the convenience of writing, but it does not affect the reading experience. 2. Description of emotional lines. There is nothing wrong with the relationship in the HP world. There is foreshadowing and we get along, although we haven't expressed our love yet (so far in Chapter 231). But there is a big problem with the actual emotional line. Personally, there are actually two best ways to write about love: one is to briefly touch on it, as a condiment to the main text (limited to non-romantic texts); the other is to lay the groundwork with a certain amount of words and ink to cultivate daily relationships. However, the actual emotional line is not well laid out. Before showing love, the protagonist's attitude is actually cold. Suddenly showing "love", it is more like the protagonist being coerced by a wave of waves to love, rather than loving because of "love". It seems that the protagonist is inexplicably strange and a bit scumbag However, overall, this book is still a good book on Tomato. I hope the author will work harder and create better works

It's a very interesting HP fanfic. It not only satisfies the fantasy of the magical world, but also connects with reality through extreme sports. When I saw skydiving on Mount Everest, I also felt a sense of climbing to appreciate the beauty of nature. I saw the male protagonist supporting the female protagonist from behind, transforming into a unicorn and spending time with the female protagonist in the snow-capped mountains. It was really touching when I sang, and I couldn't help but imagine that I would have had the same pleasure of challenging my limits with the company of my close friends, but it was a pity that I didn't have a good time, and I could only end it hastily. Unfortunately, it would be better if I could see the complete story, and it would be another world with a wider experience.

This novel is actually very good-looking, and the setting is particularly powerful. The male protagonist exists in two worlds at the same time, one is the world of ordinary people, and the other is the magical world of Harry Potter. Therefore, this novel actually has two female protagonists, one world and one female protagonist. Although I don't like this kind of one male with multiple female protagonists, The author is very good at writing it. If you read it as two novels at the same time, it is still very interesting. Unfortunately, it only writes about the male protagonist going to the first grade, and then only writes an outline. I hope the author can go back and write about the Harry Potter world one day, because the male protagonist in the author's works is so handsome and cool. He is not abusive and does not kill everyone.

The male protagonist travels back and forth between the Blue Star world and the Harry Potter world, staying for seven days at a time. After learning magic, you can perform magic in the real world and have strong abilities. You can become an Internet celebrity, travel, act in TV series, participate in variety shows, and work as a national agent. In the wizarding world, he brought modern business and political ideas to Hogwarts, guiding the direction of Voldemort's rule. He was taught by two generations of Dark Lords, and was valued and loved by various professors in the first grade. There are two female protagonists in the two worlds. The relationship between the male protagonist and the trio is not closely connected, and they have many identities and are very powerful. I actually wrote a follow-up outline for the ending. I feel like I was only about half way through the book, not finished at all. The author said that he gave up the book because of the dismal data.

Overall, it's okay. It's cool to be the only magician in the real world, and it's cool to be the master of learning in the HP world. There are only a few travel plots where I always like to express some truths, but the word count is questionable. The overall plot is pretty good.

The writing style is still good, the story is well told, and the overall explanation is given in the end. It's just that the setting wasn't very good at the beginning and it started to get dragged down later. For example, the setting of 7 days to travel through time and space is too short. A plane ends before it has made much progress. In fact, the countdown timeline should be extended later, because the level of one's own life has been sublimated, and the stay should be longer until a critical value is reached. Then finally break through to the point where they can freely interpenetrate. Otherwise, the short emotional line would be unsatisfying and unjustifiable. Halfway through watching it, I thought that magic would be shown in major tourist attractions around the world. The Statue of Liberty in the United States moved and waved a large torch. The talent show used a changing room to transform into a character from Marvel DC and use magic to show off super powers... Xi'an Qinhuang Soldiers and Horses The terracotta warriors practice military formations, the Ming Dynasty sinks its ships in the South China Sea, and mirages are used to recreate the scenes of Zheng He's voyages to the West... It's a pity that magic can be used to achieve many big scene magic in movies and TV shows, but in the book I only see a miniature of martial arts.