Traveling Between Two Worlds: I'm Just a Magician

Not bad, the rhythm is soft. I hope there will be more updates and not too many updates [laughter]

Overall it's pretty good. No licking, no erection, no sex. It's good. The only bad thing is that the heroine's appearance is a bit sudden, and Hermione's affection is also a bit sudden. There's nothing else, I like it very much.

The writing is very good, but so far, there have been three female characters who have no blood relationship and whose appearance is emphasized. I haven't read Chapter 20 yet... I don't want a female protagonist. I will comment later when I see that there is no female protagonist or there are ambiguous situations with multiple female characters [shy][shy][shy] It's okay, except that there are too many female characters. I'm already having an affair with the eleven-year-old, and I'm very nice to other beauties. I get all kinds of coincidences, all kinds of help, good guy, and a high-end central air conditioner, right? A harem is not like a harem, and a single heroine is not like a single heroine. If it were a harem or a single heroine, or no cp, it would be quite speechless. To be honest, I can't imagine what love is like for primary school students. No matter how precocious it is, it's not like that at eleven years old [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

Magic and entertainment, two worlds that cross each other. It's very novel. I haven't read Harry Potter, so I don't feel the poisonous points mentioned in some comment sections. And I don't really dislike the girls throwing themselves into their arms. To me, it would be good if he could write the stories brought about by entertainment well and write the magic carefully. This book may get three or four stars in the eyes of book lovers with good taste, but it avoids my poisonous points. My senses are okay, so I give it five stars. Every story should have its perfect ending, I hope the author keeps writing it. Yes, I gave it to my granddaughter not long after I finished speaking. One star will be deducted.

The plot is interesting, I encourage you, I'm not very good at commenting, I just hope it won't be unfinished or discontinued, I beg the author to make more chapters, it's not interesting at all. The themes and plots at the beginning are quite novel and interesting, but the pace becomes faster later on, and it still looks a bit chaotic. The most important poisonous point is that Tang Lin falls in love with different people in HP and the real world at the same time. At the beginning, it is written that he and Amelia are sweet and affectionate. Later, when he founded Future Wings, the relationship between the two was forcibly turned into an ordinary partner. , And then backhand Zhang Li in the real world to take over, and then the writing of Tang Lin collapsed. To be honest, I was disgusted. I failed to live up to my expectations. I thought it would be better to hold on to the fast-paced part, but the response was indeed such a crappy article. Goodbye, the author. I hope you and everyone will get better and better, get rich, and have a happy Mid-Autumn Festival. This star is given to you.

It is a series of stories about an ordinary person who values fame and fortune and suddenly gains the ability to travel between Harry Potter and reality. The realistic plot is very poorly written and I don't really like it.

The story is very interesting and matches the two worlds well. Each has its own points of view, and the addition of characters is not offensive or abrupt. If it can continue like this, it will be a very good work.

I haven't read it for long. To be honest, around the time of the drama, I started skipping chapters. After jumping to the point where Hitomi absorbs the golden light and awakens, I decided to write a book review. First of all, the author's creativity is great, but the performance in the real world is not as exciting as he wanted to get. Instead, he gets points through literature and art, which can be said to allow the protagonist to gain points in the magical world. The ability has become less important, which is a bit self-defeating martial arts; secondly, the emotional lines written by the author in the real world are a bit unclear. All the important and unimportant girls are constantly highlighted without revealing or hinting who she will be in the future. In the magical world, there is only a little girl, eleven years old, falling in love with her, is there any sense of accomplishment? Third, the sister and brother in the orphanage appeared once. That Tang Sen was completely the protagonist's tool. Apart from being the protagonist's assistant, I didn't see any family affection at all. Fourth, the people around me gradually changed from a help to a burden, but the book did not change it. Every reader's favorite supporting character has turned into a hated supporting character. Based on these points, I think I can leave temporarily, but I still admire the author's imagination and creativity, and the writing is smooth, with foreshadowing and subtle threads. I am very much looking forward to the author's next masterpiece!

This book, so far, has not impressed me. The character of the protagonist is quite good, and the two worlds feel different. I felt tense when I watched Harry Potter, but relaxed when I watched it now. I really love this book and recommend it wholeheartedly.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong's Q picture for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Other than that. I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain in Picture A, "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character descriptions are spot-on!