During the Republic of China, there were wars and wars.
A decisive and decisive general.
Met a cold teacher.
I healed him the first time I saw him.
"Sir, your wound is bleeding. Do you need me to bandage it for you?"
"If you don't need it, the door is over there!" After saying this, Xiao Nan took a step back and pointed in the direction of the door.
Jin Bei covered the wound, the blood on his lips was gone, he raised his eyes and glanced at the slightly indifferent person, sat on the bed and said in a deep voice, "I'll trouble you then!"
Reader comments
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Super nice novel
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Can you use less exclamation points when the character speaks? Because it can be a bit distracting, except for the more exciting ones, you can just use periods instead. Using too many exclamation marks will make the tone very exciting and intense, which will make the entire article's speaking style more exciting and less gentle. I think it can be improved (personally, the author does not need to use it).
Overall, the overall structure of the article is acceptable, and it's worth reading.
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Something's wrong, it seems like there's going to be abuse
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Beautifully written article
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Hohohohohohohohohohoho, author, I love you, please don't abuse me too much, abuse me a little, abuse me a little is fine, I am a little sadistic, I am happy, I am abusing my life a lot.
Super nice novel
Very beautiful, the teacher Qing Leng is very gentle, commonly known as a white rose. Shanbei is so gentle to Xiao Nan. To be honest, I envy every bit of their lives. This novel can be discovered by more people, you can go and take a look.
It's good and beautiful. Even though the night mode is turned on, the teacher's writing is still so dazzling. Even though I downloaded the National Anti-Fraud Center app, I was deceived by the teacher.
Can you use less exclamation points when the character speaks? Because it can be a bit distracting, except for the more exciting ones, you can just use periods instead. Using too many exclamation marks will make the tone very exciting and intense, which will make the entire article's speaking style more exciting and less gentle. I think it can be improved (personally, the author does not need to use it). Overall, the overall structure of the article is acceptable, and it's worth reading.
It's very interesting. Come on, the author. Come on!
It looks great. I'll update it soon. I'm looking forward to it [Love] [Love]
It's so beautiful. Good cheers for the author. I hope more people can see it (´,,•ω•,,)♡Yes
Something's wrong, it seems like there's going to be abuse
Super beautiful, I like it very much
It's beautiful, I hope I won't be be in the end
Write quickly! ! ! Come on! ^O^
"Author (press and hold the remove bookshelf button) I advise you to be more sensible (turn a backflip) and sweeten it for me (eyes fierce)
Beautifully written article
Don't be cruel, although I know that love in the Republic of China is very cruel, so please be gentle, otherwise I will cry and be out of breath, and I will die, woo woo woo